issue159 [0710G 戴三个表冲刺小组] 第三次作业

斯普特尼克UID: 2171287

字数倒是越来越夸张……速度却不见涨
就当训练语言吧，下次一定要把时间控制了！

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"Thehuman mind will alwaysbe superior to machines because machines areonly tools of human minds."

提纲
1． 首先，人类的思维具有自主性，creativity, originality。机器无法做到，这些工作无法被替代。只能作为工具，辅助。设计，
2． 但是某些方面，人类运用机器来进行复杂的计算。在设定好的程序之下，机器的速度远远高过人类。没有机器的参与，现在科技无法发展
3． 但是我们也要警惕，过于依赖机器的后果。Keyboard过早进入课堂，忘记字的拼写，沉迷于网络，缺乏交流。企业依赖，hacker袭击后瘫痪。(写着写着完全写成别的了，开始想的例子完全没用上)
4． 从长远角度来说，现在机器的确做出了巨大贡献。但是现在的机器人确实在越来越“聪明”，人工智能。潜在的危机。
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TOPIC: ISSUE159 - "The human mind willalways be superior to machines because machines are only tools of humanminds."
WORDS: 948          TIME: 01:20:00          DATE: 2007-7-29上午 03:12:19

In the author's statement, human mind is superiorto machines for the reason that machines are only human minds' tool. Relate tothe common life, it is indeed somewhat convincing and reasonable at the firstglance. Nevertheless, in my personal point of view, this fact is not sosuperficial and simple than this statement after my deeply thought. We have toadmit the advantages brought by machines and cannot to ignore the potentialthreat behind the usage of them. Generally, the final judgment of this topicshould take a case-by-case analysis.

In the first place, it is clear that thebrains of human even the animals, have the most complex structure and mostintricate acting function, even modern medicine and brain research have no muchprogress in the field of them. Without the development of research of brain, itis also not so clear that why different individuals own diverse characteristic, different action taken by them in same circumstance, give different answersto one question, have different thought and understanding to a matter, etc.This is the most significant point which is differentiated us from the machines(in fact, animals have thought as well, but compare with human it is moresimple). Especially on the creativity, human, more or less, have somecreativity in unlike field and all the tools include of machines is the outcomeof the contribution and the disposition of our creativity. With the creativity,people can improve our life with new invention and to create works of art tofulfill our heart and even we can conclude that modern world is the result ofthe usage of creativity by human. The machines, however, it cannot createanything but administer the order of ours for the reason that the structure andaction are much too simple compare to our brains.

In the second place, we also should give amedal to the machines though they are the tools of us. Without the inventionand its practical work of machines, the life of ours is greatly different andit is clear that without the improvement of productivity taken by machines, weare led the day with oxen and travel with cart or just by foot. Specially, theinvention of the computer in 20th century greatly changed the life of human.The powerful ability of computers accelerate the research in most of the fieldsto the great extent and it finally lead to the days that develop in a fabulousspeed no matter in sciences or technologies or others than any other time inhistory. Personal computer, internet, mass-media, web 2.0, the Human GenomeProject, space exploration, robots in production line, etc are all the contributionof the usage computer to some extent and nobody could ignore that without thehelp of the these machines, only the function of human's brain cannot do athing.

In the third place, machines also bringsome potential threats and they deserve to be carefully  [url=http://www.iciba.com/search?s=carefully][/url] weighed. Generally speaking, the common people don not have strong feel thatthey are facing threat to their dally life in modern society but this is alsothe crucial part that whether we can live without the help of the machines justlike baker, mobile phones, internet and home computers, vehicles, planes,tractors, lights etc? Can you milk or culture? Can you bear the day commutingon your foot especially in a sandal made by roots and grass not yourcomfortable shoes? Can you stand the day without lights and even the electricpower or cannot easily reach to your relatives or lover when you consider thatthey may be in danger. Somebody may find this is funny and will not happen infuture and the day will be increasingly improved but I am not one of thembecause the world will not act just as human’s anticipation. What about catastrophesor wars’ occurs in a sudden, and someday we wake up found that we lay on theground with nothing left but debris and corpses, how could we survive?Therefore, we should realize that our good modern life is based on a high levelin any period time in the past, teaching people despite them are adult orchildren how to survive is quite essential to our species.

Last but not the least, in the new century,we brought in both new expectations and new challenges and changes and may benew, potential and most vital threat - artificial intelligence (the AI).Notwithstanding it is the scenario in video-game, movies, cartoons, novel etcand most of people has taken no attention to this. But it attract the interestof the scientists and moralists, the former have highly curiosity to the AI butthe latter are highly worried about whether the machines or robots who havehighly intellect or even they smarter than human will influence the life of oursand they consider that the with the powerful compute ability, the machines withAI will finally destroy human beings. It sounds like a movie a scenario likewhat I point about, however, the “crazy things” spaceship to the moon(spacecraft), clairvoyance (telephone), eyes in the sky (satellite) etc in the fantasticnovel in 18th century had already come true.

To sum up, from what I have discussedabove, we can reach to the point that the human do have some predominance tothe machines especially on thinking and creativity. Nonetheless, depends on thefact that our modern life have absolutely based on machines, we should alsorealize that the ability of survive without modern technologies has greatlyweaken for the depending on the machines and the potential threat in a farfuture – nothing is impossible.

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In the author's statement, human mind is superiorto machines for the reason that machines are only human minds' tool. Relate tothe common life, it is indeed somewhat convincing and reasonable at the firstglance. Nevertheless, in my personal point of view, this fact is not sosuperficial and simple than this statement after my deeply thought. We have toadmit the advantages brought by machines and cannot to ignore the potentialthreat behind the usage of them. Generally, the final judgment of this topic should take a case-by-case analysis.

In the first place, it is clear that thebrains of human even the animals, have the most complex structure and mostintricate acting function, even modern medicine and brain research have no muchprogress in the field of them. Without the development of research of brain, itis also not so clear that why different individuals own diverse characteristic, different action taken by them in same circumstance, give different answersto one question, have different thought and understanding to a matter, etc.This is the most significant point which is differentiated us from the machines(in fact, animals have thought as well, but compare with human it is moresimple). Especially on the creativity, human, more or less, have somecreativity in unlike field and all the tools include of machines is the outcomeof the contribution and the disposition of our creativity. With the creativity,people can improve our life with new invention and to create works of art tofulfill our heart and even we can conclude that modern world is the result ofthe usage of creativity by human. The machines, however, it cannot createanything but administer the order of ours for the reason that the structure andaction are much too simple compare to our brains.（好像只有结论没有分析，比如及其只是按照人的指令工作，比如还是需要人来操作，即使最智能化的机器也需要人的预设指令。）

In the second place, we also should give amedal to the machines though they are the tools of us. Without the inventionand its practical work of machines, the life of ours is greatly different andit is clear that without the improvement of productivity taken by machines, weare led the day with oxen and travel with cart or just by foot. Specially, theinvention of the computer in 20th century greatly changed the life of human.The powerful ability of computers accelerate the research in most of the fieldsto the great extent and it finally lead to the days that develop in a fabulousspeed no matter in sciences or technologies or others than any other time inhistory. Personal computer, internet, mass-media, web 2.0, the Human GenomeProject, space exploration, robots in production line, etc are all the contributionof the usage computer to some extent and nobody could ignore that without thehelp of the these machines, only the function of human's brain cannot do athing.（怎么说呢好象和MIND完全没有关系啊,算不算有点骗啊,可以说有了机械的帮助发展了人的智能,不过还是觉得离题了,可以把这一段做引子引下一段,不过篇幅好象又长了点.）

In the third place, machines also bringsome potential threats and they deserve to be carefully  [url=http://www.iciba.com/search?s=carefully][/url] weighed. Generally speaking, the common people don not have strong feel thatthey are facing threat to their dally life in modern society but this is alsothe crucial part that whether we can live without the help of the machines justlike baker, mobile phones, internet and home computers, vehicles, planes,tractors, lights etc? Can you milk or culture? Can you bear the day commutingon your foot especially in a sandal made by roots and grass not yourcomfortable shoes? Can you stand the day without lights and even the electricpower or cannot easily reach to your relatives or lover when you consider thatthey may be in danger. Somebody may find this is funny and will not happen infuture and the day will be increasingly improved but I am not one of thembecause the world will not act just as human’s anticipation. What about catastrophesor wars’ occurs in a sudden, and someday we wake up found that we lay on theground with nothing left but debris and corpses, how could we survive?Therefore, we should realize that our good modern life is based on a high levelin any period time in the past, teaching people despite them are adult orchildren how to survive is quite essential to our species.(the  progress of society not mean high intellect level.)

Last but not the least, in the new century,we brought in both new expectations and new challenges and changes and may benew, potential and most vital threat - artificial intelligence (the AI).Notwithstanding it is the scenario in video-game, movies, cartoons, novel etcand most of people has taken no attention to this. But it attract the interestof the scientists and moralists, the former have highly curiosity to the AI butthe latter are highly worried about whether the machines or robots who havehighly intellect or even they smarter than human will influence the life of oursand they consider that the with the powerful compute ability, the machines withAI will finally destroy human beings. It sounds like a movie a scenario likewhat I point about, however, the “crazy things” spaceship to the moon(spacecraft), clairvoyance (telephone), eyes in the sky (satellite) etc in the fantasticnovel in 18th century had already come true.这一段好象可以

To sum up, from what I have discussedabove, we can reach to the point that the human do have some predominance tothe machines especially on thinking and creativity. Nonetheless, depends on thefact that our modern life have absolutely based on machines, we should alsorealize that the ability of survive without modern technologies has greatlyweaken for the depending on the machines and the potential threat in a farfuture – nothing is impossible.

写的长是好事不过要是理由牵强就大打折扣了,文中提到的科技的坏处如果每一点都回归到MIND就没有问题了.还有你开头强调的ＡＬＷＡＹＳ好象也分析的不是很清楚．

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ＬＺ有是昼夜奋战实在是太厉害了，学习学习

斯普特尼克UID: 2171287

这一题写的确实不好，十分感谢