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The lecturer clearly illustrates that the hydrogen is not the solutions to supplant the oil, which strongly casts doubt upon what the reading passage talks about.

Firstly, the professor uses to challenge what the reading illustrates is hydrogen is not such a practical and easily available substances. It must be obtained the pure liquid state and kept very cold to store in the engine.

The second aspect demonstrated in the lecture which can be viewed as another item of contradictory evidence against the reading that the process of manufacture hydrogen will contaminate the environment. In order to purify it, the process need lots of energy by burning the coal and oil.

In addition, contrary to the information shown in the reading passage, the professor makes a fairly different idea that producing fuel-cell engine is extremely expensive. The material which uses to make the chemical reaction is quite rare metal.

In a word, what the speaker illustrates in the lecture is entirely contradictory to the information demonstrated by the writer.
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发表于 2009-12-16 22:52:21 |只看该作者
The lecturer clearly illustrates that the hydrogen is not the solutions(solution) to supplant the oil, which strongly casts doubt upon what the reading passage(passages或者改为part) talks about.

Firstly, the professor uses to这个是啥意思?)challenge what the reading illustrates is hydrogen is not such a practical and easily available substances. (这句的结构有点看不明白哦!)It must be obtained(为什么用这个词呢?) the pure liquid state and kept very cold to store in the engine.

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The second aspect demonstrated in the lecture which can be viewed as another item of contradictory evidence against the reading that the process of manufacture hydrogen (hydrogen manufacture )will contaminate the environment. In order to purify it, the process need(needs) lots of energy by burning the coal and oil.

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In addition, contrary to the information shown in the reading passage, the professor makes a fairly different idea that producing fuel-cell engine is extremely expensive. The material which uses to make the chemical reaction is quite rare metal.2 f( q. v0 C9 o  E6 m$ N1 b


In a word, what the speaker illustrates in the lecture is entirely contradictory to the information demonstrated by the writer.

基本信息都很准确,最后那段总结段可以没有。偶尔出现了一些小的错误,其他的都不错。加油!

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The lecturer clearly illustrates that the hydrogen is not the solutions to supplant the oil, which strongly casts doubt upon what the reading passage talks about.

Firstly, what the professor uses to challenge what the reading illustrates is hydrogen is not such a practical and easily available substance. It must be obtained from the pure liquid state and kept very cold to store in the engine.7 M" _0 f9 S  \
The second aspect demonstrated in the lecture which can be viewed as another item of contradictory evidence against the reading that the process of manufacture hydrogen will contaminate the environment. In order to purify it, the process needs lots of energy by burning the coal and oil.

addition, contrary to the information shown in the reading passage, the professor makes a fairly different idea that producing fuel-cell engine is extremely expensive. The material which uses to make the chemical reaction is quite rare metal.


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In a word, what the speaker illustrates in the lecture is entirely contradictory to the information demonstrated by the writer.

写得很好,比我听到的准确多了,有一些小地方用蓝笔标注了,仅供参考。

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