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大家狠批啊 第一次写
The passage mainly discuss the issue that American wood companies are not likely to take the same measures as other type of company do to seek an international eco-certification, while the lecturer opposites that point by stating several reasons as listed below.
First of all, American customers, the professor maintains, do not treat all the advertisements as same sort; instead, they will distinguish the advertisement for a company’s own products from the one with independent organization. As a result, they are probably in favor of those ads with the eco-certification of the international organization. Therefore, the reasoning in the article fails to support its main point.
Secondly, the professor admit that costumers tend to prefer products with lower prices, he asserts, however, that they have the inclination to care about prices alone only when one product with same quality is much more expensive than the other. So factors other than prices are still included in costumers’ consideration, such as the value of the ecocertification.
What’s more, the lecturer argues that what the wood companies should pay attention to is not the foreign consumers as the article says, but the foreign competition that will exert greater influence on the companies. If the companies capture the world trend of ecocertificated products in a slower pace, they will lose not only the oversea market, but also the domestic customers.
All in all, the lecturer refutes the point of the article by a strong and reasoning analysis.

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The passage mainly discuss the issue that American wood companies are not likely to take the same measures as other type of company do to seek an international eco-certification, while the lecturer opposites that point by stating several reasons as listed below.
First of all, American customers, the professor maintains, do not treat all the advertisements as same sort; instead, they will distinguish the advertisement for a company’s own products from the one with independent organization. As a result, they are probably in favor of those ads with the eco-certification of the international（independent） organization. Therefore, the reasoning in the article fails to support its main point.
Secondly, the professor admit that costumers tend to prefer products with lower prices, he asserts, however, that they have the inclination to care about prices alone only when one product with same quality is much more expensive than the other. So factors other than prices are still included in costumers’ consideration, such as the value of the ecocertification.
What’s more, the lecturer argues that what the wood companies should pay attention to is not the foreign consumers as the article says, but the foreign competition that will exert greater influence on the companies. If the companies capture the world trend of ecocertificated products in a slower pace, they will lose not only the oversea market, but also the domestic customers.
All in all, the lecturer refutes the point of the article by a strong and reasoning analysis.
第一次写就能写得这么好，真是让偶佩服得紧啊！你的文章结构很完美，要点把握得很充分，论证也很到位，几乎找不到什么修改的地方了。
如果硬要鸡蛋里挑骨头的话，那么MM应该注意一下文章中的时态和语态。