12月2日 独立作文 电影

summerdingdavidUID: 2718039

With the thrivingof mass media such as DVD, video tape recorder and internet, individuals easily have access to watch a movie at home. However, in our modern society, watching a film in cinema, a classic relaxing method, still bring its charming and fascinating into full play. If you ask me, which place you will choose to watch a movie,cinema or home? My answer is definitely the former, since compared with thetraditional idea of “watching movie”, this is better illustrated as “experience a movie.”

Mention the pleasure of watching movie in cinema, the shaking media effects firstly comesinto mind. Have you still immersed in the dread of the end of world describedin 2012; have you remain obsessed with the fantasy of the exciting adventure showed in pirate of Caribbean? I believe that  not only the eminent movie producing by it self but also the delicate vision and breathing sound effect provided by movie advanced cinema’s equipments giveyou such a big shock and wonderful experience. It is the very reason that appeals to flock to go to cinema and also the advantage that family’s media cannot peer. Without the excellent vision and sound effects, you cannot appreciate the movie with whole-heart.

The environment built by cinema also is another factor that attracts me deeply. When you sit ina cozy armchair, enjoy your delicious popcorn, and then project hall gradually becomes dark and quiet, suddenly a sheaves of light threads through the wholeroom and projects on the huge screen, which means to be ready, a splendid movie travel is waiting for you to experience. Followed with the up and down of scenario, spectators’ mood become fluctuated. People sad for the poor girl’smiserable life, happy for the satisfactory ending, agitate for the unpredictedresult. Audiences feel what the roles’ feelings, think what the parts’ thoughts, they cannot help to threw themselves into the plot of the movie,under such vivid effect and suitable atmosphere provided by the cinema.
Therefore,compared with crude vision and sound effect attached with family’s media, which makes a breathtaking fighting scene into a watery act scene, I prefer to enter into cinema and enjoy the movie, although it would charge me more money.

summerdingdavidUID: 2718039

怎么很多字都连起来了，:L

shirley072UID: 2712200

With the thriving（这个是形容词吧）of mass media such as DVD, video tape recorder and internet, individuals easily have access to watch a movie at home. However, in our modern society, watching a film in cinema, a classic relaxing method, still bring its charming and fascinating into full play（这句话不太对吧，主语是看电影，并且没有宾语名词）. If you ask me, which place you will choose to watch a movie,cinema or home? My answer is definitely the former（one）, since（去掉） compared with the traditional idea of “watching movie”, this is better illustrated (什么意思？) as “experience a movie.

Mention the pleasure of watching movie in cinema, the shaking media effects firstly comes（come）into （my）mind. Have you still immersed in the dread of the end of world described
in 2012; have you remain obsessed with the fantasy of the exciting adventure showed in pirate of Caribbean? I believe that not only the eminent movie producing by it self（？）but also the delicate vision and breathing sound effect provided by movie advanced cinema’s equipments give you such a big shock and wonderful experience. It is the very reason that appeals to flock （appeals people）to go to cinema and also the advantage that family’s media cannot peer(这两个句子没有并列关系啊，分开写吧). Without the excellent vision and sound effects, you cannot appreciate the movie with whole-heart.

The environment built（建设环境？直接说the environment of cinema好了）by cinema also is another factor that attracts me deeply. When you sit in a cozy armchair, enjoy your delicious popcorn, and then project hall gradually becomes dark and quiet, suddenly asheaves of light threads through the whole room and projects on the huge screen, which means to be ready（which means the preparation is accomplished）, (then) a splendid movie travel is waiting for you to experience. Followed with the up and down (这个作为名词跟在follow with后面会不会不恰当？个人感觉) of scenario, spectators’ mood become fluctuated. People sad for the poor girl’s miserable life, happy for the satisfactory ending, agitate for the unpredicted result. Audiences feel what the roles’ feelings, think what the parts’ thoughts, they cannot help to threw themselves into the plot of the movie,under such vivid effect and suitable atmosphere provided by the cinema.（感觉这一段后面写着写着又写到前面一段的内容上去了）

Therefore,compared with crude vision and sound effect attached with family’s media, which makes a breathtaking fighting scene into a watery act scene, I prefer to enter into cinema and enjoy the movie, although it would charge me more money.


内容上面可能还是得仔细想想，给我的感觉基本上主要是在写电影院的效果带来的fun
有些短语用得不错，但是很多句子结构不太完整呢
个人意见啦