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  你认为接下来20 年汽车使用会不会减少

According to a survey made by WWW.DAIYUN.COM 60% of people claimed that they supported the idea of in the next 20 years there will be a continuly increasing in using cars. For the reason who want to live more convinse and work more effictively, there is a chance to get close to their dreams by purchasing cars. Others insist on maintaining that the number of cars will be decrease because of people pay more attention on enviroment. I agree with the former, everybody confess that using cars save much time and bring much benefit.

The advantage of using cars can never be exaggerated. First of all, one of significant point is that using cars can can make their lives more comfortable. For instance,next time he or she go shopping, they can buy more groceries owing to have a car. Instead of carrying things by hand, their cars will help them a lot. Further more, when they want to go somewhere with a friend they can give a lift to them, such as go to a restaurant.

Another obvious benefit they can gained from using a car is that can save much time. In today’s fast pead live style, time means everyng. For example, one of my best friend named JARRY, he need to communicate a remarkable variety of people on workdays. He waste much time on waiting for buses or riding on bike. On the contray, by using a car, he can meet 10 more people than beofore. We all experienced the frustraction of waiting for a bus, by using a car such the problem will disappear automaticly.

Of course, considering the environment, some people hold the idea that in the nest 20 years the using of cars will be reduce. The fun of driving is one thing, while how to deal with the consequence is another. It is estimated that every year the government of china spend 12% of its finace incom to tackle the enviroment damage caused by automobiles.

Although the envionmental problems should be paid more attention, the convience which using cars bring to us is more considerable. Form what we discuss above, we can certainly draw a conclusion that in the next 20 years there will be more and more people choose to make a use of cars.

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According to a survey made by WWW.DAIYUN.COM 60% of people claimed that they supported the idea of in the next 20 years there will be a continuly increasing in using cars. For the reason(person吧) who want to live more convinse(convenience) and work more effictively, there is a chance to get close to their dreams by purchasing cars. Others insist on maintaining that the number of cars will be decrease because of(/) people pay more attention on enviroment. I agree with the former, everybody confess that using cars (动词都是单数,其实应该前面加个would)save much time and bring much benefit.|
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The advantage of using cars can never be exaggerated(这句想说啥意思呀没看明白). First of all, one of significant point is that using cars can can make their lives more comfortable. For instance,next time he or she go shopping, they can buy more groceries owing to have a car. Instead of carrying things by hand, their cars will help them a lot. Further more, when they want to go somewhere with a friend they can give a lift to them, such as go to a restaurant.

Another obvious benefit they can gained from using a car is that it can save much time. In today’s fast pead live style, time means everyng. For example, one of my best friend named JARRY, he need to communicate a remarkable variety of people on workdays. He waste(时态) much time on waiting for buses or riding on bike. On the contray, by using a car, he can meet 10 more people than beofore. We all experienced the frustraction of waiting for a bus, by using a car such the(/) problem will disappear automaticly.bbs

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Of course, considering the environment, some people hold the idea that in the nest 20 years the using of cars will be reduce. The fun of driving is one thing, while how to deal with the consequence is another. It is estimated that every year the government of china spend 12% of its finace incom to tackle the enviroment damage caused by automobiles.（这个数据放在这有点不大合适，如果要是我来看，12%已经足够严重了……这个要比个人的方便更有说服力）

Although the envionmental problems should be paid more attention, the convience which using cars bring to(/) is more considerable. Form what we discuss above, we can certainly draw a conclusion that in the next 20 years there will be more and more people choose to make a use of cars.

楼大还是好好练练单词拼写吧，用WORD不是长久之计啊……考试时这么多拼写错误很可能会拉分的，控制在五六个以内还可以接受。
总的思路不错，但说的点过多可能导致每个都不是很精，以后可以考虑一下侧重其中的某两点或一点集中深入的论述一下。

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上次我该过你的作文，你什么时候考啊？