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No field of study can advance significantly unless outsiders bring their knowledge and experience to that field of study.
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In contemporary world, with the highly development of all areas, knowledge from other realms have become more and more useful for certain study fields. In fact, if we take a look at any realm existing in the world, we can find that only with knowledge and experience from outsiders will they advance to a whole new level.观点提得很简洁
The most conspicuous realms must be the scientific areas. Take biology, one of the most noticeable sciences in modern world for example, if it was not because of the development of mechanics several hundred years ago, the microscope would never come out and thus all the breakthrough to microbiology would never happen, not saying that the highly developed cell biology, molecular biology in contemporary world. Likewise, if it was not because of the communication among computer science, statistics and biology, the course bioinformation will never came into being and thus the great plan of the Human Genome Programme will never come [这附近come用的比较多,要不换一个,emerge,or其他的] to us, let alone about the quite attractive field of gene therapy. .以上的例子举得非常有说服力 Additionally, not only in biology, but also in other scientific fields, many great breakthroughs [试试milestones] were brought about by knowledge from outsiders. If it were not because of the development of technology in mechanics and computer science, the important branch of chemistry----the analyzing chemistry or the invention of spaceships would not appear [这里最好把分析化学和空间科学分开来说,否则读者会把分号后面的内容与分号前内容混在一起读了] , therefore the exploration to the organic compounds and the outer space [好像是放在一起说的,看来是我没读懂] will not be able to benefit we human beings.这段的说理还是很清晰的,只是没明白为什么在最后把分析化学和太空研究放在一起说,望gladysry解释:)
An even more striking example of outside knowledge and experience bring to other fields' advancements may occur in the humanities and social areas which are always seemed [which always seems] as have [having] no relationships [单数] with the development of science and technology. For researches in archeology, the come out of the detecting machine with isotopes provided it a most accurate way to compute the real time of all the antiques they explored out and thus also helps a lot for the study of history because with the accurate time the antiques appeared, the historians can investigate the ancient culture more clearly and certainly. [这个例子太赞了,学习ing] Therefore the process of development of a culture can be understood more thoroughly. And even in the art field, the investigations of anatomy helped a lot for great artists such as Leonardo da Vinci and Michelangelo because with better understanding of bodies' structure, artists as painters and sculptors can represent the trueness more vividly. [好例子支持了这段的观点]
To sum up, no matter from which field's perspective, the study cannot advance significantly unless outsiders bring their knowledge and experience to them, and with the most highly development of all areas in modern world, it can be predicted that the mutual communication and fusion of different courses, the advancement outsiders can bring to certain field of study must be more and more noticeable
这个题目用case by case的方法来写是再好不过的了~~
而且文中的举例都是很贴切很能证明作者观点的,使得文章结构,条理清晰,不过可能是由于case by case的写法,过多的偏重于例子,而少了一些自己的分析说理性的文字,这也许是唯一的缺憾,呵呵,继续讨论~~ |
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