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Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female study in every subjects . Do you agree or disagree ?

The proportion of enrollment in universities has represented a series of changes—most of universities might decide
the proportion of male and female based on prevalent or practical courses rather than social authentic expectation .Current social tendency sanction this opinion that equal numbers of male and female should study in every subjects. I agree with the assertion insofar as universities can have enough financial support and flexible academic approaches .Yet ,following the tendency blindly might exerted bad impact on academic advancement.

Admittedly , eliminating sex discrimination is becoming a trend of modern society. Technological innovations and political climate have placed it on the agenda and a vast number of women are revolutionised from traditional morality. Female college students can profit from the academic subjects for the reason they have equal rights to pursue those careers most men usually devote to by utilizing advanced tools. Similarly, equal numbers of male and female studying in subjects can promote students’ physical ,mental ,and psychological soundness. Relationships between male and female are marvellous , reflecting majority of male students can be attracted by female charm , leading to enhance efficiency in learning and working .

However, those buttress the assertion ignore the bad impact demanding equal proportion of male and female can exert. Scarcity of service facilities can be caused by changes of enrollment project .For example , universities might be placed in dilemma because there are not numerous apartments for female students .Afterall , individual privacy we must face in certain aspect is essential in our society where mass media develops rapidly. In addition, female students studying such certain subjects as mining, in my view, might waste universities’ limited academic resources. These sorts of careers like mining are not fitting for female workers on account of bad work environment and situations.
还是没有结尾段，观点就是不应该招收相同的男女学生

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一看这文,我就觉得又是一个被培训机构耽误了的孩子....就是英语底子还是不错的,可是写的作文其实CONFUSING... 就是一个文章一半的句子都看不太懂.....虽然我自己水平不高,但我觉得写文首先就是要意思顺达,这文最大的毛病就是意思不顺达...

Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female study in every subjects . Do you agree or disagree ?

The proportion of enrollment (between male and female)  in universities has represented (experienced) a series of changes —most of universities might decide
the proportion of male and female based on prevalent or practical courses rather than social authentic expectation (don't understand what you try to say) .Current social tendency sanction this opinion (don't understand) that equal numbers of male and female should study in every subjects. I agree with the assertion insofar as universities can have enough financial support and flexible academic approaches (what's the relevance of the university's attidue and the financial support, and what does flexible academic approaches mean?)  .Yet ,following the tendency blindly might exerted bad impact on academic advancement (academic) .

Admittedly , eliminating sex discrimination is becoming a trend of (our/the) modern society. Technological innovations and political climate have placed it (how?) on the agenda and a vast number of women are (is) revolutionised from traditional morality (what does that mean?) . Female college students can profit (benefit) from the academic subjects for the reason (beacuase)  they have equal rights to pursue those careers most men usually devote to by utilizing advanced tools (are you trying to say carrers used to be only open to men?). Similarly (to what?), equal numbers of male and female studying in subjects  can promote students’ physical ,mental ,and psychological soundness (how?). Relationships between male and female are marvellous , reflecting majority of male students can be attracted by female charm (how does the relationship reflect majority of males are attracted by females?) , leading  to enhance(the enhancement of) efficiency in learning and working (how?) .

However, those buttress the assertion ignore the bad impact (of ) demanding equal proportion of male and female can exert. Scarcity of service facilities can be caused by changes of enrollment project (do you mean by changes of the sexual ratio of the project?)  .For example , universities might be placed in dilemma because there are not numerous apartments for female students (but is the university supposed to have equal facility for females and males according to the sexual equilatiy rule?)  .Afterall , individual privacy we must face in certain aspect is essential in our society where mass media develops rapidly (what does that mean?) . In addition, female students studying such certain subjects as mining, in my view, might waste universities’ limited academic resources . (, since) These sorts of careers like mining(jobs such like mining) are not fitting (doesn not fit) for female workers on account of bad work environment and situations (so you mean only man can take the dirty work?).

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