进军美利坚作文组9.26

sharamandeUID: 2597186

9.26 It is better to broad knowledge of many academic subjects than specialize on one specific subject.


The discussion of which type of employee is the better between generalist and specialist has been talked over again and again. In my point of view, I think a generalist will fit the modern society better.

To begin with, we all know that the relations among different fields of science are closer and closer nowadays. That is to say, the knowledge of one particular subject might be useful to help us solve problems in another field which is totally different from this one. For instance, we used to apply digital password to identify one person's identity and this is just a fundamental question in Information Technology. But we know that simple technology is not secure and dependable enough to meet the needs in many occasions so that a new technology, biological pattern recognition emerges. This new technology combines the original digital password with the biological characteristics such as fingerprint to identify a person and that is really an advancement.

Moreover, modern society advances on such a rapid pace that we could adjust to it easier if we have broad knowledge. The reason is that it is difficult for us individuals to figure out what kind of talent the society needs due to its changeable situation. One phenomenon often occurs that during one period when several particular technique is popular, a saturation of  human resource in those fields will emerge, resulting in decreased  value of those talents. However, if we handle a large range of knowledge we also have more choices about vocation and could change our career easier according to the situation.

To sum up, a generalist is more suitable to today's society than a specialist in my eyes because the world is developing so fast that broad knowledge could help us avoid falling behind.
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ly8768UID: 2452066

1# sharamande

The discussion of which type of employee is the better(is better 不要the) between generalist and specialist has been talked over again and again. In my point of view, I think a generalist will fit the modern society better.

第一段这么多better

To begin with, we all know that the relations among different fields of science are closer and closer nowadays. That is to say, the knowledge of one particular subject might be useful to help us solve problems in another field which is totally different from this one. For instance, we used to apply digital password to identify one person's identity and this is just a fundamental question in Information Technology. But we know that simple technology is not secure and dependable enough to meet the needs in many occasions so that a new technology, biological pattern recognition emerges. This new technology combines the original digital password with the biological characteristics such as fingerprint to identify a person and that is really an advancement.

说句实话，这个例子没看懂…

Moreover, modern society advances on such a rapid pace that we could adjust to it easier if we have broad(broaden) knowledge. The reason is that it is difficult for us individuals (us和individual重复) to figure out what kind of talent(社会应该普遍需要的是quality) the society needs due to its changeable situation. One phenomenon often occurs that during one period when several particular technique is popular, a saturation of human resource in those fields will emerge, resulting in decreased value of those talents. However, if we handle a large range of knowledge we also have more choices about vocation and could change our career easier according to the situation.

To sum up, a generalist is more suitable to today's society than a specialist in my eyes because the world is developing so fast that broad knowledge could help us avoid falling behind.

1 句子的表达能力应该有所提高
2 逻辑性表达也要提高。要明白每句话写的作用是什么

我是chineseladyUID: 2662783

The discussion of which type of employee is the better between generalist and specialist很特别啊 has been talked over again and again. In my point of view, I think a generalist will fit the modern society better.开头很好值得学习, 很简练.


To begin with, we all know that the relations among different fields of science are closer and closer nowadays. That is to say好, the knowledge of one particular subject might be useful to help us solve problems in another field which is totally different from this one. For instance, we used to apply digital password to identify one person's identity and this is just a fundamental question in Information Technology. But we know that simple technology is not secure and dependable enough to meet the needs in many occasions so that a new technology, biological pattern recognition emerges. 例子很专业的 This new technology combines the original digital password with the biological characteristics such as fingerprint to identify a person and that is really an advancement

Moreover, modern society advances on such a rapid pace that we could adjust to it easier if we have broad knowledge. The reason is that it is difficult for us individuals to figure out what kind of talent the society needs due to its changeable situation同意. One phenomenon often occurs that during one period when several particular technique is popular, a saturation of  human resource in those fields will emerge, resulting in decreased  value of those talents. However, if we handle a large range of knowledge we also have more choices about vocation and could change our career easier according to the situation.

To sum up, a generalist is more suitable to today's society than a specialist in my eyes because the world is developing so fast that broad knowledge could help us avoid falling behind.结尾也很简洁, 很喜欢你的开头和结尾. 值得借鉴