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136. "The absence of choice is a circumstance that is very, very rare."
没有选择的情况少之又少
1 确实是有不可以选择的东西 比如性别 种族 相貌 家庭条件 背景
然而除了这些不可改变的因素之外 我们可以选择的是很多很多的 老天给每个人的机会都是一样多的 一分耕耘一分收获 事在人为 关键在于态度和努力的程度

  1）不能因为出身贫寒 就觉得自己没有选择 没有可以改变环境的机会 现在依然有不少大学生是来自贫困地区 山区依然可以飞出金凤凰 只要努力没有不能做到的事情 关键在于你选的是努力学习 还是安于现状 达芬奇
  2）种族不一样 也不代表失去选择的机会 马丁路德为了争取平等
争取民族的权益 甘地
2有的时候觉得没有选择可能是因为做事的方式不正确 退一步 或者停下来思考一下 也许就可以找到解决问题的方法 比如书店买书 这里没有 别的地方会有 出国念书 英语差可以参加预科班 或者学习别的语言去别的国家学习
  选择是无处不在 多种多样的 在遇到困难的时候 可以选择是坦然面对 也可以选择放弃离开 怎么选择还是看每个人的态度 能力

The author claims that most things have more opportunities to select. In my point of view, I agree with the author. Most things has two sides, good or bad, right or wrong, live or die. And every person must select in everyday. They should chose go to work or stay at home, read book or watch TV, study a language or play a game.

Obviously, there are some things that can not be selected, such as sex, race, background, family, parents and so on. However, besides these things, all of persons have a great many choices to face. God gives every person same opportunity. When a person meets a trouble, selecting face it or leaving it alone would get different result.

First, some persons, who are born in poor family, often think they can not choice to go to university, because they do not have enough money to study. In fact, gold phoenix flies from mountains. A lot of students, who are from poor areas, enter university with hard work. Some of them learn knowledge by themselves. For example, Leonardo de Vinci is a famous artist, mathematician, sculpture and architect. He is described as a genius. However, he’s background is insignificant.

Second, many persons often do not like their folks or tribes. Sometimes, they admire other folks or tribes, because the government does not give equal treatment about different folks or tribes. Nevertheless, persons can not choose their folks or tribes, but they can fight with the different treatment. For example, Martin Luther King Jr. is one of 20th Century’s most influence figures. His words still hold a stunning power and grace. In his life, he devotes himself to peace and change about skin colored. He chooses standing for truth and making American a more just nation. Another example is Mahatma Gandhi who is known by India as the ‘father of the nation’. He publicizes the nonviolent resistance movements. And then he leads India independent form British Empire. Obviously, when Gandhi faces the problem about enduring the British govern or not, he selects fighting for freedom.

Sometimes, people think it has no choice just because they settle the problem with wrong path. Perhaps, they think for a moment, and then find another path to settle the problem. For example, a person goes to a book shop, and does not find any books which he needs. Maybe, he/she should say he/she has no choice. Nevertheless, he/she can go to another book shop, or search some useful information in network. Another example is studying in abroad. Some persons’ English too poor to study in America. However, they can study English at first. Or, they can go to other countries which do not speak English, such as Japan, Spain, and etc.  

In conclusion, everybody has multiform paths to select. And everybody must decide what he/she should do or not in everyday. When he/she face a problem, the key, which is used to settle the problem, is his/her own ability and attitude.

clylizeUID: 150642

我这个的例子好像不是很好 麻烦帮我想想还有什么好例子 这个文章写的痛苦无比5555

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The author claims that most things have more opportunities to select. In my point of view, I agree with the author这句话太简单点了吧，开头的句子尽量紧凑. Most things has two sides, good or bad, right or wrong, live or die这句又罗嗦了，而且比较好一点的说法是sword is double edged.. And every person must select in everyday. They should chose choosego to work or stay at home, read book or watch TV, study a language or play a game.最后一句没有什么必要。。。感觉开头不是太成功，没有很鲜明的提出自己的观点，说了很多不应该在首段说的东西。

Obviously, there are some things that can not be selected, such as sex, race, background, family, parents and so on. However, besides these things, all of persons have a great many choices to face. God gives every person same opportunity. When a person meets a trouble, selecting face it or leaving it alone would get different result.

First, some persons, who are born in poor family, often think they can not choice to go to university, because they do not have enough money to study. In fact,      gold phoenix flies from mountains. A lot of students, who are from poor areas, enter university with hard work. Some of them learn knowledge by themselves. For example, Leonardo de Vinci is a famous artist, mathematician, sculpture and architect. He is described as a genius. However, he’s background is insignificant.

Second, many persons often do not like their folks or tribes. Sometimes, they admire other folks or tribes, because the government does not give equal treatment about different folks or tribes. Nevertheless, persons can not choose their folks or tribes这2词出现次数太多了吧, but they can fight with the different  treatment. For example, Martin Luther King Jr. is one of 20th Century’s most influence figures.这2句合并一下 His words still hold a stunning power and grace. In his life, he devotes himself to peace and change about skin colored. He chooses standing for truth and making American a more just nation. Another example is Mahatma Gandhi who is known by India as the ‘father of the nation’. He publicizes the nonviolent resistance movements. And then he leads India independent form British Empire. Obviously, when Gandhi faces the problem about enduring the British govern or not, he selects fighting for freedom.

Sometimes, people think it has no choice just because they settle the problem with wrong path. Perhaps, they think for a moment, and then find another path to settle the problem. 这句话似乎说了没什么意义For example, a person goes to a book shop, and does not find any books which he needs. Maybe, he/she should say he/she has no choice. Nevertheless, he/she can go to another book shop, or search some useful information in network. Another example is studying in abroad. Some persons’ English too poor to study in America. However, they can study English at first. Or, they can go to other countries which do not speak English, such as Japan, Spain, and etc.  

In conclusion, everybody has multiform paths to select. And everybody must decide what he/she should do or not in everyday. When he/she face a problem, the key, which is used to settle the problem, is his/her own ability and attitude.


总体来说问题很大。。。有时间用QQ聊。。和你详细说。。这里说不清楚

clylizeUID: 150642

我开头是因为第一断要写一些赞同的东西 所以不敢完全给拍死了
要是一下子就否定了 是不是不好呀

clylizeUID: 150642

双刃剑这个问题 是我觉得不大恰当吧 我只是说事物有两个方面 但是这两个方面不一定会互相伤害 用双刃剑会不会过了点

阿择菜UID: 2110339

sigh   写这么多字啊

阿择菜UID: 2110339

cc  进步了哈!

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谢谢菜菜夸奖