Issue141 【LOVEAW小组】第3次作业

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141"Most people recognize the benefits of individuality, but the fact is that personal economic success requires conformity."

As the speaker said, in this era of the world, when facing the great economic achievements, society concentrates too much on the benefits of individuality, nevertheless, neglect the significant of conformity. In my opinion, people should owe the personal economic accomplishment only to the benefits of individuality but to the conformity and never place undue emphasis on either aspect.

There is no denying that, individuality, which derives from innovation, is the original imputes of grabbing the maximum business profit. Ever since Bill Gates introduced a entirely astounding operation system named DOS, which firstly actualized the direct communication between human and computers, to the world, he have always been benefited from his distinctive product like Windows and Office, which make the Microsoft the globally biggest software corporation. Specific dancer with curious steps, despite of disharmony, will always catch more eye balls than those mediocre ones. It is the same case in business. To evaluate an attractive product, we should look into whether it has a unique feature or not to raise it above thousands of similar ones. With the progress of modem business, trade is no more than a grim struggle for survival. Today’s market is enormous, international, and dynamic, the key word of it is no doubt the information, which resulting the rapid outmoded of even the most brilliantly designed product, which call for the innovation. As looking around, one will easily be conscious of the pressure to innovate on every business. The importance of innovation is blared daily in the headline of business magazines, the presentations of consultants, the books and conferences of business visionaries. In other words, innovation is the characteristic of this epoch.

However, on the other hand, conformity is another crucial precondition of successful economic achievements. Conformity is behaving in the way in which others around us do. As human beings, we are social creatures who live with others and relate to them. From our earliest moment of consciousness, we begin to learn the importance to get along with others. Even though people all know that it is no more painful to a child than being separated from the group or society, if related to the business, conformity is always concealed by the dazzle gleams of individuality’s charm. Fundamentally, nevertheless, no one can win the war of business without taking conformity into account. It is said that when we run a company, besides the innovation of techniques and operations, we should also abidance the economic laws, satisfy consumers’ needs, and cooperate with other emulators. Steve Jobs, the president of Apple, once said: “Don’t let others’ ideas inundate your inner voice.” It is the reflection of Steve Jobs’ specific character, so is Apple. A recent survey conducted by Boston Consulting and published on Business Week showed a list of top innovative company of world, the first name on it is Apple. However, if seeing from a whole picture, the situation of Apple may not be so encouraging. Comparing to the 34% of DELL, Apple merely swallowed 4.5% of the PC market in native America during last year. Yet what’s the causes for such an embarrass situation. It is innovation that created Apple, and it is also blindly innovation that is pushing it to the death. It is a shame that despite of its superior performance on the graphic disposal and artistic designed, it is not capable to compatible with software which is extensively supported and designed for traditional personal computers. Being uncompromising at this point, Apple refuses to collaborate with Microsoft, overlooking the real needs of consumers, definitely are bound to be forsaken.

Thus, when admiring a superstar on business, spirit of conformity should be mentioned beside the individuality. Any undue emphasis on either side will result in a decline of outstanding achievement. Blindly emphasizing on the individuality without the conformity result in isolationism; however, too much emphasis on the conformity will inhibit the originality.

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As the speaker said, in this era of the world, when facing the great economic achievements, society concentrates too much on the benefits of individuality, nevertheless, neglect the significant of conformity. In my opinion, people should owe the personal economic accomplishment (没有not的话这句话看上去是不是有点astonishing了...) only to the benefits of individuality but to the conformity and never place undue emphasis on either aspect.

There is no denying that, individuality, which derives from innovation, is the original imputes of grabbing the maximum business profit. (炫) Ever since Bill Gates introduced a entirely astounding operation system named DOS, which firstly actualized the direct communication between human and computers, to the world, he have always been benefited from his distinctive product like Windows and Office, which make the Microsoft the globally biggest software corporation. Specific dancer with curious steps, despite of disharmony, will always catch more eye balls than those mediocre ones. (这句好像太玄了一点) It is the same case in business. To evaluate an attractive product, we should look into whether it has a unique feature or not to raise it above thousands of similar ones. (stop, specific 跟individual有必然联系么?应该点一下吧.....sigh,好像又要涉及到individual跟conformity的理解问题了...你是不是认为individual就是'特别的'意思?这个问题明天最好发个帖子汇总问一下,很多issue题目里面一些词的理解都蛮让人迷茫的) (怎么忽然跳到下一句的?) With the progress of modem business, trade is no more than a grim struggle for survival. Today's market is enormous, international, and dynamic, the key word of it is no doubt the information, which resulting the rapid outmoded of even the most brilliantly designed product, which call for the innovation. (这个...可以连续用两个which么...) As looking around, one will easily be conscious of the pressure to innovate on every business. The importance of innovation is blared daily in the headline of business magazines, the presentations of consultants, the books and conferences of business visionaries. In other words, innovation is the characteristic of this epoch. (看得我有点晕.先讲了specific,中间忽然没有任何转折来了个information,最后又归结到innovation了...没怎么看懂...)

However, on the other hand, conformity is another crucial precondition of successful economic achievements. Conformity is behaving in the way in which others around us do. (跟我理解的一样...可惜跟书不一样...shit明天一定要去发贴子问一下!!) As human beings, we are social creatures who live with others and relate to them. From our earliest moment of consciousness, we begin to learn the importance to get along with others. Even though people all know that it is no more painful to a child than being separated from the group or society, if related to the business, conformity is always concealed by the dazzle gleams of individualitys charm. (前面句子虽然很漂亮,但都是bit around the bush) Fundamentally, nevertheless, no one can win the war of business without taking conformity into account. It is said that when we run a company, besides the innovation of techniques and operations, we should also abidance the economic laws, satisfy consumers' needs, and cooperate with other emulators. Steve Jobs, the president of Apple, once said: "Don't let others' ideas inundate your inner voice." It is the reflection of Steve Jobs' specific character, so is Apple. (这句话不是individual的观点吗???) A recent survey conducted by Boston Consulting and published on Business Week showed a list of top innovative company of world, the first name on it is Apple. However, if seeing from a whole picture, the situation of Apple may not be so encouraging. Comparing to the 34% of DELL, Apple merely swallowed 4.5% of the PC market in native America during last year. Yet what's the causes for such an embarrass situation. It is innovation that created Apple, and it is also blindly innovation that is pushing it to the death. (天哪,绕了这么大一个弯子原来是为了这里啊.那么个人感觉那个survey就够了,Steve的那段话就可以删了) It is a shame that despite of its superior performance on the graphic disposal and artistic designed, it is not capable to compatible with software which is extensively supported and designed for traditional personal computers. Being uncompromising at this point, Apple refuses to collaborate with Microsoft, overlooking the real needs of consumers, definitely are bound to be forsaken. (虽然段落很长,但是真正的论证真的很少,都是在举例.sigh)

Thus, when admiring a superstar on business, spirit of conformity should be mentioned beside the individuality. Any undue emphasis on either side will result in a decline of outstanding achievement. Blindly emphasizing on the individuality without the conformity result in isolationism; however, too much emphasis on the conformity will inhibit the originality. (草率了一点~不过现在我自己的结尾也就那个样了呵呵.)

(语言还是很强,建议加强正面的论证.强攻的能力必不可少啊!)