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发表于 2010-3-9 21:27:52 |显示全部楼层
Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

According to a recent survey, more and more students have unpleasant associations with their homework. They fail to take account of the fact that "Look back to the old, if you would learn the new". I think
that daily homework is necessary for students.
For one thing, the students should review the lessons they had by doing the homework, for students may forget what they learnt during the classes soon without reviewing the lessons. I was in the same situation before, when I was in grad three in colledge, the teacher hardly give us assignments which results of that I do not assimilate the knowledge I have learnt.  From then on ,my study was declining day by day. So I think daily homework is important for students' study.
The another reason why I think so is that if the teacher donot give assignments to students, it will add them more time to play, especially some boys who spend most time playing computer games which causes that they get a bad grade in their exames.For example one of my roommates liu who is addicted to the computer games, if the teacher didnot give assignments to us, he amostly spend all time playing computer games, let along his study.
Fome what I have stated above, I may draw the safe conclusion that daily homework is necessary for students, proper homework should be given to students to limit the amount of time students spend in pla

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发表于 2010-3-10 11:41:56 |显示全部楼层
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Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

According to a recent survey, more and more students have unpleasant associations with their homework. They fail to take account of the fact that "Look back to the old, if you would learn the new". 这是传说中的温故而知新么?是正式表达的话偷走了,不是的话,最好建议查下官方翻译版本,而且建议如果引用温故而知新的话可以带上是孔子说的,具体和细节一点。I think that daily homework is necessary for students.

For one thing, the students should review the lessons they had by doing the homework, for students may forget what they learnt during the classes soon without reviewing the lessons. I was in the same situation before, when I was in grad three in colledge, the teacher hardly give us assignments which results of that I do not assimilate the knowledge I have learnt.米有断句 From then on ,my study was declining day by day. So I think daily homework is important for students' study.6 f7 F" P% I. ]

The another reason why I think so is that if the teacher donot give assignments to students,这个很罗嗦而且啥也没说 it will add用的怪怪的 them more time to play, especially some boys who spend most time playing computer games which causes that they get a bad grade in their exames.For example one of my roommates liu who is addicted to the computer games, if the teacher didnot give assignments to us, he amostly spend all time playing computer games, let along his study.最后一句语法有问题,而且很Chinglish

Fome what I have stated above, I may draw the safe conclusion that daily homework is necessary for students, proper homework should be given to students to limit the amount of time students spend in pla
似乎楼主粘掉了最后一段。总的来说,内容结构都没啥问题,语言觉得楼主还要加油啊加油~

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发表于 2010-3-11 15:37:41 |显示全部楼层
Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
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According to a recent survey(study 用的多,我觉得), more and more students have unpleasant associations with their homework. They fail to take account of the fact that "Look back to the old, if you would learn the new". I think 4 g: I# Y# F. ^! k& }' S0 X: ~% Y
that daily homework is necessary for students.
For one thing, the students should review the lessons they had(have) by doing the homework, for students may forget what they learnt during the classes soon without reviewing the lessons. I was in the same situation before, when I was in grad three in colledge(college), the teacher hardly give us assignments which results of(results in)that I do not assimilate the knowledge I have learnt.  From then on, my study was declining day by day. So I think daily homework is important for students' study.$ _% [) Y1 u* Z1 J9 {- U. B
The another(Another) reason why I think so is that if the teacher donot give assignments to students, it will add(leave) them more time to play, especially some boys who spend most time playing computer games which causes that they get a bad grade in their exames. For example,one of my roommates liu who is addicted to the computer games, if the teacher didnot give assignments to us, he spend almost all the time playing computer games, let along his study(这一句很纠结嘎).
Fome(From) what I have stated above, I may draw the safe conclusion that(I can safely draw the conclusion that) daily homework is necessary for students, proper homework should be given to students to limit the amount of time students spend in pla

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