进军美利坚——1月5日独立作文，大家晚安

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The environmental issue is too complex to be handled by the individual. Do you agree or disagree?

"The highest average temperature record for this month is broken again", "XXXkm2 of forest have been become desert"... It is no surprise that such headlines jump into the eyes when we unfold the newspaper. Nobody can deny the negative impact resulted from environmental problem and the human beings hold strong awareness to distinguish the fire, to relegate at least. Though the country and government are the decisive power for the battle of saving the earth, I believe the effort from individual is significant to handle environmental crisis.

Admittedly, the environmental conservation requires the cooperation of all nations and effective action which should be guaranteed by government with insistence since the problem is too enormous to be solved over one night. For example, we need the international negotiation such as Copenhagen Conference in 2009; we need local government to implement population control policy; we need established environment protection law to avoid the distinction of wild animals and to maintain the rain forest.

However, we must put eyes on the performance of individual on environmental protection. No matter how many international agreements are signed or how many slogans are claimed, the root prescription for the problem is to take environmental protective action by each person. One contributes for reducing CO2 discharge if he/she walks to work instead of driving a car. Likewise, one resists the global warming if he/she turns up 1 degree of the temperature of air-condition. Therefore, the environmental problem is handled by individual behavior as well as the management macroscopically.

Furthermore, individual positive action is able to impact awareness and behavior of others, even control the decision of company or government. For instance, a national chemical factory planed to set up a heavy mental factory next to Xia'men, a gorgeous city in China. At hearing the news, a professor began to promulgate the potential terrible consequences if the plant is set up. The public supported his voice and express their disagreement by peaceful demonstration, writing letter to government, etc. Finally, the government canceled this plan which should have benefited the city with billions of income. From this true incident, I am confident to say the individual is able to dominate the future of environment.

As summary, environmental problem is a world wide focus. Every person is responsible to improve the survival condition. It is you, individually, that are able to change the earth into better homeland.

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"The highest average temperature record for this month is broken again", "XXXkm2 of forest have been become desert"... It is no surprise that such headlines jump into the eyes when we unfold the newspaper. Nobody can deny the negative impact resulted from environmental problem and the human beings hold strong awareness to distinguish the fire, to relegate at least. (应该是用extinct吧，按照你的意思！to relegate at least是什么意思呢？)Though the country and government are the decisive power for the battle of saving the earth, I believe the effort from individual is significant to handle environmental crisis.# T' h) W5 S+ Y; b$ \: K  m6 M

, u. M5 n' y+ ?4 l/ mAdmittedly, the environmental conservation requires the cooperation of all nations and effective action which should be guaranteed by government with insistence since the problem is too enormous to be solved over one night. For example, we need the international negotiation such as Copenhagen Conference in 2009; we need local government to implement population control policy; we need established environment protection law to avoid the distinction (extinction)of wild animals and to maintain the rain forest.; ]- K, W) l9 u/ Z% Y

# {; F8 g# d; F4 @However, we must put eyes on the performance of individual on environmental protection. No matter how many international agreements are signed or how many slogans are claimed, the root prescription for the problem is to take environmental protective action by each person. One contributes (contribution)for reducing CO2 discharge if he/she walks to work instead of driving a car. Likewise, one resists the global warming if he/she turns up 1 degree of the temperature of air-condition. Therefore, the environmental problem is handled by individual behavior as well as the management macroscopically. （这个是什么？）
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6 i5 ?* ]# s) pFurthermore, individual positive action is able to impact（这里分开用动词，第一个可以用arouse) awareness and (impact)behavior of others, even control（个人觉得用控制不太好，如果具体到厦门XP这个例子的话，可以用颠覆，更生动了topple over) the decision of company or government. For instance, a national chemical factory planed to set up a heavy mental factory next to Xia'men, a gorgeous city in China. At(after) hearing the news, a professor began to promulgate the potential terrible consequences if the plant is set up. The public supported his voice and express (expressed)their disagreement by peaceful demonstration, writing letter to government, etc. Finally, the government canceled this plan which should have benefited the city with billions of income. From this true incident, I am confident to say the individual is able to dominate the future of environment.' j' G1 W6 ^7 s, B

# W+ s; E2 h' v# v+ BAs summary, environmental problem is a world wide focus. Every person is responsible to improve the survival condition. It is you, individually, that are able to change the earth into better homeland.

橙色是我觉得值得我学习的地方，LZ能够用很多替换词来代替了environmental issue这点非常值得我学习。红色是我觉得出现了一些小小的语法错误的地方。总体来说是篇不错的文章呢。