HERETIC作文小组——梦想在望2008 12月3日作业

梦想在望2008UID: 2546295

As for the friendship, it seems that there is always a everlasting debate. Society is divided on this topic. Some people may think that it is better to allow a friend do wrong than saying or doing what cause the end of friendship.While I do disgree with the above statement because both of them will demage or hurt the friendship or the emotion between friends.

On one hand, as a friend, a true friend should be sincere or candid. That is to say, if your friend is going to or made a mistake, at that time you have no hesitation to point it out and give good advice or help him/her out of the adversity rather than to let him/her do something wrong. As an old proverb goes well, "it is a great confidence in a friend to tell him your faults, greater to tell him his". On the contrary, it is a false friend who want to see you make faults, but do nothing at all.  These are not your good or true friend. Another good saying can illustrate this. "a false friend is like a shadow, attend only while the sun shines." In other words, only can a true friend stay with us and tell us what is wrong. It can be said that, a true friend is the best forture for everyone.

On the other hand, being a friend should not do something that hurt or destroy the friendship. Friends tend to be depicted as the family or brothers. It can be understood that friends should cherish and stress on the the emotion or feeling to each other. I remembered one of my friends in the past, who had ever a good ralationship with me. However, it is a shame that at a time, he did something that was betrayal to me my other friends and me. This severely hurted and did harm on  us. And after that, he was gradually isolated by us. In short, it can be seen that such that kind of man is not be welcomed by anybody.

In a word, a true friend has no alternative to try his/her best to inhibit his/her friends to make faults and would like to consider their feelings carefully.

bjleoUID: 2480273

As for the friendship, it seems that there is always a(an) everlasting debate. Society is divided on this topic.(ms是超短句 society不知能不能表达社会上的人群) Some people may think that it is better to allow a friend do wrong than saying or doing what cause the end of friendship. While I do disagree with the above statement because both of them will damage or hurt the friendship or the emotion between friends.
On one hand, as a friend, a true friend should be sincere or candid. That is to say, if your friend is going to or made(用make和is平行) a mistake, at that time you have no hesitation to point it out and give good advice or help him/her out of the adversity rather than to let him/her do something wrong. (觉得这种长难句好)As an old proverb goes well, "it is a great confidence in a friend to tell him your faults, greater to tell him his". On the contrary, it is a false friend who want (wants) to see you make faults, but do nothing at all.  These are not your good or true friend(friends 因为前面是these). Another good saying can illustrate this. "a false friend is like a shadow, attend only while the sun shines." In other words, only can a true friend stay with us and tell us what is wrong.(句式变化好only a true friend can stay with us and…?)It can be said that, a true friend is the best forture for everyone. (treasure?)'hM2?,pk
R5E2SOn the other hand, being a friend should not do something that hurt or destroy the friendship. Friends tend to be depicted as the family or brothers. It can be understood that friends should cherish and stress on the the emotion or feeling to each other. I remembered one of my friends in the past, who had ever (had ever had?) a good ralationship with me. However, it is a shame that at a time, he did something that was betrayal to my other friends and me. (是不是应该简要描述一下什么事?)This severely hurted(hurt 过去式同形) and did harm on  (do harm to?)us. And after that, he was gradually isolated by us. In short, (From this example?) it can be seen that such that kind (such kind)of man is not be (去掉be) welcomed by anybody.
In a word, a true friend has no alternative to try his/her best to inhibit his/her friends to make faults and would like to consider their feelings carefully.

按照自己想法改的 有不对之处见谅

梦想在望2008UID: 2546295

多谢 哥们