issue157

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Issue157  第2篇 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧！
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作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户     共用时间：43分34秒     560 words
从2005年7月2日21时39分到2005年7月2日22时43分
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There is no such thing as purely objective observation. All observation is subjective; it is always guided by the observer's expectations or desires.
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When it comes to the issue of whether there exist objective observations, different people may have different opinions based on their distinct ideology and experience of lives. As far as I am concerned, due to my own observation of life, I fundamentally agree with the notion that although the observation of people usually reflects the subjective ideas of them, there still exist some facts which are stubborn or unchangeable. So it is a case by case issue.

First of all, people in different countries often have different ideologies which lead to their distinct cognition to a certain thing. Consider, for example, the students like me who have been brought up in a socialism country. We have been insert the ideology of materialism when we were very young and been told that material is the basis of the world and it determines the mental. Under such circumstance, students have little choice but to accept the idea that all the observations are objective, for they are the reflection of the material. However, when we are growing up and have learned more knowledge, our angle to this world gradually changes. We receive a totally new kind of ideology called mentalism which believes that the observation of the people roots from one's soul and is the reflection of one's mind. Yet, it is actually a case by case issue due to my own observation of life.

On the one hand, some observations are subjective and would change due to different people's feelings. Such a parlance could be illustrated by an old story I have heard when I was a child. There are there are three men who are looking at a flying flag. One of them shouts "Look! The flag is moving!", while the other says "No, it's wind rather than the flag that is moving!" The last man keeps silence for a moment and then concludes "You are both wrong, it's the heart which is moving." From this story, we can see that different people would get different answers to the same phenomena, and no one can deny the fact that their observations are purely subjective. Such examples are so numerous to mention.

On the other hand, some observations are objective and could not be changed by people's feelings. For example. in the realm of history, though the evaluation of an event in the history would vary a lot due to different people, the events already happened  are stubborn and could not be changed. The event that several Puritans escaped from the main land of Great Britain and established the independent and democratic nation United Stated would be a lasting page in human history. As for scientific research such as chemistry research, the observation of the result of a experiment keeps unchanged from different people. If the color of the medicine became red, you can't say it's blue. So from these examples, we can get the conclusion that though the observation of people usually reflects the subjective ideas of them, there still exist some facts which are stubborn or unchangeable.

To sum up, due to the above mentioned reasons, which sometimes intertwine to form an organic whole and thus become more persuasive than any one of them, we may safely arrive at the conclusion that whether observation is subjective or objective depends on the certain events, so it is a case by case issue.

polymathUID: 179557

哦！时间掌握的很不错呢！羡慕中！偶打字慢死了！:L

顶一下！大家都来学习修改啊！集体的力量是无穷的 :)

polymathUID: 179557

怎么还没有人来修改啊！我来看看了！对不住了！:D


------题目------
There is no such thing as purely objective observation. All observation is subjective; it is always guided by the observer's expectations or desires.
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When it comes to the issue of whether there exist objective observations, different people may have different opinions based on their distinct ideology and experience of lives. As far as I am concerned, due to my own observation of life, I fundamentally agree with the notion that although the observation of people usually reflects the subjective ideas of them, there still exist some facts which are stubborn or unchangeable。 So it is a case by case issue.开头写的非常好，一破一立，表明了你的观点是address on a case-by-case basis!赞！

First of all, people in different countries often have different ideologies which lead to their distinct cognition to a certain thing. Consider, for example, the students like me who have been brought up in a socialism country. We have been insert the ideology of materialism when we were very young and been told that material is the basis of the world and it determines the mental. Under such circumstance, students have little choice but to accept the idea that all the observations are objective, for they are the reflection of the material. However, when we are growing up and have learned more knowledge, our angle可数，angles to this world gradually changeschange. We receive a totally new kind of ideology called mentalism 整句有语病！后面作个修改！which believes and this conception contends that the observation of the people roots from one's soul and is the reflection of one's mind. Yet, Thusit is actually a case by case issue due to my own observation of life.该段主要从国籍或者说文化差异角度谈观察的客观性和主观性

On the one hand, some observations are subjective and would change换个词！太单调了！用vary due to different people's feelings. Such a parlance could be illustrated by an old story I have heard when I was a childI heard in my childhood. There are there are重复！ three men who are looking at a flying flag. One of them shouts "Look! The flag is moving!", while the other says "No, it's wind rather than the flag that is moving!" The last man keeps silence for a moment and then concludes "You are both wrong, it's the heart which is moving." From this story, we can see that different people would get different answers toaccording to the same phenomenaphenomenon,你写的是复数形式, and no one can deny the fact that their observations are purely subjective. 这个结论有点绝对吧！Such examples are so numerous to mention. On the one hand用的很不好！好像另开一题，与上面的first怎么关联？最后的总结也不是有说服力！

On the other hand, some observations are objective and could not be changed by people's feelings. For example. in the realm of history, though the evaluation of an event in the history would vary a lot due to different people, the events already happened  are stubborn and could not be changedrevised好了！. The event that several Puritans escaped from the main land of Great Britain and established the independent and democratic nation United Stated-the United States of American-小心美国人骂你他国家的名字都写错了，那麻烦就大了 ！ would be a lasting page in human history. As for scientific research such as chemistry research, the observation of the result of a experiment keeps unchanged from different people. If the color of the medicine becameturned in red, you can't say it's blue. So from these examples, we can get the conclusion that though the observation of people usually reflects the subjective ideas of them, there still exist some facts which are stubborn or unchangeable.看完这段才知道你的 case by case issue是找出具体的客观性观察和主观性观察事例啊！怎么不归一下类，这样太笼统了！没有说服力。感觉只是在例举事实而已,比如可以从科学，文化，历史，政治的角度来一个case by case analysis.

To sum up, due to the above mentioned reasons, which sometimes intertwine to form an organic whole and thus become more persuasive than any one of them, we may safely arrive at the conclusion that whether observation is subjective or objective depends on the certain events, so it is a case by case issue.结尾的模板用的不错，但是后面的内容缺乏新意！


总评：不管怎么说，能够限时写出来这样一篇字数很多的文章已经很不错了！，但是除了前2段我好像找不错你的分析所在，问题已经在文中指出，希望整理一下思路，将后面的部分再写一遍！为你加油哦 ！:)

vico8478UID: 2120997

谢谢喽～