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本帖最后由 灿烂千阳灿烂 于 2009-11-13 15:46 编辑

回复gaofei11.12号的口语作业:
发音有些不标准。。。

其他OK。。。
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cinderella1016 + 2 你几号考,来得及的话,我帮你改一篇~~
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4# 灿烂千阳灿烂
哪里不标准呀。。。 你得教教我呀。。。

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到处都不标准。。。o(∩_∩)o...哈哈 5# gaofei323

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到处都不标准。。。o(∩_∩)o...哈哈 5# gaofei323
灿烂千阳灿烂 发表于 2009-11-13 17:32

那你都得教。。。。
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灿烂千阳灿烂 + 1 信任版主真抠门儿,才给5分啊~

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嘿嘿, 每次看到你们两个这样, 我就觉得嘿嘿, 很像小两口在打情骂俏来着。。。呃, 冒着当灯泡的危险, 我怎么跟你们么俩一组来着。。。。

to 阳阳口语作业:11月10日
1.如果可以流利些会更好
2.果然和gaofei有一拼, 大部分都是用well开头。
3.内容丰富一些会更好, 理由可以更加的个性些, 多一些。比如说cafe, 想想除了relax什么还有什么, (我说的也是这个, 嘿嘿, 当时我特别的想说因为cafe里面有帅锅, 呃, 不好意思, 没说出来, 不过我几经决定在考场上如果我碰到这样的题目, 我一定会说那里有帅锅的。。吼吼吼)

同样阳阳11月12日口语作业:
1.不错, 流利多了, 而且内容也更加丰富了。(我在怀疑我上面写一大推的意义。。。。。)
2. 一个我也有的问题, 呃, 时间, ,貌似我们两个都不说完。
3.整体的感觉比上次的好很多, 哇咔咔 加油, 加油, 我们继续加油


坐等你们小两口的砖头。。。。

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baobao你果然很雷。。。这个不能乱点鸳鸯谱的呀。。。gaofei不要紧,跟群里所有的人都传了绯闻了,我可不行啊,我要注重我的reputation的呢。。。o(∩_∩)o...哈哈 8# wobaobao519

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It is better to take the most difficult courses in colleges even though you probably won’t receive the top grade.



With the development and the cultivation of the society, issues about education are occupying people’s topic centre. Although a considerable number of people who hold the viewpoint that receiving the top grade is more essential than taking the most difficult courses in colleges claim that grade is one of the most convincing factors when referring to study,  I am convinced that study has less connection with not only the level of course when we choose to take but also the grade we will receive.

It is always top of the list of my arguments that the eventual goal of education never lies in receiving the top grade. Grade plays merely the role of a measuring tool by which we may know which direction we should head for, but the real objection of study is the truth that we become from unknown to known, from superficial to profound, from naïve to mature. One famous college president said once, after all knowledge studied during college wiped away, things left is what the college really teaches their students. Nobody will include the record of receiving the top grade in, I suppose.

Secondly, the outcome of education does not depend merely on the level of the grade. Some students are good at examining so they can get a higher mark and rank top but others are not. When Einstein was young, teachers thought him to be weird as a result of his failure in simple quiz. But we all admit that it could not to be more reasonable to say that Einstein is among the cleverest people all over the world. Top grade fails to represent that you master better than others; Full marks on test paper could not suggest you study excellently enough on the subject either.

An equally essential factor which deserves people’s attention is that the more difficult the course is, the sense of accomplishment after master this course is huger, thus inspiring more interest. According to the survey from AOP(Association of psychology) in 1971, 76.3% people become interested in the field they are good at, especially the field appears to be not so easy for everyone to challenge. And with the succeeding observation, those people act much more confident and zealous when accounting to related professional problems. We can see that the result of taking difficult course may bring out unexpected success beneficial to human beings. Is that the right pursue of education?

From what have been mentioned above, it is not difficult to assert this conclusion that we should take those meaningful courses no matter how difficult they are. Although  the difficulty blocks the way to top grade, probably it might leads to the eventual truth of study.
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11.13口语baobao:
口语也要稍微注意下下~然后就是1、2题条理好像不太清楚

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回复gaofei作文11月12日的:

Every time we make a choice to decide which courses would be selected in each beginning of a new semester, we probably take two things factor 会不会更好?into consideration, whether the courses could give us practical knowledge, which at the same time means they are more difficult than usual ones, or others in which we highly possible to get a top grade without应该是with吧? less effort. In my point, I prefer the former ones as following reasons(the reasons are as follows).

The first reason to support my point is that it is the practical knowledge and skills rather than top grade are the most crucial things we have to achieve during the college. Therefore, even though people have to suffer(bear) heavy burden to move on, in the end they would definitely become more eligible than others to undertake harder work, which would expand the chance to enter a famous company, earn desirous payment and more eminent social state. Just as my physics teacher told to me:” the payment in your college life would be repaid to yourself ten times back when you step into the society, so just don’t choose something everybody are capable to accomplish, but what is so hard that most people would not like to do.” So, if you want more payment back in the future, you need to select the things which require more endeavor now.

In addition, it is a precious spirit that facing the difficulty directly instead of avoiding it. When you are still students, it is possible to choose some classes you like or easier to finish, but it wouldn’t happen when you became aan adult and work for supporting your family. At that time, you have to take the assignment your boss ordered no matter it is comfortable or sufferableinsufferable, and as usually it would much likely to be the latter ones. This work may cost 10 hours per day to visit your customers or lock you in the office until until去掉every late night to make design of a new product. But, unfortunately, you couldn’t say” no” because your family must have food, your children need to go to university and your parents need money to go to hospital in case. So it is necessary for everyone to be trained as strong as possible in the campus, namely select the hardest courses to learn. Thus, they would be quicker to adopt(adopt this competitive societymore quickly) this competitive society.

Admittedly, a part of students are not as mature as adults are, so just compelling them forcibly to undertake too much unbearable tasks may be not helpful. To those students, they should be encouraged to selected challenging and difficult courses费解, but it is important to protect them from losing confidence or becoming depression in front of these works. Otherwise, they may earn less than they would lose.

In conclusion, selecting difficult and challenging courses would be a clever choice since it would train you becoming more capable(train sb.doing可以这样吗?)in your area and cultivate a stronger heart, as long as the potential danger, losing confident or being depression, is protected from. 费解


1.文章结构还是比较完整的,但是表达还是偏口语化。。。
2.部分语法错误
3.第四段,就是以admittedly开头那段感觉没有什么意义,你写的是一边倒的作文吗?还是70%支持,30%反对?看你结尾好像还是 一边倒支持的,但是第四段又好像让步了。。。confusing...

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嘿嘿, 每次看到你们两个这样, 我就觉得嘿嘿, 很像小两口在打情骂俏来着。。。呃, 冒着当灯泡的危险, 我怎么跟你们么俩一组来着。。。。

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wobaobao519 发表于 2009-11-13 19:17
嘿嘿小两口打架...乐死我了:lol ...说口语还能说这境界..服死
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