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[求助] 9.28要考了,今天才写的第一篇独立作文,跪求各位神仙哥哥姐姐狂拍 [复制链接]

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发表于 2008-9-24 01:18:16 |显示全部楼层
9。28就要考了,这个是今天写的第一篇独立作文,希望各位大侠拍砖,谢谢了

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are busy doing different things that they can do few things well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nowadays, some people hold the opinion that one could deal with different things well even he/she has many things to do. Others, however, believes that one could not handle many different tasks wonderfully. Personally, I would prefer the idea that one could not manage everything when he/she is busy doing different things.
The main reason is that one would be more likely to make mistakes when he/she has to dispose many different things. When one must finish more missions at a certain time, the time to do one mission would become less. In such situation, one might have little time to consider every aspects of a mission deeply and optimize a solution of the problem. As a result, one might possibly make a wrong decision. For example, a chemist operates many different reactions at the same time. He may have no time to optimize reaction methods and concentrate on the different phenomena of different reactions. Also he may record some wrong data. Finally, he may draw a wrong conclusion of some reactions
Another reason is that one might be in ill health after a long period of disposing a large amount of different work. For instance, one might want to settle every matter in a good form. When he/she must work out more jobs, one would spend more time to accomplish these things. When returning home, one might go to bed quickly to relieve and relax himself/herself. One's health would become bad because he/she leave little time to do exercise.

In addition, one might treat with every matter perfectly if one is not busy with different work. One may have more time to examine different solutions of the problem and compare results to achieve a best method or process of solving the problem. One can enjoy himself/herself by watching movies or playing basketball at his free time. One can also learn new knowledge from book and Internet and improve his/her skill and ability in his/her field.

We may reach the conclusion that people would do few things well when they are busy with different things.

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发表于 2008-9-24 22:57:52 |显示全部楼层
自己顶起来,等好人帮改文

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