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issue11 “ All nations should help support the development of a global university designed to engage students in the progress of solving the world’s most persistent social problems.”

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I strongly agree with the speaker that we should set up a global university to solve the common problems of all the countries. As in recent years, we have a lot of problems that cannot be solved by a country independently, thus there will be much benefit if we found such a university under the condition that we take care of some small problems it might bring to us.

Though there are so many differences between countries around the world, they have many problems in common. That's because country is just political concept, yet in fact, our human being is a big family on our motherland, earth, thus we have similar problems, which, sometimes, need a combination of many countries to solve. Take the most focused environment problems for example. As we are on the same earth, any country cannot separate itself from others, and we all live in the same environment, thus the environment problems need the countries to cooperate with others, such as the solution of Greenhouse Effect. All the countries from the world should make their effort to protect the ozone in the aerosphere. The fact now is that protection work is well done in developed country, while many developing countries have no such technology and money to do this job. So as well as they need economical help, they also need there students to be educated professionally to solve such problems. The same education should be made to solve the common problems of world wars, religion, cultural collision, international economics and so on. Some of the clashes from different countries are because of the differences between their culture, economical development and so forth. Thus found such university could give them a chance to communicate with each other, therefore it will help release the collisions on the earth.

Also because there are differences of economy and political state, the university might have the problem of discrimination. They should not treat the students in different way because they are from countries with different power. If they do so, they just magnify the problems instead of solve them. All the students should receive equal education; however, the entire faculty must pay special attention to the differences between the countries, because when they treat practical problems, they face different situations in their own country.

In sum, while we have so many problems that can only be solved by a combined organization, people all around the world will gain the benefit from the university, if the university is well operated. In such university, when all the student are equally treated, there will be no affection of the super powers and the world political can be more democratic, then the world problems, especially political problems can be solve more easily.
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发表于 2006-7-28 02:42:35 |只看该作者

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I strongly agree with the speaker that we should set up a global university to solve the common problems of all the countries. As in recent years, we have a lot of problems that cannot be solved by a country independently, thus there will be much benefit if we found such a university under the condition that we take care of some small problems it might bring to us.

Though there are so many differences between countries around the world, they have many problems in common. That's because country is just political concept, yet in fact, our human being is a big family[chinglish] on our motherland, earth, thus we have similar problems, which, sometimes, need a combination of many countries to solve. Take the most focused environment problems[离题了,是关于解决社会问题] for example. As we are on the same earth, any country cannot separate itself from others, and we all live in the same environment, thus the environment problems need the countries to cooperate with others, such as the solution of Greenhouse Effect. All the countries from the world should make their effort to protect the ozone in the aerosphere. The fact now is that protection work is well done in developed country, while many developing countries have no such technology and money to do this job. So as well as they need economical help, they also need there students to be educated professionally to solve such problems. The same education should be made to [chinglish]solve the common problems of world wars, religion, cultural collision, international economics and so on. Some of the clashes from different countries are because of the differences between their culture, economical development and so forth. Thus found such university could give them a chance to communicate with each other, therefore it will help release[relax] the collisions on the earth.

Also because there are differences of economy and political state, the university might have the problem of discrimination. They should not treat the students in different way because they are from countries with different power.[chinglish] If they do so, they just magnify the problems instead of solve[solving] them. All the students should receive equal education; however, the entire faculty must pay special attention to the differences between the countries, because when they treat practical problems, they face different situations in their own country.

In sum, while we have so many problems that can only be solved by a combined organization, people all around the world will gain the[the去掉] benefit from the university, if the university is well operated. In such [a]university, when all the student are equally treated, there will be no affection of the super powers[super powers什么东西] and the world political can be more democratic, then the world problems, especially political problems can be solve[solved] more easily.
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