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[未归类] issue59 [0710G 戴三个表冲刺小组] 第五次作业 [复制链接]

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发表于 2007-8-1 21:05:01 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
超时不说,此篇本身写的巨烂无比,巨烂无比阿巨烂无比
考试千万别抽中,太讨厌政治题材了

提纲:
1.Admittedly榜样背后的故事,提供人们学习的方向。Hard working,continually strive for dreams,不是没有道理
2.Nonetheless个体之间的差异,不能完全模仿。环境,身体原因。
3.so保持独立,坚持自己的理想。去发现榜样背后的精神,来激励自身。


TOPIC: ISSUE59 - "Too much emphasis is placed on rolemodels. Instead of copying others, people should learn to think and actindependently and thus make the choices that are best for them."
WORDS: 440         TIME: 00:49:58          DATE: 2007-8-1下午 05:28:57

With the growing concentration of whether the mass shouldput too much emphasis on the role models, the author gives his negate statementwith the explanation that a person should learn to be a independent individualand make their own choices when facing affairs but just follows the models'"lead". In this era, I partly agree with the author's conclusion tosome extent, however, the topic is not that simple than the author's statementand he ignored several potential factors behind this topic and I will revealthese below.

In the first place and to begin with, it is common that therole models play important part in the society especially in the field ofeducation whether the people in the educational institutions or at theemployment. The role models often are the outstanding examples to be given tomotivate the students in each level in the teaching, including primary school,middle school or even in the college. Successful achievements in diverse fieldsgained by these role models or just their great fascination preformed in theirleadership or any other excellent personality or self sacrifice for thenation's advantage are all will be the goals or the examples to the learnersand these positive characteristic involved in the role models will absolutelybenefit to the whole society.

In the second place, we cannot just focus our concentrationon the distinguished persons' achievement, but put more attention on the greatpersonality of them which is the key-point of their success. Many peoplecomplain that the god does not give them the fortune of wisdom, beauty,leadership, riches or genius, but in fact they are just did not treat or toexplore their endowment. Just like the Edison,great inventor of US, says: the 1% percent genius is necessary indeed, but the99% percent of hardworking sprit is the crucial part. Ignoring the backgroundof the role models or we say the background of the success will not lead toindividual advancement.

Nonetheless, the advisement in author's statement is alsosomewhat reasonable and considerable and which is cannot be ignored. Theindividual differences between the role models and the person; the unlike erasthat the models live; the dissimilar social customs and circumstance are allprove that simply copy the role models is impossible and unpractical. We cannotbe "another" and the only way we have is to strive for our own dreambut compare ourselves to the famous person like: I want to be another Plato!The most distinguished person never tried to conquer the others but they justconquer themselves. The independent and realize the disadvantages of us is themost significant ground to improve our self, just to act like those well-knownpersons' - conquer our self and do our best.
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