issue29 sally 小组 公众人物隐私问题 2 月26的作业

weiweizhuUID: 179352

题目：ISSUE 29 - "Public figures such as actors, politicians, and athletes should expect people to be interested in their private lives. When they seek a public role, they should expect that they will lose at least some of their privacy."
字数：673          用时：超时了            日期：2006-2-27

Private, as considered nowadays, is one of the most important rights towards human beings, no matter to common populace or to public figures such as actors, politicians and athletes. However compared to the commons, public figures would prepare for some lose of privacy, for it can bring them focus and support even sometimes it causes their life inconvenient.

What is so call public figures means those people are living under the eyes of public when working or performing personal activity. What they do, speak and think always become commons' interest focus for they leading a resplendent and even luxurious lives which public frequently dream to experience. Actors, performing in various kinds of plays, earn oceans of money without large effort but just let their fans run after them. Politicians, designing policy and legislation as well as determining the direction one countries should go, are regarded as the substitute phrase as success. Athletes, taking sports as profession, lead a sumptuous life and constitute the stars of contemporary society as actors and pop musicians. They seem to be born under the spotlight and people's attention. Public are long to know all aspect of them- their fondness, their habit, their growth even their sentiment lives.

Viewing all these above, public figures should expect that they will lose at least certain privacy as soon as they seek a public role. Without people's attention, they will be work without meanings, which is especially truly with respect to actors. No matter how well they perform and how beautiful they are, once audiences lose interest of them, they will be forget away soon and accordingly not films corporation will continue to hire them. Maybe just because of these, actors have not only prepared to show their private life to public but also preferred and been eager to do so, for it is the best way to attract public's attention. Their high income and comfortable life are built upon the deprivation of their privacy. When they step into the entertainment field, they should realize it .

Let's turn our eyes to the politicians. Similarly, exhibiting some privacy to the public can also keep them in the focus of publics, bringing them public reliability and bolstering. For the one thing, leaking some privacy to public can help politicians win support of citizens. They are content to let others know how they deal with daily work, how hard they try to pass some beneficial policy by discuss for quite a long time, how careful they are toward to well-beings of citizens even when they come back home they still anxious about it.Those pictures enable the politicians to convince public that the welfare of citizens and the stability of society are always the centre concern in their mind, which help politicians to win public understanding and bolstering as well as more vote when re-election. For the other thing, public are seeking models to follow in order to achieve their goal in the nearby future. Politicians are the elite of the society, behaving the success to some extent. Knowing more about their hard working and development even trivial daily life can direct a road for the publics to the final success. Disclosing politicians' life or even some privacy may benefic both politicians and public, there is no reason for undone it.

However, every coin has two sides. Losing some privacy is really an annoying issue encounter by the public figures even it can bring them fames and fortune. Some evens which have no relation with their work and mostly some love affair of them are always the top line of some newspaper to cast some people’s low taste. In such condition, the dignity of public figures may be tinted and what is more, their heart and feeling may badly, cannot recover in short time.

Therefore, it is reasonable for public figures to prepare exhibit all aspects of life as soon as they set foot in these fields. However, common people should be careful when run after their idols, respecting the privacy of public figures.

[ 本帖最后由 yogurt4 于 2006-2-28 01:12 编辑 ]

小室黄瓜UID: 2155213

题目：ISSUE 29 - "Public figures such as actors, politicians, and athletes should expect people to be interested in their private lives. When they seek a public role, they should expect that they will lose at least some of their privacy."
字数：673          用时：超时了            日期：2006-2-27

Private, as considered nowadays, is one of the most important rights towards human beings, no matter to common populace or to public figures such as actors, politicians and athletes. However compared to the commons,（ public figures would prepare for some lose of privacy这个for用的好像不对，虽然这个短语这样用，但这样会理解为失去隐私做准备）, for it can bring them focus and support（s） even sometimes it causes their life inconvenient.

What is so call （called） public figures means those people are living under the eyes of public when working or performing personal activity. What they do, speak and think always become （commons' interest focus ，focus去掉）for（建议不要老用for 可以用 in that ） they leading（少谓语） a resplendent and even luxurious lives which public frequently dream to experience. Actors, performing in various kinds of plays, earn oceans of money without large effort but just let their fans run after them. Politicians, designing policy and legislation as well as determining the direction one countries should go, are regarded as the substitute phrase as success. Athletes, taking sports as profession, lead a sumptuous life and constitute the stars of contemporary society as actors and pop musicians.（三个例子很简练，不错） They seem to be born under the spotlight and people's attention. Public are long to know all aspect of them- ）去掉）their fondness, their habit, their growth（and） even their sentiment lives.

Viewing all these above, public figures should expect that they will lose at least certain privacy as soon as they seek a public role. Without people's attention, they will be work without meanings, which is especially truly with respect to actors. No matter how well they perform and how beautiful they are, once audiences lose interest of them, they will be forget away soon and accordingly not films corporation will continue to hire them. Maybe just because of these, actors have not only prepared to show their private life to public but also preferred and been eager to do so, for it is the best way to attract public's attention. Their high income and comfortable life are built upon the deprivation of their privacy. When they step into the entertainment field, they should realize it .(这个思路我没想到，写得不错！)

Let's turn our eyes to the politicians（这个可以放在上段吧？这样的结构感觉有点乱）. Similarly, exhibiting some privacy to the public can also keep them in the focus of publics, bringing them public reliability and bolstering. For the one thing, leaking some privacy to public can help politicians win support of citizens. They are content to let others know how they deal with daily work, how hard they try to pass some beneficial policy by discuss for quite a long time, how careful they are toward to well-beings of citizens even when they come back home they still anxious about it.Those pictures enable the politicians to convince public that the welfare of citizens and the stability of society are always the centre concern in their mind, which help politicians to win public understanding and bolstering as well as more vote when re-election. 写得很流畅，不错！For the other thing, public are seeking models to follow in order to achieve their goal in the nearby future. Politicians are the elite of the society, behaving the success to some extent. Knowing more about their hard working and development even trivial daily life can direct a road for the publics to the final success. Disclosing politicians' life or even some privacy may benefic both politicians and public, there is no reason for undone it.

However, every coin has two sides. Losing some privacy is really an annoying issue encounter（ed） by the public figures even it can bring them fames and fortune. Some evens （events） which have no relation with their work and mostly some love affair of them are always the top line of some newspaper to cast (supply)some people’s low taste. In such condition (in this sense), the dignity of public figures may be tinted and what is more,( their heart and feeling may badly 没说完吧？), Cannot recover in short time.

Therefore, it is reasonable for public figures to prepare exhibit all aspects of life as soon as they set foot in these fields. However, common people should be careful when run after their idols, respecting the privacy of public figures.
句子写得不是很好，一些词的用法也有问题。不过整体思路还是不错的。写了这么多字很好了，在把词和句子写准确了，一定会更有进步！！