issue159 [0710G 戴三个表冲刺小组] 第4次作业 尝试创新失败

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Although the technology and science ofcomputer have been so advanced that the machines can do a lot of things insteadof human being, many people consider machines as tools of human minds and thusassert that they are inferior to human mind. In fact, I agree with the opinionthat the human mind is superior to machines for some different reasons I willdisplay.
On the work relevant to computation andmemory, machines can behave better than human mind nowadays. Along with thedevelopment of science and technology, the speed of computing and the quantityof storage of computer increase enormously, while the evolvement of human beingis too slow to put human in a superior position to machines in these jobs.However, when it comes to creation, human minds show great advantages tomachines. The ability of creating is the particular property of human minds andcan not be replaced by any other skills. No matter how important rolescomputing and memory play in the development of science and technology, thecreative thought of human being is the most crucial factor and thus stands outfrom the various abilities.
3.On the one hand, it is the innovationsthat boost the science and technology. There will be no inventions ordevelopment without the creative thoughts of human. Take the programming forexample, one programming language can do many things other than creatinganother language. The computers can only execute the orders given to them.
On the other hand, although thetechnologies are so advanced that the machines that can deal with variousproblems are produced, no machine can make a new strategy in the case ofunexpected conditions. The machines only behave as they are ordered. In otherwords, a machine cannot "think" in a sense. Though maybe the intelligentvehicles can behave better than an experienced driver in making decisions,operating itself and dealing with occasional accidents, this is because theyare "told" how to judge by people and have faster speed of computingand larger memory than a driver.
In some areas, machines seem to be moreexcellent than human minds, but they lack the ability of creating, which is thecrux in the development of the world. Therefore, I hold the view that humanmind will mostly be superior to machines because of the disability of creatingof machines instead because of the state as tools of them.

中文提纲：
1.      背景+观点：基本同意，但是不是这个原因。
2.      在计算与存储方面机器胜过人脑，但是在创造性思维方面人脑胜过机器。因为创造性是科技进步和社会发展最根本的因素，所以人脑还是比机器高级的。（所以下面两段就Reason为什么创造性思维比较重要）
3.      一方面，创新是发展的根本。
4.      另一方面，机器不能自己制定策略，只是执行人类给它的命令。（其实想另外找一个为什么创造能力比较重要的原因，没找到）
5.      所以，尽管有些方面机器看起来比人类强，人类其实比机器高级。
superior这个词，WB的解释是1.situated higher up:upper2.of highter quality rank or importance，看到的几个提纲都是某些方面强某些方面


弱的,不过我觉得可以综合起来判断，到底谁的地位更高，谁更重要呢？加上这两天在看机器人与帝国，机器人三大定律的第一条就是不得伤害人类。


稍微尝试一下小创新，结果发现写的无比地恶心，主要是表达不出来，例子也没想好。求拍。下次还是老老实实部分同意好了。