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发表于 2008-11-1 10:35:04 |显示全部楼层
In the realm of biology, scientists make a mass of achievements in the study of animals. Nevertheless a school of people question that it is quite absurd to allocate a large quantity of money in animals because human beings would not benefit from researches in animals. As far as I am concerned, however, I cannot agree with this point. Virtually study of animals can help us to learn human nature by reason that to some extent, we share some natures with animals.

Firstly, both animals and mankind will show loves to their families. Hardly could we deny the fact that maternal love existing in animals. According to report, a team of scientists are confused with the scenario that a cow would rather to struggle with a group of wolves until her death than choose to escape. However, after the group of wolves leave, these scientists found several little cows hidden in bushes a few meters away and they are touched by the great maternal love of the mother cow. Here comes another story that a mother donates one of her kidney to his son for organ transplant, which will save her son's life. The two examples indicate the same sacrifice of both animals and human resulting from loves. Consequently the researches of animals will be a great help for better understanding the nature of human beings.

When it comes to the level of collaboration, it is the same. It is well known to us that animals immigrate together in Africa. This sort of immigration in group plays a significant role in resistance of attacks from other carnivores. People would also collaborate with one another when faced problems. This reminds me of cooperation in Sichuan Earthquake in China this year. Millions of foods, medicines as well as equipments are conveyed to Sichuan province from other regions. We also know that tens of thousands of denizens in other states provide a warm hand to residents in south Florida that suffered from Hurricane Katrina. Therefore, the conclusion is acceptable that the study of animals cooperating would provide us with a method to learn that of our mankind.

Additionally, studies on competition of animals would help us to learn that of human beings. Animals could compete for spouses, foods and other resources, while people compete for careers and profits. As a result, psychologists focusing on this behavior of human beings could share the benefits of the studies on animals.

In sum, because of the same qualities between human and animals, I am convinced by the contention that study of animals helps us to learn human nature. 这篇写得好费力气,麻烦各位猛拍:handshake

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发表于 2008-11-1 11:21:37 |显示全部楼层
学习学习~:)
这篇我个人觉得真的很难写~

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发表于 2008-11-1 13:54:44 |显示全部楼层
好像是该我改的,不过1号的我还没写,明天来改,楼主见谅

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发表于 2008-11-2 13:31:52 |显示全部楼层

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不好意思,弄错了,这是10.31号的作业

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发表于 2008-11-2 14:49:53 |显示全部楼层
In the realm of biology, scientists make a mass of achievements in the study of animals. Nevertheless a school of people question that it is quite absurd to allocate a large quantity of money in animals because human beings would not benefit from researches in animals. (in animals 介词用in觉不是太合适) As far as I am concerned, however, I cannot agree with this point. Virtually study of animals can help us to learn human nature by reason that to some extent, we share some natures with animals.

Firstly, both animals and mankind will show loves to their families. Hardly could we deny the fact that maternal love existing in animals. According to report, a team of scientists are confused with the scenario that a cow would rather to struggle with a group of wolves until her death than choose to escape. However, after the group of wolves leave, these scientists found several little cows hidden in bushes a few meters away and they are touched by the great maternal love of the mother cow. Here comes another story that a mother donates one of her kidney (kidneys) to his son for organ transplant, which will save her son's life. The two examples indicate the same sacrifice of both animals and human resulting from loves. Consequently the researches of animals will be a great help for better understanding the nature of human beings.

When it comes to the level of collaboration, it is the same. It is well known to us that animals immigrate together in Africa. This sort of immigration in group plays a significant role in resistance of attacks from other carnivores. People would also collaborate with one another when faced (face) problems. This reminds me of cooperation in Sichuan Earthquake in China this year. Millions of foods, medicines as well as equipments are conveyed to Sichuan province from other regions. We also know that tens of thousands of denizens in other states provide a warm hand to residents in south Florida that suffered from Hurricane Katrina. Therefore, the conclusion is acceptable that the study of animals cooperating would provide us with a method to learn that of our mankind.

Additionally, studies on competition of animals would help us to learn that of human beings. Animals could compete for spouses, foods and other resources, while people compete for careers and profits. As a result, psychologists focusing on this behavior of human beings could share the benefits of the studies on animals.

In sum, because of the same qualities between human and animals, I am convinced by the contention that study of animals helps us to learn human nature.

基本改不出来,写得好,好文章

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