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TOPIC: ISSUE87 - "In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important discoveries."
WORDS: 561          TIME: 上午 12:45:00          DATE: 2006-8-1
1 初学者，在发现上上有着自己的优势。1 由于刚进入该领域，思想上为被太多的规则，和旧的传统所束缚，能够使他们更容易从一个新的角度看问题。2 新手一般更努力，更有激情，对所接触的事物感觉新鲜对他们来说，每天都是一种挑战。在面对相同问题的时候，专家可能凭着经验，很容易就陷入原来的轨道中去。而新手可能更能去不同的交通去考虑问题，从而想出不同的解决方法。有些方法得当，可能就成为了新的发现。当然由于缺乏经验，可能也会要走一些弯路，毕竟他们的经验不足。

2 老专家，很明显也有自己的优点和缺点，他们的工作经验，和对工作的熟悉，使他们在看待问题的时候能够很快的进入到问题的主要部位上，这就比年轻人少走了很多弯路。另外，老专家在基础知识上也比较扎实，看待问题更加稳重。比如说医生这个行业，很明显，老医生要比新医生上处理问题更快一些，在面对同一病人的时候，可能老专家看病的时间远要比新手用的时间少。但是专家也有出错的时候，可能就不会象新手那样，很快就去从新检查问题，可能还是凭着经验，坚持自己的观点。事情总是在发展变化的，可能是因为事情变化了，使得专家的经验不再和以前一样适用了。而且由于是专家的意见，可能有的人就把错的也当成真的了，更容易使人误导。

3 因此在研究领域中，我们应该要发挥信任和专家的长处，同时也要注意避免他们的短处。最好的办法就是让他们在一起工作。一方面，新手可以为这个学科注入新的想法，另一方面还可以用自己的激情来工作，而老专家，可以把自己的经验传授给新人，并给予一定的知道。这种方法对于培养接班人，也是大有好处的。

According to the statement, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important discoveries. This view is shallow, notice history, we may easily to find out that many important discoveries are made by both experts and beginner. In my view, both beginner and expert have their advantages and disadvantages in making discoveries.

On the one hand, the beginner has their own advantages in making discoveries. After all, the beginner is more passional and enthusiastic in the field he engages. As they begin to plunge into new circumstances, everything is curious and fresh to them, which can inspire their enthusiasm and passion to work hard and make efforts to what they do. Furthermore, the new always bring along innovative thinking and new ideas, which is of great significance and profundity for making important discoveries. Unlike the experts, they might not be hedged by too much rules and regulations that it is more likely for them to find new ways for dealing with same situation. For instance, when faced the same situation, the expert would tend to depend on his experience to take traditional and classical method to solve, while for the beginner, he would be more willing to try new way. Sometimes, just because of their willing to try, they happened to make great discoveries. Nevertheless, owing to lack of experience, they might have to face more difficulties than the experts when encountering the same conditions, in other words, lacking experience become the blockage in making discoveries as well.

On the other hand, for the expert, as the beginner, they might also have their advantages and disadvantages in making discoveries. While they are less enthusiastic and passional as the beginner, their experiences enable them to deal with things in a short-cut way. Unlike the beginner, the expert are more skilled in finding out the central point of the issue, then concentrating on this point to solve problem or do further research. For example, in the field of medicine, an old and experienced doctor has ability to diagnose a disease just after listening to the patient's statement, which is far quicker than a new doctor. It is their experiences, accumulated by hundreds of thousands of cases, which make them familiar with every kind of disease. However, like everything else, the experience is not without its problems. Since everything is changing from time to time, the case before may be also different as compared with the present, the expert who fails to consider this point would make mistake as well. Due to their fame and dignity, when they make mistake, people would also accept them as true, which would become a catastrophe at the end. Meanwhile, to the beginner, it is easy to acknowledge that they are wrong, then reexamining and subsequently correcting the errors. In short, making discoveries is not the only monopoly for the beginner, as is the expert.

Final, we should incorporate the advantages of both the beginner and the expert; at the meanwhile we should be cautious to avoid their disadvantages. First, the beginner should inject new blood to the field they engage, while the experts should impart their valuable experiences to future generations. Only the time a field can progress smoothly and rapidly is when the beginner and the expert go hand in hand.

In sum, from what has been discussed above, we can safely draw the conclusion that we should make the beginner and expert collaborate to make efforts in making discoveries, regardless of who should be responsible for it.

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According to the statement, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important discoveries. This view is shallow, notice history, we may easily to find out that many important discoveries are made by both experts and beginner. In my view, both beginner and expert have their advantages and disadvantages in making discoveries.

On the one hand, the beginner has their own advantages in making discoveries. After all, the beginner is more passiona（passionate） and enthusiastic in the field he engages (in). As they begin to plunge into new circumstances, everything is curious and fresh to them, which can inspire (好象inspire后面只接人，这里有点Chinglish) their enthusiasm and passion to work hard and make efforts to what they do. Furthermore, the new always bring along innovative thinking and new ideas, which is of great significance and profundity for making important discoveries. Unlike the experts, they might not be hedged by too much rules and regulations (so) that it is more likely for them to find new ways for dealing with same situation. For instance,(后面是举例子吗？) when faced (facing) the same situation, the expert would tend to depend on his experience to take traditional and classical method to solve ( to solve 多余，to solve what? ), while for the beginner, he(怎么变成he了？) would be more willing to try new way(ways). Sometimes, just because of their willing to try, they happened (happens) to make great discoveries. Nevertheless, owing to lack of experience, they might have to face more difficulties than the experts when encountering the same conditions, in other words, lacking experience become the blockage in making discoveries as well.

On the other hand, for the expert, as the beginner, they might also have their advantages and disadvantages in making discoveries. While they are less enthusiastic and passional（passionate） as the beginner, their experiences enable them to deal with things in a short-cut way. Unlike the beginner, the expert are more skilled in finding out the central point of the issue, then concentrating on this point to solve problem or do further research. For example, in the field of medicine, an old and experienced doctor has ability to diagnose a disease just after listening to the patient's statement, which is far quicker than a new doctor. It is their experiences, accumulated by hundreds of thousands of cases, which （that）make them familiar with every kind of disease(every kind太绝对了吧！顶多也就most kinds). However, like everything else, the experience is not without its problems. Since everything is changing from time to time, the case before may be also different as(/) compared with the present, the expert who fails to consider this point would make mistake as well. Due to their fame and dignity, when they make mistake, people would also accept them as true, which would become a catastrophe at the end. Meanwhile, to the beginner, it is easy to acknowledge that they are wrong, then reexamining and subsequently correcting the errors. In short, making discoveries is not the only monopoly for the beginner, as is the expert.

Final(Finally), we should incorporate the advantages of both the beginner and the expert; at the meanwhile we should be cautious to avoid their disadvantages. First, the beginner should（could） inject new blood to the field they engage (in), while the experts should（could） impart their valuable experiences to future generations. Only the time a field can progress smoothly and rapidly is when the beginner and the expert go hand in hand.(最后这句怎么看都有点别扭，这样改似乎好点，Only When the beginner and the expert go hand in hand can a field progress smoothly and rapidly.)

In sum, from what has been discussed above, we can safely draw the conclusion that we should make the beginner and expert collaborate to make efforts in making discoveries, regardless of who should be responsible for it.

总结：
1.        首先字数很了不起，如果是按规定时间写完的话。
2.        论述道理很充分，但个人感觉没有例子的支撑还是会显得空洞，整篇唯一的一个例子就是disease diagnose，建议这方面多搜集搜集，论据可以有很多形式，anecdote，history，logion，comment等等。
3.        句式善于变化，但是一些措辞还是有写不地道，这点还是要多积累积累。

感谢楼主拍砖！

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最后一个句型是抄来的,硬套着用了,可能是别扭哦