issue83 政府对自然环境的保护 必回拍。。好久没作品了。

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Issue83  第2篇 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧！
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作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户     共用时间：44分38秒     344 words
从2005年6月22日21时47分到2005年6月22日22时44分
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Government should preserve publicly owned wilderness areas in their natural state, even though these areas are often extremely remote and thus accessible to only a few people.
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Nowadays, the issue of whether publicly owned wilderness areas should be preserved in their natural state has been brought to public attention. I strongly recommend that wilderness areas should be kept in their natural state. Just because protecting wilderness help improve our earth environment as well as help improve the health of human beings.

To begin with, earth environment will keep staying in a good cycle if publicly owned wilderness areas can keep their natural state. Today, with the development of our society, wilderness areas are declining day by day. If such situation goes on, all of our children will have no chance to touch the wild nature, even they cannot see them from the televisions. As all people know, keeping the environment in its natural state has great importance to our contemporary society and to our future. Even though today's situation has changed greatly, human beings should not allow wilds disappear from their eyes totally. If such case happens, earth's environment will be destroyed severely. Today, weather changes so much and people often have no idea about how it presents before it alter its style.

Moreover, preserving wilderness areas do benefit human's healthy state. If all wilds can be protected by government, and all wilds are not allowed to explore by everyone, human being will live in a comfortable environment, breathe in a more fresh air. Everyone is eager to stay in a healthy situation without ails, without diseases, without fatal bacteria. In natual world, all things have their natural enemies and they are also other things' enemies. Therefore, the whole world keep balance, and develop healthily. If more and more wilderness areas disappear, more and more animals, plants, beneficial bacteria will live us.

Admittedly, wild places are often extremely remote and thus accessible to only a few people, such places still have their values to keep in their natural state. Conversely, just these reasons make it important to preserve such places.

In conclusion, it must be unavoidable that our government should do something to protect publicly owned wilderness areas in their natural state.

sharon84UID：2110816

嗯，第二段从自然的角度出发，第三段从人的角度谈，第四段具体谈边远地区
论点结构挺清晰
不过还有待详细展开哦
限时没写完吧？:p

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谢谢呢。。大家努力加油。。

应该太久没写了。主要是花很多时间看题目。晕