comeon 小组 -- ly8768 10.27 作业

ly8768UID: 2452066

你认为接下来20年汽车的使用会不会减少？2006 年10 月8 日技术进步类

The problems caused by cars such as pollutions and traffic jams have been manifest in the current era with the prosperity of automobiles. Meantime with the development of other sorts of vehicles involving airplanes and high-speed trains, here comes the heated prediction that the number of cars will diminish in the next score years. In my perspective, however, I cannot agree with this idea for the following reasons.

Firstly, enhancement of economy especially that in the developing countries will lead to the increasing use of cars. The prosperity of economy can bring more money available to denizens and consequently they can afford a car. Because of its convenience and fashion, a major group of people will prefer to buy a car. What has happened in China in last decades years would best illustrate my point. According to a report, there were only around 20,000 cars in Beijing in 1979; nevertheless after the policy of reformation and opening is put into effect- which contributes to China enjoying an economy boost- more than two million automobiles are running in Beijing. It will be the same in the other developing countries including India, Brazil for their promotion of economy. In this manner, hardly can anyone deny the fact that the demand of cars will increase in the following twenty years.

The second reason why I maintain that there will be a rising number of cars is because motorcars are essential to people in the foreseeable future. It is true that other types of vehicles including aeroplanes and trains have been improved, yet it cannot cease automobiles pervading into the society for their special merits. For instance, if a person plans to travel to another place about 20 miles away, cars would absolutely be the best choice by reason of its convenience. Moreover, it is impossible to establish an airport and train station in all regions of a nation especially in the remote areas. In this condition, cars could be the only vehicle for residents to choose. Considering their advantages, the use of cars would not fall down.

Admittedly, the side effect of cars bounds their application in an expanding level, yet the propelled technologies will compromise such drawbacks. Conventional engines that rely on fuel will give ways to new generation of driving system powered by solar energy and electricity by the efforts of scientists in future. As a result, the environment polluted by exhaust gases will be ameliorated. Problems with traffic jams could also be solved by the improvement of highway systems.

Based on the analysis above, because of the development of economy, advanced technologies applied in cars and their advantage of convenience, hardly can I be convinced by the contention that the number of automobiles will diminish in the next two decades of years.

gjunUID: 2537391

The problems caused by cars such as pollutions and traffic jams have been manifest (manifested) in the current era with the prosperity of automobiles. (我觉得有了with the prosperity of automobiles前面的caused by cars就可以省掉了) Meantime with the development of other sorts of vehicles involving airplanes and high-speed trains, here comes the heated prediction that the number of cars will diminish in the next score years. In my perspective, however, I cannot agree with this idea for the following reasons.
Firstly, enhancement of economy especially that in the developing countries will lead to the increasing use of cars. The prosperity of economy can bring more money available to denizens and consequently they can afford a car. Because of its convenience and fashion, a major group of people will prefer to buy a car. What has happened in China in last decades years would best illustrate my point. According to a report, there were only around 20,000 cars in Beijing in 1979; nevertheless after the policy of reformation and opening is(was) put into effect- which contributes(has contributed) to China enjoying an economy boost- more than two million automobiles are running in Beijing. It will be the same in the other developing countries including India, Brazil for their promotion of economy. In this manner, hardly can anyone deny the fact that the demand of cars will increase in the following twenty years.
The second reason why I maintain that there will be a rising number of cars is because motorcars are essential to people in the foreseeable future. It is true that other types of vehicles including aeroplanes and trains have been improved, yet it cannot cease automobiles pervading into the society for their special merits. For instance, if a person plans to travel to another place about 20 miles away, cars would absolutely be the best choice by reason of its convenience. Moreover, it is impossible to establish an airport(airports) and train station(s) in all regions of a nation especially in the remote areas. In this condition, cars could be the only (过于武断了，个人觉preferable好点)vehicle for residents to choose. Considering their advantages, the use of cars would not fall down.
Admittedly, the side effect of cars bounds their application in an expanding level, yet the propelled technologies will compromise such drawbacks. Conventional engines that rely on fuel will give ways to new generation of driving system powered by solar energy and electricity by the efforts of scientists in future. As a result, the environment polluted by exhaust gases will be ameliorated. Problems with traffic jams could also be solved by the improvement of highway systems.
Based on the analysis above, because of the development of economy, advanced technologies applied in cars and their advantage of convenience, hardly can I be convinced by the contention that the number of automobiles will diminish in the next two decades of years.

每次看楼主的文章都受益匪浅，同样都是写的差不多的论点，论法却比我强悍许多，值得学习。

ly8768UID: 2452066

谢谢你，不过我是不限时写的，所以可能想的会多点～