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fantasianosUID：207837

As the wheel of society turns at its accelerating and eternal velocity into the 21st century, the history of human beings is growing older and older. Naturally, every person is born with the curiosity about the "past". A little child usually asks "where am I from", while a person believing in immortality of spirits wonders what she or he was before the last birth. To reveal history not only helps humans to ascertain what happened, but also sometimes instructs decisions at present. But since "past" does not equal to "today", there are a portion of people alleging that what history teaches us is merely that knowing about the past cannot help people to make important decisions today.

To debate with this declaration, what is sensible to do is to make clear what “history” is. History, surely diverse from "present", has so broad a connotation and denotation that all those occurred before now contain in it, no matter whether they were noticed by a certain individual or not. In this sense, the term "history" is almost the same as "past". A thing in history can either be a great event, such as the foundation of the USA or the Civil War, or turn out to be a small incident, ranging from what a person ate yesterday or a wedding somewhere last year, to a dog's smile last night or a cat's birth one century ago. Except for what a person experienced per se, or what remembered by relatives or recorded by documentation, to unearth those still unknown is the responsibility of history and historians.

Why to reveal history? The answer is not simply to cater to human's curiosity. Despite the difference from present or future, past is the basis of present, and will be the basis of future, if combing with present. For this reason, to study the past can help people to know why the world now is a world like this. A simple case is that, if a person feels extremely hungry today, the absence of food yesterday may be the cause. For another instance, looking back to an individual's poor childhood when the individual's parents divorced, this very fact is likely to contribute to the bad behaviors when grown up. Take those changes in society for other examples. Noticing the pollutions during the past several decades, a person may not be astonished by extinctions of so many species.

Besides, what suggested by a part of scientists, surprising the majority of population, is that the evolution of Earth seem to be of certain periodicity. This leads the assumption that the increase of the average temperature around the earth is somehow normal, as an indispensable stage of Earth's development, instead of the result of deforestation or pollution. If this periodicity is true, then it is possible to foretell what will happen to Earth, similarly Sun or even the Milky Galaxy.

When paying attention to the important decisions today, an individual or a government can turn to history to realize what happened in the past and reveal those principles laying in accidents or incidents. For example, according to the fact that a person will become extremely hungry if meals were neglected the day before, that person is probably altering the working plan to guarantee the meals. That considering the possible cause of worse and worse environment, a government may decide to save water and cut less trees in the future can be one more case in point.

Albeit what have been discussed above, there can still be some extremists claiming that realizing the past will do no difference to decisions. What they suggest, however, is that past and present and future are all discrete, without any relations. As a matter of fact, the knowledge and experiences, in accordance with which the decision is made, are all generated from past, in another word, history.

In the course of contemporary, history attracts more and more attention. By learning the past, people can get easier when making important decisions.

polymathUID：179557

加油！发现你最近写好多！比我改得快！:L

fantasianosUID：207837

其实最近写得没有以前多，是因为以前写的都来不及改，现在发上来，一方面看看大家意见，一方面也逼着自己同时进行修改
这几天一般都只是1I1A，昨天根本就没写，只不过以前有一段2I1A的日子，所以现在有时候自己改以前的都会大段大段的重写。。。

fantasianosUID：207837

As the wheel of society turns at its accelerating and eternal velocity into the 21st century, the history of human beings is growing older and older. Naturally, every person is born with the curiosity about the "past". A little child usually asks "where am I from", while a person believing in immortality of spirits wonders her or his “prelife”. To reveal history not only helps humans to ascertain what happened, but also sometimes instructs decisions at present. But since "past" does not equal to "today", there are a portion of people alleging that what history teaches us is merely things happened without relation to today that knowing about the past cannot help people to make important decisions today.

To debate with this declaration, what is sensible to do is to make clear what “history” is. History, surely divergent from "present", has so broad a connotation and denotation that all those occurred before now are contained in it, no matter whether they were noticed by a certain individual or not. In this sense, the term "history" is almost the same as "past". A thing in history can either be a great event, such as the foundation of the USA or the Civil War, or turn out to be a small incident, ranging from what a person ate yesterday or a wedding somewhere last year, to a dog's smile last night or a cat's birth one century ago. Except for what a person experienced per se, as well as what are remembered by acquaintances or recorded by documentation, to unearth those still unknown is the responsibility of history and historians.

Why to reveal history? The answer is not simply to cater to human's curiosity. Despite the difference from present or future, past is the basis of present, and will be the basis of future, if combing with present. For this reason, to study the past can help people to know why an individual now is the exact individual like this and why the world now is a world like this. A simple case is that, if a person feels extremely hungry today, the absence of food yesterday may explain. For another instance, looking back to an individual's poor childhood when the individual's parents divorced, is likely to give explanation to the aberrant behaviors when grown up. Take those changes in society for other examples. Noticing the pollutions during the past several decades, a person may not be astonished by extinctions of so many species.

A closer examination to history may exhibit examples before us how predecessors benefited from learning about the past. Take Edison, the inventor, for example. Before he finally invented electric light, thousands of materials had been tested and examined yet all resulted in failure. Though seemingly vexing, he was not at all frustrated, articulating that “at least I have known thousands of materials that are not suitable” (I paraphrase). With the experience, which in fact is personal history, Edison succeeded in finding the feasible filament for bulb. An additional comparison may alternatively express the function of history in the development of countries at large. Actually, history is compared to “mirror” by Chinese people, which means that what happened in the past can instruct decisions in the future in light of the constant basic principles. For instance, the failure indebted to despotism of the last emperor of Shang Dynasty indicated the importance of mercy and instructed the success of the following emperor—the founder of the next dynasty Zhou.

Albeit what have been discussed above, there can still be some extremists claiming that realizing the past will do no difference to decisions. What they suggest, however, is that past and present and future are all discrete, without any relations. As a matter of fact, the knowledge and experiences, in accordance with which the decision is made, are all generated from past, in another word, history. This notion per se has overturned the fake assertion. Emphatically, the evolution of society and culture is not a complex of separate pieces, instead it is a beautifully continuous process—just like a flowing river.

In the course of contemporary, history attracts more and more attention. By learning the past, people can get easier when making important decisions.

fantasianosUID：207837

自己先修改一次，有的段落完全屏弃初稿重写了，请大家对比、指正，谢谢

polymathUID：179557

把 题目也给出来 啥!也不知道你是否走题了?

fantasianosUID：207837

History teaches us only one thing: knowing about the past cannot help people to make important decisions today.

polymathUID：179557

SORRY!哦!:cool:两个一起改好麻烦,就 只看 你 的 新文章了 哦 !
As the wheel of society turns at its accelerating and eternal velocity into the 21st century, the history of human beings is growing older and older可以 这么 用吗?以前 看国 以 本书,好像介绍少 用older and older的 形式!再说你 的 修饰对象也 不 大对哦!:cool:. Naturally, every person is born with the curiosity about the "past". A little child usually asks "where am I from", while a person believing in immortality of spirits wonders her or his “prelife”. To reveal history not only helps humans to ascertain what happened, but also sometimes instructs decisions at present. But since "past" does not equal to "today", there are a portion of people alleging这个句型有吗?there be sb doing sth:confused: that what history teaches us is merely things happened without relation to today that knowing about the past cannot help people to make important decisions today.开篇立求新意,但是不太简洁!直接从Naturally开始就很好了!

To debate with this declaration, what is sensible to do is to make clear what “history” is. History, surely divergent from "present", has so broad a connotation and denotation that all those occurred before now are contained in it, no matter whether they were noticed by a certain individual or not. In this sense, the term "history" is almost the same as "past". A thing in history can either be a great event, such as the foundation of the USA or the Civil War, or turn out to be a small incident, ranging from what a person ate yesterday or a wedding somewhere last year, to a dog's smile last night or a cat's birth one century ago.:eek:很形象啊! Except for what a person experienced per se:confused:, as well as what are remembered by acquaintances or recorded by documentationdocumentations, to unearthdisclose,unearth是 出土的 意思吧? those still unknown is the responsibility of history and historians.

Why to reveal history? The answer is not simply to cater to human's curiosity. Despite the difference from present or future, past is the basis of present, and will be the basis of future, if combing with present. For this reason, to study the past can help people to know why an individual now is the exact individual like this and why the world now is a world like this. A simple case is that, if a person feels extremely hungry today, the absence of food yesterday may explain. For another instance, looking back to an individual's poor childhood when the individual's parents divorced, is likely to give explanation to the aberrant behaviors when grown up. Take those changes in society for other examples. Noticing the pollutions during the past several decades, a person may not be astonished by extinctions of so many species.

A closer examination toof history may exhibit examples before us how predecessors benefited from learning aboutfrom the past. Take Edison, the inventor, for example. Before he finally invented electric light, thousands of materials had been tested and examined yet all resulted in failure. Though seemingly vexing, he was not at all frustrated, articulating that “at least I have known thousands of materials that are not suitable” (and我爱寄托I paraphrase). With the experience, which in fact is personal history, Edison succeeded in finding the feasible filament for bulb. An additional comparison may alternatively express the function of history in the development of countries at large. Actually, history is compared to “mirror” by Chinese people, which means that what happened in the past can instruct decisions in the future in light of the constant basic principles. For instance, the failure indebted to despotism of the last emperor of Shang Dynasty indicated the importance of mercy and instructed the success of the following emperor—the founder of the next dynasty Zhou.

Albeit what have been discussed above, there can still be some extremists claiming that realizing the past will do no difference to decisions. What they suggest, however, is that past and present and future are all discrete, without any relations. As a matter of fact, the knowledge and experiences, in accordance with which the decision is made, are all generated from past, in another word, history. This notion per se has overturned the fake assertion. Emphatically, the evolution of society and culture is not a complex of separate pieces, instead it is a beautifully continuous process—just like a flowing river.

In the course of contemporary, history attracts more and more attention. By learning the past, people can get easier when making important decisions.

fantasianosUID：207837

先谢谢社长
我不是太有把握当说there be sb.干什么的时候，是应该接do sth. 还是doing sth.不过从一般的语法看似乎应该是后面的，我也不大记得了。。。

polymathUID：179557

打到一半，突然短网了，郁闷！重新把另一半贴上来！不要见怪啊！以后就好了！自己的电脑终于修好了！开心！:p

polymathUID：179557

SORRY!哦!:cool:两个一起改好麻烦,就 只看 你 的 新文章了 哦 !
As the wheel of society turns at its accelerating and eternal velocity into the 21st century, the history of human beings is growing older and older可以 这么 用吗?以前 看到一本书,好像介绍少 用older and older的 形式!再说你 的 修饰对象也 不 大对哦!:cool:. Naturally, every person is born with the curiosity about the "past". A little child usually asks "where am I from", while a person believing in immortality of spirits wonders her or his “prelife”. To reveal history not only helps humans to ascertain what happened, but also sometimes instructs decisions at present. But since "past" does not equal to "today", there are a portion of people alleging这个句型有吗?there be sb doing sth:confused: that what history teaches us is merely things happened without relation to today that knowing about the past cannot help people to make important decisions today.开篇立求新意,但是不太简洁!直接从Naturally开始就很好了!

To debate with this declaration, what is sensible to do is to make clear what “history” is. History, surely divergent from "present", has so broad a connotation and denotation that all those occurred before now are contained in it, no matter whether they were noticed by a certain individual or not. In this sense, the term "history" is almost the same as "past". A thing in history can either be a great event, such as the foundation of the USA or the Civil War, or turn out to be a small incident, ranging from what a person ate yesterday or a wedding somewhere last year, to a dog's smile last night or a cat's birth one century ago.:eek:很形象啊! Except for what a person experienced per se:confused:, as well as what are remembered by acquaintances or recorded by documentationdocumentations, to unearthdisclose,unearth是 出土的 意思吧? those still unknown is the responsibility of history and historians.

Why to reveal history? The answer is not simply to cater to human's curiosity. Despite the difference from present or future, past is the basis of present, and will be the basis of future, if combing with present. For this reason, to study the past can help people to know why an individual now is the exact individual like this and why the world now is a world like this. A simple case is that, if a person feels extremely hungry today, the absence of food yesterday may explain. For another instance, looking back to an individual's poor childhood when the individual's parents divorced, is likely to give explanation to the aberrant behaviors when grown up. Take those changes in society for other examples. Noticing the pollutions during the past several decades, a person may not be astonished by extinctions of so many species.

A closer examination toof history may exhibit examples before us how predecessors benefited from learning aboutfrom the past. Take Edison, the inventor, for example. Before he finally invented electric light, thousands of materials had been tested and examined yet all resulted in failure. Though seemingly vexing, he was not at all frustrated, articulating that “at least I have known thousands of materials that are not suitable” (andI paraphrase). With the experience, which in fact is personal history, Edison succeeded in finding the feasible filament for bulb. An additional comparison may alternatively express the function of history in the development of countries at large. Actually, history is compared to “mirror” by Chinese people, which means that what happened in the past can instruct decisions in the future in light of the constant basic principles. For instance, the failure indebted to despotism of the last emperor of Shang Dynasty indicated the importance of mercy and instructed the success of the following emperor—the founder of the next dynasty Zhou.

Albeit what have been discussed above, there can still be some extremists claiming that realizing the past will do no difference to decisions. What they suggest, however, is that past and present and future are all discrete, without any relations. As a matter of fact, the knowledge and experiences, in accordance with which the decision is made, are all generated from past, in another word, history. This notion per se has overturned the fake assertion. Emphatically, the evolution of society and culture is not a complex of separate pieces, instead it is a beautifully continuous process—just like a flowing river.

In the course of contemporary, history attracts more and more attention. By learning the past, people can get easier when making important decisions.这是 全文结尾吗?最好加个In conclusion,

写的 很好啊!用了很多 拗口的 词和 句子,感觉自己 都 看不懂了!;)但是还是有 很多 语法 和语言是上的 不足啊!继续 加油啊!4.5-5分吧!

fantasianosUID：207837

谢谢先！我通常习惯写长句，想到什么就在不影响语法的情况下加上去，所以是看起来比较长。。。

fantasianosUID：207837

社长，就是这篇啦，你前面一份修改的时候在一个括号里有个“我爱寄托”，看起来很可爱啊！！！：P