issue167 G-89-互助社-8月8日同主题写作

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Issue167
考虑到考试时候的审题时间
以后就限时40分钟吧

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作者：dennyaimar     共用时间：39分35秒     456 words
从2005年7月8日20时4分到2005年7月8日20时39分
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It is impossible for an effective political leader to tell the truth all the time. Complete honesty is not a useful virtue for a politician.
部分同意However, the outcome may be incorrect if someone extends this proposition too far.  
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1，对于一个政府官员来说，对民众负责诚实是很重要的。（Democracy，Frankness。Gorge Washington）因为领导者的诚实能赢得更多
的支持，能保证人民大众的利益，从而保证他的effective
2，但是有些情况下，隐瞒也是为了避免大众恐慌，Pandemic panic, pandemonium
为了保障国家利益。Terrorist threaten，Economic crisis。
3，但是如果领导总是以为了避免大众的恐慌作为借口而欺瞒国人，这就不可取了，这会导致权力集中和政府的 不透明性。Opacity
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People sometimes complain that all politicians are liars, because in some cases the officers do not tell public the truth. While a person of frankness will sure be respected, I suppose that the politicians can hide something just in case that the purpose is to benefit the country and citizens. But the outcomes will be incorrect if some one extends this proposition too far.

To be a effective leader, one must win enough support from the public, which can guarantee his or her power and political place. Then he or she can execute the policy or strategy effectively to benefit the public. Honesty, as a requisite merit for a leader, would be an essential reason for people to be the followers. As is known to all, Gorge Washington is famous for the story of his frankness in his childhood, which makes him to be a respective leader in character. Abraham Lincoln, as another well-known example, also possessed this virtue and was considerate as the greatest president in American history. Their honesty helped to accumulate supports from the residents and make sure their policy can be followed well.

But in some cases, frankness does harm to both the political leader and the public. If the government officers tell all they know to the citizens, it may cause bad influence. Once a government is threatened by terrorists, it would prevent the information form leaking out, which would surely leads to a pandemic panic. Government should address the crisis secretly, alert people to avoid the danger for some other accuses, and inform the public the whole matter after the country become safer. It would be inappropriate for the leader to tell the public the truth too early which can offer the terrorists chances to break in. Under this circumstance, political leaders do not need frankness and their behaviors can also be called successful.

However, if the politicians always tell people they hide something just for the good of the country and the residents, and then do something selfish, or even something evil, it would demolish the whole society. If some one discovers some secrets of the government, which are not accepted by the public or even not allowed, it would generate a pandemonium. Moreover, once a president covers too much truth which should be known by the public, the government system would become opaque and it would generate power concentration. According to this probable result, a leader should not always conceal something.

To sum up, while honesty is surely a crucial virtue for a leader, in some cases the politicians can use their power to hide some truth in order to guarantee the constancy of society. But once if they abuse this power, they will cause demolishment to the whole country.

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People sometimes complain that all politicians are liars, because in some cases the officers do not tell public the truth. While a person of frankness will sure be respected, I suppose that the politicians can hide something just in case that the purpose is to benefit the country and citizens. But the outcomes will be incorrect if some one extends this proposition too far.

To be an effective leader, one must win enough support from the public, which can guarantee his or her power and political place. Then he or she can execute the policy or strategy effectively to benefit the publicpolitical power and leadership. Honesty, as a requisite merit for a leader, would be an essential reason for people to be the followers. As is known to all, Gorge Washington is famous for the story of his frankness in his childhood, which makes him to be a respectiverespectable leader in character. Abraham Lincoln, as another well-knowncompelling example, also possessed this virtue and was considerated as the greatest president in American history. 林肯的例子说服力不强。可能是你没说清楚。Their honesty helped to accumulate supports from the residents and make sure their policy can be followed well.

But in some cases, frankness does harm to both the political leader and the public. If the government officers tell all they know to the citizens, it may cause bad influence. Once a government is threatened by terrorists, it would prevent the information form leaking out, which would surely leads to a pandemic panic. Government should address the crisis secretly, alert people to avoid the danger for some other accuses, and inform the public the whole matter after the country become safer. It would be inappropriate for the leader to tell the public the truth too early which can offer the terrorists chances to break in. Under this circumstance, political leaders do not need frankness and their behaviors can also be called successful.

However, if the politicians always tell people they hide something just for the good of the country and the residents, and then do something selfish, or even something evil, it would demolish the whole society. If some one discovers some secrets of the government, which are not accepted by the public or even not allowed, it would generate a pandemonium.这句话有些牵强，阐述得不是很充分，道理没讲明白。 Moreover, once a president covers too much truth which should be known by the public, the government system would become opaque and it would generate power concentration. According to this probable result, a leader should not always conceal something.其实你可以再写的深入一些，在专制和政府不透明方面。

To sum up, while honesty is surely a crucial virtue for a leader, in some cases the politicians can use their power to hide some truth in order to guarantee the constancy of society. But once if they abuse this power, they will cause demolishment to the whole country.
不到40分钟的时间写出这样不错的文章，佩服，观点也很深入，语言表达也很清晰，我修改起来也很爽。:lol