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Issue68  第1篇 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧!
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从2005年7月1日19时10分到2005年7月1日20时87分

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People make the mistake of treating experts with suspicion and mistrust, no matter how valuable their contributions might be.
提纲:1 有许多专家的有用理论都被视为荒谬的因为人们不会轻易相信事物
      2 但是这些误解往往是暂时的,如果是对的大多数情况下迟早会被人们接受
      3 如果专家所在的机构可以动用舆论力量那么理论就很容易被接受了

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It is true that people sometimes mistrust the experts even their theory may be useful, however, the truth will always be discovered, most times people would accept the experts ideals after a certain length.

Admittedly, when an expert published his (or) her assumption, he may be mistrust. People are not easily persuaded especially when they meet a new theory which they can not easily understand. Before they know the reason why the theory is worth to trust, they will be suspicious and looking at each other especially when there comes up a discommender of the new ideals claiming that the new theory is completely wrong. "Who should we trust?"  They wondered. For example, when Einstein created principle of relativity, his theory is so strange to understand that hardly any scientist stood in his side. As a result, this valuable contribution is refused by the field of physics for a long time.   

However, most times the misunderstanding of the experts would be temporary. Not only that is it not easy to make people to accept the experts' new ideals, but also is it hard to make people believe that the theory is wrong if there is no proof. After a new theory is put forward, the other expert would concern on it, they think and discussed and at last they will come to a conclusion whether the theory is true or not. Maybe during a long time the other experts claim that the new ideals which is actually valuable is worthless, however pure gold fear not the fire, the truth will usually be accepted one day. For example, principle of relativity which is considered had no basis for a long tome is used widely in many fields now.

Furthermore, the experts can make people to receive their theory through propagandize. When people could not understand the new theory media plays an important part. Just as advertisements, if media repeats the new theory again and again, people may have the sense that what the media propagandizes is worth to believe even if the theory is not so. So, if the experts are sustained by a powerful organization, their contribution may be widely accepted through repeated appearance on TV, radio and so on. For example, sometimes people may know from news that a certain popular food has a bad component, but is not also media itself told us such food was worth to eat a short tome ago?

To sum up, although people are suspicious about the new things, they can also be lead to trust them one way is that the experts properly use the media.
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It is true that people sometimes mistrust the experts even their theory may be useful, however, the truth will always be discovered, most times people would accept the experts ideals after a certain length.

Admittedly, (when an expert published his (or) her assumption, he may be mistrust. People are not easily persuaded especially when they meet a new theory which they can not easily understand.并在一起比较好) Before they know the reason why the theory is worth to trust, they will be suspicious and looking at each other especially when there comes up a discommender of the new ideals claiming that the new theory is completely wrong. "Who should we trust?"  They wondered. For example, when Einstein created principle of relativity, his theory is so strange to understand that hardly any scientist stood in his side. As a result, this valuable contribution is refused by the field of physics for a long time.  (我觉得在分析的时候把人们怀疑专家no matter how valuable their contributions might be这部分加进去比较好)

However, most times the misunderstanding of the experts would be temporary. Not only that is it not easy to make people to accept the experts' new ideals, but also is it hard to make people believe that the theory is wrong if there is no proof. After a new theory is put forward, the other expert would concern on it, they think and discussed and at last they will come to a conclusion whether the theory is true or not. Maybe during a long time the other experts claim that the new ideals which is actually valuable is worthless, however pure gold fear not the fire, the truth will usually be accepted one day. (For example, principle of relativity which is considered had no basis for a long tome is used widely in many fields now.缺少一个总结,不要用for example作为一段的结尾。可以把这段的顺序调整一下,把for example 放到前面,分析部分放到后面)

Furthermore, the experts can make people to receive their theory through propagandize. When people could not understand the new theory media plays an important part. Just as advertisements, if media repeats the new theory again and again, people may have the sense that what the media propagandizes is worth to believe even if the theory is not so. So, if the experts are sustained by a powerful organization, their contribution may be widely accepted through repeated appearance on TV, radio and so on.( For example, sometimes people may know from news that a certain popular food has a bad component, but is not also media itself told us such food was worth to eat a short tome ago?这个例子不准确,最好找一个和专家有关的。其实相对论也是通过媒体被大众知道的。)

To sum up, although people are suspicious about the new things, they can also be lead to trust them one way is that the experts properly use the media.
(总的来说还不错,让步部分再含蓄一些,我觉得这个题目本来就不对。还有分析和举例应该如何安排再考虑一下,加油~~~互拍)

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发表于 2005-8-9 13:55:06 |只看该作者
谢谢啊,你说的都很正确,我改改啊

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