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wing6688UID: 2371516

在家吃饭还是出去吃饭
With the development of economy, people in growing numbers are beginning to have opportunity to eat out everyday. The issue of eating out or at home has been brought to public attention. Those who vote for eating at home believe that it is lower cost and more cleanly. Coincident with the opinion of many people is my heartfelt agreement with the idea that eating out is the better choice. From my point of view, the election of eating out by reason of more convenient and more enjoyable.

The reasons for eating out are varied and the most significant one is convenience. By comparison with cooking food at home on people own, eating out save more time and energy. It is difficult and boring that people prepare food at their house, especially after a day of hard work or study. Purchasing the materials of food at chaotic market, cooking them by troublesome cookers, and cleaning dirty dishes after eating, the time of eating home is several times as much as those of eating out. If people ate out, they would have more time to communicate with family and friends. The more frequently people communicate with family members, the more harmonious the relationship in the family between us is.

Another contributing factor of selecting to eat out is the diversity of diet in restaurant. There is no one but eats palatable food. Eating out allows people are able to taste different food in different restaurants. With enough patience and money, people can taste foreign food at local restaurants possibly. To some degree, the native food embodies the cultural trait of its country and nation, the experience of eating exotic diet sometimes brings people a lot of interesting knowledge and skills. For example, after eating Chinese food, people immediately obtain the skills of using chopsticks. To the already familiar examples, numerous further facts may be added.

Certainly, eating at home also has its beneficial points, which include relatively low cost and the opportunity to cooperate with family members. The money of preparing food at home is nearly half as less as those of eating out and the spare money can be invested for other field, such as education or entertainment. Moreover, through preparing food with family members, the relationship of family will be increasingly coherent.

Numerous though the advantages that eating at home enjoys are, they can not compete with the benefits that eating out brings about, when convenience and diversity of food are taken into consideration. Moreover, many restaurants now sometimes have sales in special festival or celebration. To eat at those restaurants, people can find an effective way to satisfied people’s need and spend least money absolutely.

kenshinchriUID: 2332874

With the development of economy, people in growing numbers are beginning to have opportunity to eat out everyday. The issue of eating out or at home has been brought to public attention. Those who vote for eating at home(vote to do sth) believe that it is lower cost and more cleanly(cleanly是整齐的，不是干净的，clean做干净讲本身可以做副词）. Coincident with the opinion of many people is my heartfelt agreement with the idea that eating out is the better choice. （上句太拖沓了，读起来不太对）From my point of view, the election of eating out by reason of more convenient and more enjoyable

Certainly, eating at home also has its beneficial points, which include relatively low cost and the opportunity to cooperate with family members. The money of preparing food at home is nearly half as less as those of eating out and the spare money can be invested for other field（fields会不会好点？）, such as education or entertainment. Moreover, through preparing food with family members, the relationship（relationships前面是复数） of family will be increasingly coherent（coheresive).coherent是连贯的，清楚易懂的，表达清楚的意思，我想LZ是想说：紧密的

Numerous though the advantages that eating at home enjoys are, they can not compete with the benefits that eating out brings about, when convenience and diversity of food are taken into consideration. Moreover, many restaurants now sometimes have sales in special festival or celebration. To eat at those restaurants, people can find an effective way to satisfied people’s（their,前面有people) need(needs) and spend least(less) money absolutely.

先改这些，不过可能我也不一定对，睡觉先，早上起来继续