In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay
Currently the issue regarding to human’s average life length, tantalizingly, draws a large amount of universal attention. It is said we all live longer than the people in old days. As far as I am concerned, typically, this achievement could be attributed to a variety of reasons judging from divergent aspects including the development of technology, the improvement of living condition, and the change in citizens’ mind towards health.
To begin with, undoubtedly, our technologies pertaining to medicine develop in a never existed before rapid pace. That means it would be possible for us to cure the disease which tortures us years ago. For example, once prevalent demon “smallpox” would no longer threaten mortals’ lives due to the discovery of solution from a cattle worker and thorough obliterating after that. And its attempting would result in vain if it appears again because we already learned how to defend it. Thus, admittedly, the rate of death caused by diseases decreases dramatically.[首段说的是个大范围，科技发展，这段却只说了科技发展的一个小方面医疗吧，那还不如在首段直接就说医疗发展。。欢迎讨论！]
Moreover, the peace and harmony of today’s society guarantee the constant improving of our living condition. For instance, in comparison with those in old days, our food becomes more prodigal[感觉这次用在这好夸张啊] and cheap(cheaper) therefore offer us tremendous selections. This is mainly because our production and cultivation are no longer disturbed by wars or turbulence, assuring the consecutive functioning of food manufacture.
In addition, thanks to the research from scientists and the knowledge propagating by mass media people at present possesses a much better opinion towards health than before. Putting the description into a more pragmatic situation, people might be told to pursue physical fulfilment and spontaneously, satiate themselves in an extravagant lifestyle, which probably serves as a poison ruining people’s life spiritually and physically. Things all change a lot in today’s society. Suitable amount of sports and reasonably designed diets prevail widely result[resulting?,也不知我断句对否。。] from the mental advancement which, not only helps us realize what a rational lifestyle is like, but also stimulate further exploration in the area of keeping healthy.
Virtually more factors should be taken into account, however, at personal level, these three reasons are leading catalysts which makes our lives longer.[这句有问题吧，“原因引导催化剂？？！！”]
The most popular sports activity in my country is table tennis. There three reason for its prevailing.
First of all, the rules are easy to understand and therefore everyone could take a shot
Moreover, its physical requirements are less strict than other sports such as football, basketball, so no matter children or the old, they could enjoy table tennis with concentration on skill advancement. It’s exciting but relatively lower accident rate.
In addition, our athletes have won a lot of rewards of table tennis in international competition. It is kind of pride for us.
题目说的是describe[我觉得就是具体描述一下之类的.......],,,,没说让你explain啊。。。关于这个不知我理解对不对，好乱..................................................我觉得要改的话，把“There three reason for its prevailing”，这句改改吧，下面的三个理由都可以当描述用吧...........
发表于 2007-7-16 00:09:41
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