issue36 花了好久时间才写完

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Issue36  

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The greatness of individuals can be decided only by those who live after them, not by their contemporaries.
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The greatness of individuals is highly affected by the way of people's consideration toward it. In the history, some individuals' greatness was immediately recognized by the comporaries, while some were not fortunately enough to be recognized in a short time, but was highly phraised by those who live after them. Therefore, I disagree with the speaker on the claim that only those who live after the great individuals can decide the greatness of them.

Whether an individual' greatness can be recognized by his or her contemporaries or those who live after them, is decided by limitation of the knowledge at that time and people's ability to receive it. Fortunately, Newton's achievement like, theory of gravitation, discovery of calculus, and so forth, are accepted and he was highly phraised in his time. While some scientists' greatness are hiddened in their time, but finally deserve their value for a long time. The famous subject--Quaternions in discrete mathematics put up by Hamilton, was not reputably commended by people in his time. Not everyone found Hamilton's quaternions the answer to everything they had been looking for. Thomson even wrote that:"Quaternions came from Hamilton after his really good work had been done, and though beautifully ingenious, have been an unmixed evil to those who have touched them in any way.

In addition, the art an individual has created whether can be appreciated by contemporaries was  often limited by the angle people used to see it. As we know, many artists have already well-known in their life, like Vinci, whose famous art is "Mona Lisa", Michelangelo, whose famous structure is David, and so forth. However, there still some artists not recognized by their contemporaries, but well known to those who live after them. The best example is Van Gogh. In his life, nobody has appraised his work, and even received taunt from people. During his time, he had just sold only one work. It is because nobody in his time are able to see his work in an new angle. But his works are finally highly exalted by people afterward, and also set a new notion to describe the elite of Van Gogh's art--Synthetism.

Besides these two aspects, sometimes, the greatness of individuals often suppressed by the governors in their time. As we all known, Copernicus' heliocentric theory was heavily suppressed by the monarchs to maintain their authority. Similarly, Turing's greatness to the foundation of computer science was concealed by the government in his time. His unique status in Anglo-American secret communication work meant that there were pressures on him of which his contemporaries were unaware. To keep the secrets, governors confined him to publish his work. As a result, much of Turing's work was not published in the formal sense of appearance in a scientific journal in his days. And nobody in his times, knowed what greatness he had done, may even few knowed there was such an excellent scientist in their time. So government, more or less affect the greatness of individuals.

Therefore, the factors to discovery the greatness of individuals are various, like limited knowledge in a time, contemparies' ability on understanding or angles toward them, the restriction from government to them and so forth. Not just comtemporaries or those who live after them can decide these greatness.

[ 本帖最后由 ChunyanLi2005 于 2006-2-14 22:33 编辑 ]

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Issue36  是个高频

     539 words
------题目------
The greatness of individuals can be decided only by those who live after them, not by their contemporaries.
------正文------
The greatness of individuals is highly affected by the way of people's consideration toward it. In the history, some individuals' greatness was immediately recognized by the comporaries, while some were not fortunately enough to be recognized in a short time这是幸运不幸运的问题吗？我觉得这么说不好，你自己看着办，个人意见。 , but was highly phraised by those who live after them. Therefore, I disagree with the speaker on the claim that only those who live after the great individuals can decide虽然题目说的是decide，但我觉得第一段应该指出是evaluate或judge这种词，本身，不管别人怎么说，greatness就是存在的，既不是当代人也不是后来人决定的。当然，这不是大问题。 the greatness of them.

Whether an individual' greatness can be recognized by his or her contemporaries or those who live after them, is decided by limitation of the knowledge at that time and people's ability to receive it. Fortunately, Newton's achievement like, theory of gravitation, discovery of calculus, and so forth, are accepted and he was highly phraised in his time. While some scientists' greatness are hiddened in their time, but finally deserve their value for a long time. The famous subject--Quaternions in discrete mathematics put up by Hamilton, was not reputably commended by people in his time. Not everyone found Hamilton's quaternions the answer to everything they had been looking for. Thomson even wrote that:"Quaternions came from Hamilton after his really good work had been done, and though beautifully ingenious, have been an unmixed evil to those who have touched them in any way. 注意标点，“落了一半，还有，给这段找个结尾。

In addition, the art an individual has created whether can be appreciated by contemporaries often limited by the angle people used to see it 这种表达很别扭.后面大概看了一下是举例子了，那么这个TS和例子的衔接感觉不好，那个人们看问题的角度是个比较抽象的词，是否需要具体些呢？还有，两个例子，一正一反不就是一堆是当代认知了，一个是后来吗？体现出角度不同了？ As we know, many artists have already well-known in their life, like Vinci, whose famous art is "Mona Lisa", Michelangelo, whose famous structure is David, and so forth. However, there still some artists not recognized by their contemporaries, but well known to those who live after them. The best example is Van Gogh. In his life, nobody has appraised his work, and even received taunt from people. During his time, he had just sold only one work. It is because nobody in his time are able to see his work in an new angle. But his works are finally highly exalted by people afterward, and also set a new notion to describe the elite of Van Gogh's art--Synthetism.看了前两段，你莫不如就按分领域写，每个领域都是两种情况都有，期间在举例的时候指出原因。
前面两段都用到了反证，很好，不过，最好在反证的例子前面能再加上一个反证的论述句。


Besides these two aspects, sometimes, the greatness of individuals often suppressed by the governors in their time. As we all known, Copernicus' heliocentric theory was heavily suppressed by the monarchs to maintain their authority. Similarly, Turing's greatness to the foundation of computer science was concealed by the government in his time. His unique status in Anglo-American secret communication work meant that there were pressures on him of which his contemporaries were unaware. To keep the secrets, governors confined him to publish his work. As a result, much of Turing's work was not published in the formal sense of appearance in a scientific journal in his days. And nobody in his times, knowed what greatness he had done, may even few knowed there was such an excellent scientist in their time.

Therefore, the factors to discovery the greatness of individuals are various, like limited knowledge in a time, contemparies' ability on understanding or angles toward them, the restriction from government to them and so forth. Not just comtemporaries or those who live after them can decide these greatness.
例子真能找，那些人名我现在还不会拼呢

ChunyanLi2005UID: 2124266

多谢多谢！ 你要是写了就发过来。

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原帖由 ChunyanLi2005 于 2006-2-14 22:28 发表
多谢多谢！ 你要是写了就发过来。

巧了，今天除了列提纲还真写了一个。
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[ 本帖最后由 我的马甲 于 2006-2-14 23:48 编辑 ]