issue103 [0710G ＋U Aug小组]第2次作业 ldsun

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This issue presents a point of view that only it is relevant to our daily lives that the study of history is valuable. We surely know the considerable part that the study of history plays, however, with my reflection, I believe all kinds of history study exist their own value. History of the earth, history of the animal, history of science, etc, we can find lots of specific history which are irrelevant to our daily lives. Close examination of them, we find their value just at the corner.

To begin with, the study of history which is irrelevant to daily lives tried and is still trying to settle the fundamental problem of human world. I would like raise a classic question: "Where are we come from, and where are we going?"  The question has been entangling with human world all along, and nobody up to now can fully answer it. The study on this never stops, and the fruit we get from the study which can be called a kind of history makes us clear to some extent that who we are and what we are doing. This history which we find little to our daily lives actually plays as one strut of human mental world, and another one we turn to religion.

Secondly, history which is irrelevant to our daily lives makes human wiser than before. Take the world war two as an example. Through the study of that history, historian surely can find lots of factors which lead to that disaster and international politician must learn to prevent this event happening again. History of those days taught human an important lesson to coexist peacefully, although it has no relationship to our daily lives. Under this circumstance, it is obvious that the study of history which is irrelevant to our daily lives has very important value.

Admittedly, history that is relevant to daily lives has an easy-to-find value because it exists just around us. For example, history of computer which we are everyday using now gives us a picture of human intelligence, and indicates the scientist to invent more advanced ones; history of illness which contributes significantly to medical helps human becomes more health.

To sum up, at first glance it is not easy to find the value of the history that is irrelevant to our daily lives, but when we look into further, we find that it is the value contributed by that history help human settle the most basic and fundamental problem. So I am afraid I can not make the same conclusion when talking about history as the issue presents.

[ 本帖最后由 ldsun 于 2007-7-26 18:38 编辑 ]

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This issue presents a point of view that only it is relevant to our daily lives that the study of history is valuable. We surely know the considerable part that the study of history plays, however, with my reflection, I believe all kinds of history study exist their own value（我想到黑格尔的话：存在即合理）. History of the earth, history of the animal, history of science, etc, we can find lots of specific history which are irrelevant to our daily lives. (Take)Close examination of them, we find their value just at the corner(at every corner 吧？at the corner何解释？).

To begin with, the study of history which is irrelevant to daily lives tried (用have tried可能更恰当)and is still trying to settle the fundamental problem of human world. I would like (to) raise a classic question: "Where are we come from, and where are we going?"  The question has been entangling with human world all along, and nobody up to now can fully answer it. The study on this(issue) never stops, and the fruit (好词）we get from the study which can be called a kind of history makes us clear to some extent that who we are and what we are doing. This history which we find little to our daily lives actually plays as one strut of human mental world, and another one we turn to religion.(religion似乎没有下文了，可以展开说，比如宗教对日常生活未必十分重要，但研究它却理解人们对于神、自然的认知过程）

Secondly, history which is irrelevant to our daily lives makes human wiser than before. Take the world war two as an example. Through the study of that history, historian surely can find lots of factors which lead to that disaster and international politician must learn to prevent this event happening (happen) again. History of those days taught human an important lesson to coexist peacefully, although it has no relationship to our daily lives. Under this circumstance, it is obvious that the study of history which is irrelevant to our daily lives has very important value.

Admittedly, history that is relevant to daily lives has an easy-to-find value because it exists just around us. For example, history of computer which we are everyday using now gives us a picture of human intelligence, and indicates the scientist to invent more advanced ones; history of illness which contributes significantly to medical helps human becomes ( to be)more health(healthy).

To sum up, at first glance it is not easy to find the value of the history that is irrelevant to our daily lives, but when we look into further, we find that it is the value contributed by that history (whether link to our daily lives or not, 点出主题) help human settle the most basic and fundamental problem. So I am afraid I can not make the same conclusion when talking about history as the issue presents. (总体框架不错，举出两个反例，和一个让步充分证明Issue的错误所在。字数方面可以再有所增加，Issue写个500，用词不难，但语句简洁）

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谢谢批发，辛苦了:)