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发表于 2009-1-17 17:13:50 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
题目:ISSUE130 - "How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society. Unfortunately, we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society."孩子融入社会的能力决定了社会的命运。遗憾的是,我们还不知道怎样培养孩子使他们对社会有益
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It seems self-evident that children are the future of our society, since how children are socialized today determines the destiny of society. Therefore, people have never hesitated to place the greatest emphasize on children's education as well as their socialization. While there are tremendous divergence on how to raise children more effectively, and some may agree with the speaker that we have not yet learned how to raise children, we can't ignore the fact that people's effort to guide children to grow healthy and socialize smoothly has indeed received positive effect.

On the individual level, children born in different atmosphere at the same time may see a totally different future, this is especially true when they receive different education and live in different social conditions. Take the science career for example, recent centuries have witnessed the most splendid flower of science and technology that never existed before, while when we open a textbook on mathematics, physics, or the engineering etc, we can always discover a long list of western names who contribute to various theorems or definitions, while rarely can we find an oriental or African name which does not fit the proportion of their population. As can be seen in the children in different area's education system, it does have an dominant effect on the children's growth and as an additional evidence, we can see that an oriental student may performs perfect in s western university.

Furthermore, People have realized the importance of education for a long time and have never stopped taking measures to cultivate more excellent children who can help bring about a better society. Being educated has become every children's right and obligation in many rich countries for centuries, hundreds of thousands of children in the poor areas have been receiving aids from the government and the association on society aimed at providing every children with the basic education. Any fast developing countries, like China, India and Brazil are devoting on their national education system, and this help the whole nation develop faster and healthier in return.

Though there exists kinds of problems in our education system on children's socialization, we can also see that we have made a giant leap forward compared with the past. University students in China have more access to practice in society as well as continue their education at home or abroad which is just unbelievable decades ago. World wide education is being built gradually when we students are just in the classroom. Children's horizon has been widened, they themselves also concede this since they can feel the change accompanied with their growth.

With the fast developing of our society, we are always adjusting and exploring the best way to raise our children, this responsible action may affect slightly and slowly, but the cumulative and long term effect is obvious and everlasting. More and more reasonable people realized that there may not be an ending in the progress of our education. It is in this dynamic adjusting and exploring process that our society develops, both in our time and in the future, our children's time.

疑问:该issue是让只论述后半部分(unfortunately以后),还是两部分都要论述?我是两部分都论述的。欢迎拍砖!
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