comeon作文小组——梦想在望2008 11月12日作业

梦想在望2008UID: 2546295

11月12日
你是否赞成这样的观点：
People will spend less time in cooking or preparing food in twenty years.（07.11.24）
同意。
理由：
1.随着科学技术的发展，家用厨具的功能会得到进一步的改善。
2.随着生活水平的提高，食物很容易准备，因为食物的原材料很容易买到和准备。
People, nowadays, can prepare or cook their meal much more easier than has ever been before. This change has indeed greatly improved the way people live. Then, after two decades, what will happen to the lifestyle of people? From my point of view, people will use less time to cook or prepare food in twenty years.

On one hand, along with the gradual and rapid evolution of technology, equipments and tools for kitchen will definitely be improved. In terms of machines for cooking purpose today, they have been increased the efficiency of cooking or preparing meal. Microwave oven, for example, enable people to take less time to cook or heat food just by pressing a few of buttons. It saves time significantly. But in the past, people had to spend too much time preparing a meal with the antiquated equipments. Every step of preparation was a time-consuming task. After two decades, with the faster development of technology, it is more likely for people to cook or prepare food.

One the other hand, people will use less time to cook dinner in twenty years, because food, by itself, has becoming easier to prepare. At present, a variety of food has been ready to be eaten. Supermarkets, for instance, provide vegetables and meat clean and neat. Even the main ingredients of dishes have been accessible, and they need only a few minutes to made into delicious meal. However, in the past, after the work, people have to buy home dirty vegetables and meat which had to wash, cut and so on. Thereby, I believe that, after twenty years, a meal will certainly be easily prepared due to the convenience of food.

Admittedly, food which are cooked by less time, may be deficient of nutrition. Whereas, with the enhancement of technology, people will invent a way in which not only can food maintain nutritious substances, but also are able to be prepared within less time than has ever been now.

jiwasunUID: 2425569

占位，明天把改的贴上来

梦想在望2008UID: 2546295

写得很差 尤其是理由段！ 我 这个破脑子真是 想不出理由来了！

jiwasunUID: 2425569

昨天终于考完了，现在有时间了，马上给改

梦想在望2008UID: 2546295

考的怎样？祝你取得好成绩！

jiwasunUID: 2425569

不行啊，感觉没状态，不过作文倒是稀里糊涂的写了470个词

jiwasunUID: 2425569

People, nowadays, can prepare or cook their meal much more(more去掉) easier than has ever been before. This change has indeed greatly improved the way people live. Then, after two decades, what will happen to the lifestyle of people? From my point of view, people will use less time to cook or prepare food in twenty years.

On one hand, along with the gradual and rapid evolution of technology, equipments and tools for kitchen will definitely be improved. In terms of machines for cooking purpose today, they have been(好像不用被动，been去掉) increased the efficiency of cooking or preparing meal. Microwave oven, for example, enable (enables) people to take less time to cook or heat food just by pressing a few of buttons. It saves time significantly. But in the past, people had to spend too much time preparing a meal with the antiquated equipments. Every (Each) step of preparation was a time-consuming task. After two decades, with the faster development of technology, it is more likely for people to cook or prepare food. (最后这句话没说完，应该扣主题句，把花费时间少说出来)

One the other hand, people will use less time to cook dinner in twenty years, because food, by itself, has becoming easier to prepare. At present, a variety of food has been ready to be eaten. Supermarkets, for instance, provide vegetables and meat clean and neat. Even the main ingredients of dishes have been accessible, and they need only a few minutes to made(make) (make是及物动词，后面缺宾语)into delicious meal. However, in the past, after the work, people have to buy home dirty vegetables and meat which had to wash, cut and so on. Thereby, I believe that, after twenty years, a meal will certainly be easily prepared due to the convenience of food.

Admittedly, food which are (is) cooked by less time, may be deficient of nutrition. Whereas, with the enhancement of technology, people will invent a way in which not only can food maintain nutritious substances, but also are able to be prepared within less time than has ever been now.

jiwasunUID: 2425569

你还有多少时间了？复习得挺好了吧

梦想在望2008UID: 2546295

快考试了。复习的还好啦。多谢