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daisy840228UID: 2684617

It is a hot topic that if it is important to have the rules about the types of clothing that peple  are allowed to work or school. Many of the people who hold that people should have freedom to choose the clothing they wear view that it should not have the rules, while other people argue that people at work or school should  wear uniform. In my point of view, I side with the latter one. Of the countless reasons, I will present the most conspicuous ones here.
The first plain truth, I am presenting here, is that ruling the type of clothes is instrumental to set up the repute of a company or school and show the rule, culture, and even discipline to other members of society. In china, most of the middle schools have their uniform, and each uniform stands for a culture or a rule, which is meaniful. For example, students' uniform always have the sign of that school, it maybe some words or maybe some pictures, which is special to the school and alos stands for the expectation of the school to the students. In addition, when students are studying or playing or taking some public activities together, wearing uniforms shows the school's good order. So do the company. On the other hand, A tidy uniform of a company does not only show the company's culture and diciplin, but also show the reputation of the company. employees who do an exellent job and have a good influence on their clients would make the company more well-known by virture of working and communicating with people in their special uniform.
Furthermore, under my preference lies another equally important fact that clothes stands for the career spirit which could encourage employees dedicated more to the job and would take more attention and self-controlled of their words and behavior. For instance, when people get tired or lose faith of the work they were doing, they may be encouraged by one little words in their clothes, namely nothing is impossible. Also, They may also consider about their company or school's image when they are working, talking with other people, or even taking a bus, which would definetely improve the society's working effciency, secure and traffic, and even civilization finally. For example, when people wearing uniform have a speech in a public place, they may do things perfectly and avoid making any difference which might taking misunderstanding.
Admittedly, wearing a uniform has some undeniable demirits, such as it's not free, and make the owner looks like inflexible or rigorous, However, its advantages carry more weight than wearing clothing freely when people are at work or school, and the case is rare and too weak to weaken my viewpoints.
In conclusion, despite some minor drawbacks, to have the rules about the types of clothing that people are allowed to work and school is instrumental rather than detrimental to us, No matter from the aspect of corporation or school, but also in personal's point of view. So, we are supposed to wear uniform when we are work or study, no matter how  hard it maybe at first.

如是_ivyUID: 2704554

It is a hot topic that if it is important to have the rules about the types of clothing that peple（people）  are allowed to work or school. Many of the people who hold that people should have freedom to choose the clothing they wear view that it should not have the rules, while other people argue that people at work or school should wear uniform. In my point of view, I side with the latter one. Of the countless reasons, I will present the most conspicuous ones here.* U& J4
The first plain truth, I am presenting here, is that ruling the type of clothes is instrumental to set up the repute of a company or school and show the rule, culture, and even discipline to other members of society. In china, most of the middle schools have their uniform, and each uniform stands for a culture or a rule, which is meaniful.（这个拼错了吧。你是不是要表达很有意义的意思啊，不能这样吧。是meaningful。但是还是觉得光说which is meaningful很诡异啊。） For example, students' uniform always have the sign of that school, it maybe some words or maybe some pictures, which is special to the school and alos stands for the expectation of the school to the students.（这句话米有连词，但是有俩单句啊。建议写成since students’ uniforms always have the sign of their school which may just be some words or pictures, they usually special to the school and stand for the school’s expectations.） In addition, when students are studying or （这里最好不要用or，逗号就好）playing or taking some public activities together, wearing uniforms shows（主谓一致啊）the school's good order. So do the company. On the other hand, A tidy uniform of a company does not only show the company's culture and diciplin（discipline）, but also show the reputation of the company. Employees（大写） who do an exellent（excellent） job and have a good influence on their clients would make the company more well-known by virture （是不是拼错了。Virtue？觉得用在这里怪怪的）of working and communicating with people in their special uniform.5 M1 T1 }" X5 B2 X6 y+ Z  u
Furthermore, under my preference lies another equally important fact that clothes stands for the career spirit which could encourage employees dedicated more to the job and would take more attention and self-controlled of their words and behavior.（第一这句似乎没有看到主语。第二感觉你用了很多stand for.可以换一下啊。比如indicate，imply啊啥的） For instance, when people get tired or lose faith of the work they were doing, they may be encouraged by one little words in their clothes, namely nothing is impossible. Also, They may also consider about their company or school's image when they are working, talking with other people, or even taking a bus, which would definetely（definitely） improve the society's working effciency（efficiency）, secure and traffic, and even civilization finally. For example, when people wearing uniform have a speech in a public place, they may do things perfectly and avoid making any difference which might taking misunderstanding.（take..还有就是觉得这一段论证的有点绕来绕去了，我自己有时候也是的，就是觉得没话说了，就一个类似的句子翻来覆去地说。例子和前面的道理没咋分啊，没看出来那是个例子，如果没有for example的话。）
Admittedly, wearing a uniform has some undeniable demirits（demerits）, such as it's not free, and make the owner looks like inflexible or rigorous. However, its advantages carry more weight than wearing clothing freely when people are at work or school, and the case is rare and too weak to weaken my viewpoints.(觉得你这句话米有论证呢)
In conclusion, despite some minor drawbacks, to have the rules about the types of clothing that people are allowed to work and school is instrumental rather than detrimental to us, No matter from the aspect of corporation or school, but also in personal's point of view. So, we are supposed to wear uniform when we are work or study, no matter how  hard it maybe at first.
1.语法，句法，尤其是主谓一致要注意啊。要细心点写啊。还有一些很多小错误，我就没有标出来了，估计你是不细心打错了吧。
2。觉得你的形容词和副词特别强大。