Issue177 taotaoQ(COFFEE)第一次限时,留链互拍哦!!!

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题号        177        题材分类        学习类        考频       
题材倾向        知识对于人类的影响
177. "The study of an academic discipline alters the way we perceive the world. After studying the discipline, we see the same world as before, but with different eyes."
  
对于一门学科的研究会改变我们对世界的看法。在学习这门学科之后，我们看到的世界一如既往，但是我们本身的角度和眼光已然不同
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完全同意        1：完全同意 2：完全反对 3：中立态度 4：大正小负 5：大负小正
中文提纲
中文        论证        例证
1        深：对一门学科的研究，可以发掘出以前不能认识的问题的答案，不断引领进步，甚至可以衍生出其它新学科，对世界多一个角度的探索。         空间科学和空间技术：原子物理学的发展对激光技术的产生和发展，作出过很大的贡献。激光出现以后，用激光技术来研究原有物理学问题，实验精度有了很大提高，因此又发现了很多新现象和新问题
2        广：对一门学科的学习，可以提供多一种看世界的角度或方法，从而使我们的认识更加完整和立体，避免简单地看问题的弱点       economics: 一切影响我们生活的经济活动（举例）为何发;对别的文化的对比可看出自己文化的特点，以自己的文化特征为豪，避免盲目乐观或自卑。
3        从而会改变我们对对待人、事、物的态度和处理方法，更理智更开阔       
               
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In relation to the great world, human being is really so innocent that know little about the big and mysterious world. Because of the curiosity of humans, people continually explore the unknown world to become wisdom. The study of academic discipline is one of effective ways to learn the global we live in, even better than other methods, for some characteristics of which are direct, profound and extensive. With the help of education, we could perceive the same world in a more objective manner, and see the same world from so many points which enable us to know it from all sides.

In the realm of academy, through studying an academic discipline, clearer world would reveal in the reason of that old knowledge would develop to be fresh new and more profound knowledge could be explored. Unsettled problem in the past no longer trouble us after in-depth research, that is to say, the truth of the world would be realized after solving the problem by study it. Further more, we could see the world broader and wider, which result of abundant new fields of academic discipline would be found out during the process of deeply researching. For instance, after long and hard researching on physics, atomic physics generated, which provide people a branch to explore the kingdom of physics. Next, taking great effort in studying atomic physics persistently influence greatly on the development of micro wave. And the advancement of micro wave does large favor of atomic physic in reason of promoting the precision of experiment result.  While the new findings offer our new perception on the same world.

By education, knowledge in various fields offered to people, which is the same as various tools provided to people to deal with the affairs in the world. Through learning economics, the laws of economic activity could be found out, which could be useful in solving problem of economic. Such as economic crisis lead to trade depression, break the balance between demands and supply which directly impede the development of society. Since the equilibrium of demand and supply has been dug up, people could realize the nature of the economic and easily operate the activity of economics. In addition, learning culture from other nation broaden people's views, also their minds. Compared with else culture which is totally different from own, the characteristic and peculiarity of own culture would rise to the surface. Then people need not to be blindly optimistic without knowing advantages of other culture, meanwhile, it is not necessary to be mindless pessimistic for having taken cognizance of own supreme. Hence, with capacious mind by education, people could treat the world much more insightfully and tolerantly than ever before.

In conclusion, the study of an academic discipline offers people more and wider sights to perceive the world. And the world is the same as previous. However, individuals are deeply influenced by kinds of knowledge accepted from education, which represent on their changing of minds and behaviors toward to the original world.

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1  深：对一门学科的研究，可以发掘出以前不能认识的问题的答案，不断引领进步，甚至可以衍生出其它新学科，对世界多一个角度的探索。空间科学和空间技术：原子物理学的发展对激光技术的产生和发展，作出过很大的贡献。激光出现以后，用激光技术来研究原有物理学问题，实验精度有了很大提高，因此又发现了很多新现象和新问题

2  广：对一门学科的学习，可以提供多一种看世界的角度或方法，从而使我们的认识更加完整和立体，避免简单地看问题的弱点economics: 一切影响我们生活的经济活动（举例）为何发;对别的文化的对比可看出自己文化的特点，以自己的文化特征为豪，避免盲目乐观或自卑。
1，2两个提纲很出色啊
3  从而会改变我们对对待人、事、物的态度和处理方法，更理智更开阔        
               

In relation to the great world, human being is really so innocent that know little about the big and mysterious world. Because of the curiosity of humans, people continually explore the unknown world to become wisdom（wise）. The study of academic discipline is one of effective ways to learn the global we live in, even better than other methods, for some characteristics of which are direct, profound and extensive. With the help of education, we could perceive the same world in a more objective manner, and see the same world from so many points which enable us to know it from all sides. 这个后半句话好像很重复啊，which从句可以完全不要

In the realm of academy, through studying an academic discipline, clearer world would reveal (be revealed?) in the reason of that old knowledge would develop to be fresh new and more profound knowledge could be explored. Unsettled problem（s） in the past no longer trouble us after in-depth research, that is to say, the truth of the world would be realized after solving the problem by study it. Further more, we could see the world broader and wider, which result of abundant new fields of academic discipline would be found out during the process of deeply researching.这个从句有问题which好像不对，你再看看 For instance, after long and hard researching on physics, atomic physics generated, which provide people a branch to explore the kingdom of physics. Next, taking great effort in studying atomic physics persistently influence greatly on the development of micro wave. And the advancement of micro wave does large favor of atomic physic in reason of promoting the precision of experiment result.  While the new findings offer our new perception on the same world.这句么有写完吗？

By education, knowledge in various fields （is） offered to people这句话很怪啊，offer用这里好像不太合适, which is the same as various tools provided to people to deal with the affairs in the world. Through learning economics, the laws of economic activity could be found out, which could be useful in solving problem of economic. Such as economic crisis lead to trade depression, break the balance between demands and supply which directly impede the development of society. Since the equilibrium of demand and supply has been dug up, people could realize the nature of the economic and easily operate the activity of economics. In addition, learning culture from other nation broaden people's views, also their minds. Compared with else culture（这个什么意思？） which is totally different from own, the characteristic and peculiarity of own culture would rise to the surface. Then people need not to be blindly optimistic without knowing advantages of other culture, meanwhile, it is not necessary to be mindless pessimistic for having taken cognizance of own supreme. Hence, with capacious mind by education, people could treat the world much more insightfully and tolerantly than ever before.

In conclusion, the study of an academic discipline offers people more and wider sights to perceive the world.And the world is the same as previous. However, individuals are deeply influenced by kinds of knowledge accepted from education, which represent on their changing of minds and behaviors toward to the original world. 说的在理，赞一个

整体很好，讲了知识让我们观察世界，处理事情更加客观，理智，不过语言还要再提高，一鸺佑屠?

作为一篇限时作文，很不错了

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十分谢谢批改！！
哎呀!!
我的语言还是那么蹩脚，这次连从句都没弄顺了！！！