12.2 独立作文

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It is more fun to see a movie in the cinema with other people than see a movie at home.

Since technology developed rapidly nowdays, people have seem to have a variety of choice to access the movies,such as cinema,VCD,DVD,online movies,and so forth.The question at hand is which place where pepole watch movies provids more fun.In my opinion.I prefer to see movies at theater because of the much clearer picture ,stereophonic atmosphere,enjoyment shared with other people ,yummy popcorn and so on.

First of all,movies played at home can never be up to the level effect of the cinema.Movies shown in the cinema have a much more delicate image than ordinary screen shows. The professional technic equipment allow audience to travel in the fictional world,magic stories or actient times,as if they were personally on the scene.Moreover, the effect of the stereo can never be reached by most of families,since they have no such large to space to generate echo effects or enough money to purchase the hihg-costs Hifi.

Secondly,it is much fun to share enjoyments with other audience.Although,talking loudly is never permitted during the time of showing,people will laugh at one time when seeing the interesting episode.To me,listening dfferent kinds of voice of laughing is another sort of pleasure.Especially when i enjoy the comedies,i also would like to buy myself a large package of popcorns which is not available at my home,

Admittedly,seeing films at home seems more comfrotable,and you can pose yourself in anywhere like lying on the sofa.However,you have to worry that your neighbour will knock your door and complain ahout loud sound.Most of all,you can not enjoy the ceremony of the first shown at yourself home.

in conclusion, I disagree that seeing movies at home is more fun than in the cinema.Because the limitted condition at home is not comparable to the technical environment of the theatre.in addition,seeing film alone lacks the happy atmosphere,even accompanied by some worries.

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1# shining_sj

Since technology developed rapidly nowdays （nowadays）, people have(去掉~) seem to have a variety of choice to access the movies, such as cinema, VCD, DVD, online movies, and so forth. The question at hand is which place where （去掉where）pepole watch movies provids more fun. In my opinion， I prefer to see movies at theater because of the much clearer picture, stereophonic atmosphere（前面那个单词我不认识~我错了还没背过单词~==查了下立体声~努力记住咯）, enjoyment shared with other people ,yummy popcorn and so on.
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' l0 c0 C0 b; T! E/ P2 |7 w6 nFirst of all, movies played at home can never be up to the level effect of the cinema.(读起来有些别扭 把effect 提到movies played at home前比较好) Movies shown in the cinema have a much more delicate image than ordinary screen shows. The professional technic (technical)equipment allow audience to travel in the fictional world, magic stories or actient (ancient) times, as if they were personally on the scene. Moreover, the effect of the stereo can never be reached by most of families, since they have no such large to (去掉)space to generate echo effects or enough money to purchase the hihg-costs（high） Hifi.  a2 L% L; g  C% w# N+ U

2 x$ g% T8 |) MSecondly, it is much fun to share enjoyments with other audience. Although, talking loudly is never permitted during the time of showing, people will laugh at one time when seeing the interesting episode. To me, listening dfferent(拼写错了~) kinds of voice of laughing is another sort of pleasure. Especially when i enjoy the comedies, i also would like to buy myself a large package of popcorns which is not available at my home.（最后句话有些乱~语义与语法~都有点乱~最好不要把新的information扯进来~其实这里可以把这个personal experience完善一下~会是一个比较好的感受观众互动的例证~）
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Admittedly, seeing films at home seems more comfortable （拼错了~~）, and you can pose yourself in anywhere like lying on the sofa. However, you have to worry that your neighbour will knock your door and complain ahout（拼错咯~） loud sound. Most of all, you can not enjoy the ceremony of the first shown at yourself home.6 u6 H: U+ Y& ^, S/ W+ o! Z
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in conclusion, I disagree that seeing movies at home is more fun than in the cinema. Because the limited(limited) condition at home is not comparable to the technical environment of the theatre. in addition, seeing film alone lacks the happy atmosphere, even accompanied by some worries.

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