Issue4[jet小组]第七次作业

cascadeUID: 2454141

TOPIC: ISSUE4 - "No field of study can advance significantly unless outsiders bring their knowledge and experience to that field of study."
提纲：1 一些学科对别的学科很重要要借鉴别的学科已经有的成果，例如数学对于物理
      2 别的学科研究问题的思路及方法，可能会被应用到本学科
      3 某些学科是由各种学科组合发展而来
Nowadays, technologies are changing rapidly. At the same time, the old fields of studies are advanced at a dramatic speed while the new fields of studies are discovered and exploited more and more frequently.  In this circumstance, I strongly admire the speaker's conclusion that only by taking advantage of other fields of studies, can a study advance significantly.

First of all, in order to accelerate the speed of the development of many branches of science, the scientists always choose to use the conclusions that other fields studies have already published. Since many sciences are related to each other, even a scientist is an expert in many closing related sciences, making use of the research achievements of other subjects can significantly reduce the cost of the studies. For example, physics is a science that needs a great of counts which may be the most difficult work a physics scientist has to face. Some counts involve many mathematics theories on whose proving the scientists of mathematics spent great efforts. If the physics scientists abandon to use the former’s conclusions, it will take them considerable time to prove it. Moreover, consider the physicist may not receive an exact training of mathematics, the proving may beyond their abilities. Therefore, it is a wise choice for the scientists to using the results of other fields of science.

Secondly, the methods of researches in other fields also provide fresh views to the study that only apply their own fields' achievements can hardly go. In the history, there are many examples that can be the evidences of the above assertion. In the period of Napoleon, the aluminum is an expensive mental only can be used in royal palace for its difficult refining. However, as the electrolysis's applying in dry cell invented by volt in 1800, a Denmark chemist-Auster found that the electrolysis can also be used in deoxygenating aluminum from ores. Since the discovery, the output of aluminum increased sharply so that common people can also use the plates made by aluminum. Admittedly, the current perspectives and methods may lead the scientists a new way to go.

Finally, when it comes to the subjects developed from other subjects, the experience and knowledge of latter seem to be more important than what we have talked above. For example, the biochemistry studies the chemistry in creatures for the purpose of acquire the rules and constitutions of the cells. In order to lubricate the study of this subject, the scientists must have a good comprehension in both biology and chemistry, only by standing on the fundamental of which, can the scientists get the results.

In sum, take the references of the fruits from outsiders is an inevitable thing during research today for the associations among different fields are more and more close. The experts from other study fields can not only introduce more fresh approaches, solutions, and even create new interdisciplinary fields of study but also will help human beings to extend their research fields into wider range and get better recognition of our life.(最后一句话是直接摘抄的。。。实在是没词了)

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Nowadays, technologies are changing(感觉用developing更好一点) rapidly. At the sametime, the old fields of studies are advanced at a dramatic speed while the newfields of studies are discovered and exploited more and morefrequently.  In this circumstance, I strongly admire the speaker'sconclusion that only by taking advantage of other fields of studies, can astudy advance significantly. （感觉完全支持挺难写好的）
First of all, in order to accelerate the speed（建议省略） of the development of many branches of science, the scientistsalways choose to use the conclusions that other fields studies have alreadypublished. Since many sciences are related to each other, even a scientist isan expert in many closing related sciences, making use of the researchachievements of other subjects can significantly reduce the cost of thestudies.（有些直译的感觉） For example, physics is a sciencethat needs a great of counts（a lot of calculation???） whichmay be the most difficult work a physics scientist has to face. Some countsinvolve many mathematics theories on whose proving the scientists ofmathematics spent great efforts(这句有些怪). If the physicsscientists abandon（don’t choose）to use the former’s conclusions, it will take them considerable time to proveit. Moreover, consider the physicist may not receive an exact training ofmathematics, the proving may beyond their abilities. Therefore, it is a wisechoice for the scientists to using the results of other fields of science.

Secondly, the methods of researches in other fields also provide fresh views tothe study that only apply their own fields' achievements can hardly go（主语是哪个？？？）. In the history（In history）,there are many examples that can be（serve as） the evidences of the above assertion. Inthe period of Napoleon, the aluminum is an expensive mental only can be used inroyal palace for its difficult refining. However, as the electrolysis'sapplying in dry cell invented by volt in 1800, a Denmark chemist-Auster foundthat the electrolysis can also be used in deoxygenating aluminum from ores.Since the discovery, the output of aluminum increased sharply so that commonpeople can also use the plates made by aluminum. Admittedly, the currentperspectives and methods may lead the scientists a new way to go.(例子挺好的)

Finally, when it comes to the subjects developed from other subjects, theexperience and knowledge of latter seem to be more important than what we havetalked above. For example, the biochemistry studies the chemistry in creaturesfor the purpose of acquire the rules and constitutions of the cells. In orderto lubricate the study of this subject, the scientists must have a good comprehensionin both biology and chemistry, only by standing on the fundamental of which,can the scientists get the results.

In sum, take the references of the fruits from outsiders is an inevitable thingduring research today for the associations among （relations between???）differentfields are more and more close. The experts from other study fields can notonly introduce more fresh approaches, solutions, and even create newinterdisciplinary fields of study but also will help human beings to extendtheir research fields into wider range and get better recognition of our life.

个人觉得完全赞同的写法不一定保险，因为作文评分里的第一条就是要求考虑题目的complexity，比如像数学这种基础学科。
就文章内容来说，分成“现有成果”、“新想法”和“衍生学科”，能够清晰全面地支持论点，使得分论点很清晰，每个分论点也阐述地比较充分。有一些遣词造句不太合适。