TOEFL 2009上半年-Dark_Tournament写作组 网兜妮妮第十七次作业

网兜妮妮UID: 2612538

With computers doubling in speed and power every couple of years, and with engineering's dazzling feats growing more and more routine, we are surely in a rapidly changing world, which is of many new things everyday. Of course, it is a world of cooperation. We are powerless in individual but can be stronger when we are together. So, it is very certain that the ability to cooperate with others is much more vital in today's world than in the past.
From the beginning, today's world is not a simple world which of small population and simple things in daily life, it is a world of complicated relationships and high-tech tools. No superman exists in the real world, and no one can finish a thing completely by oneself. Just take our everyday life as an example. There is no denying that around our home, almost every thing is made by others, and we buy them but not make them. Like the furniture around, the TV set, the cup to drink water, the bicycle outside, and so on. So, we live in a world that full of other's creativities, but we cooperate with each other to provide a more convinced environment for all human beings. Hardly can we live without cooperate.
Secondly, to an ordinary individual, the ability to cooperate is related to one's success. Held one's own opinion is sometimes important in finding truth, but listen to other's advice and try to cooperate is more easier to reaches one's goal. Whatever we doing researches or making programs, cooperate with others can take use of their advantages to meet our need, and a larger ken of knowledge is helpful in solving problems. So, with a good ability to cooperate, we can finish a thing more effective and got a more fruitful result.
On the other hand, the ability to cooperate is the ability to communicate, because to cooperate is to exchange opinions and find a better way to deal with a thing. So, if someone has the ability to cooperative with others, he will also have good skills to communicate, and we can easily conclude that he has a good relationship with partners, friends, as well as families. So, he is living a good life. And we can see how important the ability to cooperate with others in today’s world.

答案就在眼前UID: 2622922

1# 网兜妮妮

With computers’ doubling in speed and power every couple of years, and with engineering's dazzling feats growing more and more routine, we are surely in a rapidly changing world, which is of many new things everyday. Of course, it is a world of cooperation. We are powerless in individual but can be stronger when we are together. So, it is very certain that the ability to cooperate with others is much more vital in today's world than in the past.


From the beginning, today's world is not a simple world which of small population and simple things in daily life, it is a world of complicated relationships and high-tech tools. No superman exists in the real world, and no one can finish a thing completely by oneself. Just take our everyday life as an example. There is no denying that around our home, almost every thing is made by others, and we buy them but not make them. Like the furniture around, the TV set, the cup to drink water, the bicycle outside, and so on. So, we live in a world that full of others' creativities, but we cooperate with each other to provide a more convinced environment for all human beings. Hardly can we live without cooperation.


Secondly, to an ordinary individual, the ability to cooperate is related to one's success. Held one's own opinion is sometimes important in finding truth, but listen to other's advice and try to cooperate is more easier to reaches one's goal. Whether we doing researches or making programs, cooperate with others can help us take use of their advantages to meet our need (这句我觉得take the use of 的动作发出者还应该是人，而不是cooperation, 故这样改了), and a larger ken of knowledge is helpful in solving problems. So, with a good ability to cooperate, we can finish a thing more effective and got a more fruitful result.*
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On the other hand, the ability to cooperate is the ability to communicate, because to cooperate is to exchange opinions and find a better way to deal with a thing. So, if someone has the ability to cooperative with others, he will also have good skills to communicate, and we can easily conclude that he has a good relationship with partners, friends, as well as families. So, he is living a good life. Thus we can see how important the ability to cooperate with others in today’s world.


Lz写得很妙 请冲满分去吧~~o(∩_∩)o
By the way, 网兜妮妮你几号考？

网兜妮妮UID: 2612538

呵呵，谢谢夸奖啦，是很大的鼓励呦~
文章虽然是半个小时完成的，可是没有修改时间，所以写完以后又自己改了半小时，所以刚写出来不是这个效果呢，还得再练习。

“With computers doubling in speed and power every couple of years, and with engineering's dazzling feats growing more and more routine”这句是TIMES上的一个句子，我背过的，用在这里，所以computers 而不是你改的 computers'.提醒你一下~

还有，我6月7号考试~

答案就在眼前UID: 2622922

3# 网兜妮妮

谢谢回复，呵呵，我也学到了~

加油~

桑梓UID: 2613051

清明有点事 来不及拍这次的作业 等我回学校再补上 抱歉了啊

hjhj1110UID: 2553667

With computers doubling in speed and power every couple of years, and with engineering's dazzling feats growing more and more routine, we are surely in a rapidly changing world, in which many new things rush out everyday. Of course, it is a world of cooperation. （这里转得有点唐突）We are powerless in individual but can be stronger when we are together. (这句不错) So, it is very certain that the ability to cooperate with others is much more vital in today's world than in the past.

From the beginning, today's world is not a simple world which of small population and simple things in daily life, it is a world of complicated relationships and high-tech tools. No superman exists in the real world, and no one can finish a thing completely by oneself. Just take our everyday life as an example. There is no denying that around our home, almost every thing is made by others, and we buy them but not make them. Like the furniture around, the TV set, the cup to drink water, the bicycle outside, and so on. So, we live in a world that full of other's creativities, （这些例子都很好，单是我觉得还是要强调合作，而不是单纯强调别人的重要性，这应该是两个概念） but we cooperate with each other to provide a more convinced environment for all human beings. Hardly can we live without cooperate ( cooperation).

Secondly, to an ordinary individual, the ability to cooperate is related to one's success. Held (Holding) one's own opinion is sometimes important in finding truth, but listen to other's advice and try to cooperate with them (cooperate好像只能做不及物) is more easier to reaches one's goal. Whatever we are doing, researches or making programs, cooperate (cooperating) with others can take use of their advantages to meet our need, and a larger ken of knowledge is helpful in solving problems. So, with a good ability to cooperate, we can finish a thing more effective and got a more fruitful result.

On the other hand, the ability to cooperate is the ability to communicate, because to cooperate is to exchange opinions and find a better way to deal with a thing. So, if someone has the ability to cooperative with others, he will also have good skills to communicate, and we can easily conclude that he has a good relationship with partners, friends, as well as families. So, he is living a good life. And we can see how important the ability to cooperate with others in today’s world.


我不知道为什么从WORD里复制过来，颜色和划线都没有了，上面的编辑工具都用不了，附件也传不了，郁闷。。。。下次你在线的时候Q我，我直接把WORD传给你哦

网兜妮妮UID: 2612538

5# shilly
呃，我就是语法很差，所以现在在看那个ibt语法精要，自己加强一下啦~

网兜妮妮UID: 2612538

6# 桑梓
好的咯~

网兜妮妮UID: 2612538

7# hjhj1110
嗯，发在邮箱里给我好啦 332732331@qq.com

桑梓UID: 2613051

With computers doubling in speed and power every couple of years, and with engineering's dazzling feats growing more and more routine, （刚想说这句看着怎么不舒服 想改一下 就发现LZ说这是TIMES上的句子……）we are surely in a rapidly changing world, which is of many new things everyday.（前后两句的转折有点唐突啊） Of course, it is a world of cooperation. We are powerless in individual but can be stronger when we are together. So, it is very certain that the ability to cooperate with others is much more vital in today's world than in the past.
From the beginning（总觉得这个beginning有点意味不明 可以考虑删去）, today's world is not a simple world which（少了个is吧 ） of small population and simple things in daily life, it is a world of complicated relationships and high-tech tools. No superman exists in the real world, and no one can finish a thing completely by oneself. Just take our everyday life as an example. There is no denying that around our home, almost every thing is made by others, and we buy them but not make them. Like the furniture around, the TV set, the cup to drink water, the bicycle outside, and so on. So, we live in a world that full of other's（others'） creativities, but（but用的有点不合适 用and会不会好点） we cooperate with each other to provide a more convinced（LZ是不是想说convenient？） environment for all human beings. Hardly can we live without cooperate.
Secondly, to an ordinary individual, the ability to cooperate is related to one's success. Held one's own opinion is sometimes important in finding truth, but listen to other's advice and try to cooperate is more easier to reaches one's goal. Whatever we（少了are） doing researches or making programs, cooperate with others can take use of their advantages to meet our need, and a larger ken of knowledge is helpful in solving problems. So, with a good ability to cooperate, we can finish a thing more effective and got a more fruitful result.
On the other hand, the ability to cooperate is the ability to communicate, because to cooperate is to exchange opinions and find a better way to deal with a thing. So, if someone has the ability to cooperative with others, he will also have good skills to communicate, and we can easily conclude that he has a good relationship with partners, friends, as well as families. So, he is living a good life. And we can see how important the ability to cooperate with others in today’s world.
总觉得没结尾……

实在不好意思 现在才拍