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Issue 87
In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important discoveries.

We all tend to be curious and active in a certain field when we first engaged in it as a beginner. It is very likely that a beginners make big discoveries for they have not been restricted by the shackles of experience and knowledge, however most discoveries are made based on the profound understanding and plentiful knowledge of an expert to certain field.

Admittedly, the mind of a beginner is more free and broad than a experienced expert who has engaged in the field for a very long time. A beginner may not be affected by what are widely acknowledged assumptions, which may not be true, and bogged in the mire of experience. For example, when a friend of my father, who had invented a kind of mold-proof paper used in glass business, first try to find a new material to proof the mold, he found that all others focus too much on the chemical property of the paper, but neglect the physical attribute of the paper, so he put much of his work in finding materials that can allow more lights to permeate, which can prevent the mold from growing, and finally succeeded. We can see from that beginners can always observe things in a different angle, which may help them make discoveries.

But we should also see that, although beginners have less confines and restrictions, they need to have certain amount of knowledge and experience to discovery. Without knowledge and understanding of the field that they devoted in, anyone who try to make a discovery is just gambling and try his or her fortune, so the chance that he or she may actually find some thing is quiet rare. Newton once said :"If I have seen further, it is by standing on the shoulders of giants.", and these "shoulders of giants" are knowledge, methods, experience that had been passed down from our antecessor, and these are the foundations of making a discovery.

Experts, though a little bookish as some one may argue, are well prepared professionals that are ready to make discoveries. For the last few thousand of years, most discoveries were made by experts in many fields. Darwin, for instance, devoted himself in biology since he was a child, and after long time investigation and researching, he found that all species were evolved by natural selection from simple and preliminary conditions, and wrote his famous book "The Origin of Species". Another, Einstein, who found the special and general relativity, the theory that revolutionized modern thought on the nature of space and time, based on decades of working in physics. Even in art world, the discoveries are still made upon long time studying. A case in point is Monet, a famous painter known as the founder of impressionism, spent most of his life examining the effect of changing light and atmosphere on a subject. All above shows that discovery can not be separated from long time studying and a large amount a relative knowledge.

To sum up, although beginners are more free in mind, they should really put their feet down, and devoted their life in the field just as those experts do. And experts should not let the shackles of experience block their way to success, and free their mind so that they be more efficient in making discoveries.

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Issue 87
In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important discoveries.

We all tend to be curious and active in a certain field when we first engaged in it as a beginner. It is very likely that a beginners   beginner make big discoveries for they have not been restricted by the shackles of experience and knowledge, 经验和知识会是shackle吗？这句话待商榷  however most discoveries are made based on the profound understanding and plentiful knowledge of an expert to certain field.

Admittedly, the mind of a beginner is more free and broad than aan    experienced expert who has engaged in the field for a very long time. A beginner may not be affected by what are widely acknowledged assumptions, which may not be true, and bogged in the mire of experience. For example, when a friend of my father, who had invented a kind of mold-proof paper used in glass business, first try to find a new material to proof the mold, he found that all others focus too much on the chemical property of the paper, but neglect the physical attribute of the paper, so he put much of his work in finding materials that can allow more lights to permeate, which can prevent the mold from growing, and finally succeeded. We can see from that beginners can always observe things in a different angle, which may help them make discoveries.
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But we should also see that, although beginners have less confines and restrictions, they need to have certain amount of knowledge and experience to discovery. Without knowledge and understanding of the field that they devoted in, anyone 太多绝对了吧，毕竟你已经有了一段论述beginner的作用 who try to make a discovery is just gambling and try his or her fortune, so the chance that he or she may actually find some thing is quiet rare. Newton once said :"If I have seen further, it is by standing on the shoulders of giants.", and these "shoulders of giants" are knowledge, methods, experience that had been passed down from our antecessor, and these are the foundations of making a discovery.

Experts, though a little bookish as some one may argue, are well prepared professionals that are ready to make discoveries. For the last few thousand of years, most discoveries were made by experts in many fields. Darwin, for instance, devoted himself in biology since he was a child, and after long time investigation and researching, he found that all species were evolved by natural selection from simple and preliminary conditions, and wrote his famous book "The Origin of Species". Another, Einstein, who found the special and general relativity, the theory that revolutionized modern thought on the nature of space and time, based on decades of working in physics. Even in art world, the discoveries are still made upon long time studying. A case in point is Monet, a famous painter known as the founder of impressionism, spent most of his life examining the effect of changing light and atmosphere on a subject. All above shows that discovery can not be separated from long time studying and a large amount a relative knowledge.
例子很充分，很有力量，但有改进的空间：1。例子有三个，导致说理的句子只有头尾2句 2。没有完全突出他们已经确立的专家地位


To sum up, although beginners are more free in mind, they should really put their feet down, and devoted their life in the field just as those experts do. And experts should not let the shackles of experience block their way to success, and free their mind so that they be more efficient in making discoveries.
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