【12月-1月IBT综合备考活动】之【TWE写作】12月16日

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With the television entering into the family widely, the style of the television program becomes a hot topic, with some people claiming that the television program should be educational whereas other people maintaining that the television program should be entertainment. In my opinion, while in certain fields, it is not easy to show only in an aspect. The television program usually shows both educational and entertainment, although sometimes entertainment acts as a major element.

Apparently, the most popular program is teleplay which exerts a powerful impact on the people’s life. After a day of busy working, people often want to have a watching to relax themselves, especially situation series plays which reflect the life on the facet. At first glance, it seems entertainment and comedy, however, after a deep consideration, it appears philosophic and educational. The scene in the program may happen in our life and teach us how to confront morass. Maybe sometimes it can tell us something that how to deal with the relationship of people.
Furthermore, Some TV programs like movies, with delicate plots and beautiful picture allure a majority of people, which, not only entertain people but also educate people some obvious philosophy. For instance, the film ‘The day after tomorrow’ which suppose a calamity after 20 years because of heavy snow. Not only dose it show people’s love in troubles, but also teach people to protect the environment. When people fall in it for relaxing, they also have aware of the environmental pollution and then take measures to ameliorate.
In addition, the program like news and Discoveries, play an essential role in daily life. It not only educate people but also enlarge the field of vision, some amusing lore entertain people at the same time.
In conclusion, TV programs involving both education and entertainment, enjoys us so much. Only of them cannot appear good.

[ 本帖最后由 xiaojing1115 于 2008-12-16 21:51 编辑 ]

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With the television entering(这个，总觉得有点别扭，enter不能表状态吧？用spreading比较好) into the family widely, the style of the television program becomes a hot topic, with some people claiming that the television program should be educational whereas other people maintaining that the television program should be entertainment. In my opinion, while in certain fields, it is not easy to show only in an aspect. The television program usually shows both educational and entertainment, although sometimes entertainment acts as a major element.

Apparently, the most popular program is teleplay which exerts a powerful impact on the people’s life. After a day of busy working, people often want to have a watching to relax themselves, especially situation series plays which reflect the life on the facet. At first glance, it seems entertainment and comedy（seems entertainment and comedy what?）, however, after a deep consideration, it appears philosophic and educational. The scene in the program may happen in our life and teach us how to confront morass. Maybe sometimes it can tell us something that how to deal with the relationship of people.

Furthermore, Some TV programs like movies, with delicate plots and beautiful picture allure a majority of people, which, not only entertain people but also educate people some obvious philosophy. For instance, the film ‘The day after tomorrow’ which suppose a calamity after 20 years because of heavy snow. Not only dose it show people’s love in troubles, but also teach people to protect the environment. When people fall in it for relaxing, they also have aware of the environmental pollution and then take measures to ameliorate.

In addition, the program like news and Discoveries, play an essential role in daily life. It not only educate people but also enlarge the field of vision, some amusing lore entertain people at the same time.
In conclusion, TV programs involving both education and entertainment, enjoys(amuses) us so much. Only of them cannot appear good.(是想表达只有其中一种是不好的？但是用的很不地道啊。)

论述有点单薄，例子很多很切题，有些地方的表达用的很奇怪，我也不知道好不好，都用红笔给你圈出来了;)