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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?  The purpose of television should all be educative, not entertain
. For my spectacular,I invirabily come back with fatigue of every muscle and heart after a long day studying every day.Opening the television,all programs are nothing but still teach me straightly,or,potentially express the meaning of how to deal with the event you faced and how to become a perfect resident though televison education,I would prefer to stay somewhere alone and peacefully.

To start with,watching televison has already become the most effective and directly which I can acquire relaxation and entertainment.In my memory,i can say that television watch me to grow up.Duing to environment of lacking young children the age like me,I have no choice but watching televison program to kill time for fun,such as the drama of friends,talk show of day day up,as well as movies.These things have already become my part of life.If televison just based on purpose of education present in front of me,I cannot imagine what my life would be.

Secondly,I confirmly believe that every family watch televison together more or less,and what we see is not program for fun rather cultivating our ability of resoving problems.We,as well as our parents,would be mad if we are emerged into our heart of educational knowledge all day.For them part,they have a permanent work and aslo have his own way of thinking and living,besides,there is no need for them to watch educational televison.There is no doubt that we should learn and obtain knowledge no matter how old we are,but we donot short of the time used for wathing televison.

Finally,the origin of televison exactly provide a way for people having fun immediately——at home.I personaly consider that the only purpose of educating people is school.Nowadays,while the economic and technologe is booming,the way of obtining knowdge can come from many aspects,vary book from internet.Our eyesight should not be limited by what we know,and what we see,howerer,should be extended.As a matter of fact,televison have already play key role of transforming knowledge though entertainment show.I stand on side of televison just based on purpose education or entertainment all have unbenifitial influence on people.

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For my spectacular,I invirabily come back with fatigue of every muscle and heart after a long day studying every day.Opening the television,all programs are nothing but still teach me straightly,or,potentially express the meaning of how to deal with the event you faced and how to become a perfect resident though televison education,I would prefer to stay somewhere alone and peacefully（背景陈述的很有新意啊~）.

To start with,watching televison has already become the most effective and directly which I can acquire relaxation and entertainment.In my memory,i can say that television watch me （是见证我的成长么？觉得witness好些吧？）to grow up.Duing to environment of lacking young children the age like me,I have no choice but watching televison program to kill time for fun,such as the drama of friends,talk show of day day up,as well as movies.These things have already become my part of life.If televison just based on purpose of education present in front of me,I cannot imagine what my life would be.

Secondly,I confirmly believe that every family watch televison together more or less,and what we see is not program for fun rather（than） cultivating our ability of resoving problems.We,as well as our parents,would be mad if we are emerged into our heart of educational knowledge all day.For them part,they have a permanent work and aslo have his(their) own way of thinking and living,besides,there is no need for them to watch educational televison.There is no doubt that we should learn and obtain knowledge no matter how old we are,but we do(are) not short of the time used for wathing televison.

Finally,the origin of televison exactly provide(s) a way for people having fun immediately——at home.I personaly consider that the only purpose of educating people is school.Nowadays,while the economic and technologe is booming,the way of obtining knowdge can come from many aspects,vary book from internet.Our eyesight should not be limited by what we know,and what we see,howerer,should be extended.As a matter of fact,televison have already play (a) key role of transforming knowledge though entertainment show.I stand on side of televison just based on purpose education or entertainment all have unbenifitial influence on peo整体不错啊， 就是几个小错误，

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3.13: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?  Young people should try different job before they decide which job or career they will do in the long term.
     I have a friend who pursed the major in college is phamacy,which has nothing relationship in area of being a teacher and he never had a contact with this before,since last time he helped a teacher in his hometown to be a temporaray assitant english teacher.After facing the cherish and longing for knowledge students,he suddenly awared of what he willing to purse in his spare lifetime.
To start with ,I deem that our college students without any experience access to this cruel and competition society,and we just posses the unprecise and concieted understanding by our own judgement,we should acquire comprehensive and impersonal judgement through doing different job.Take my father as a example.He devoted himself to many jobs before he got current job,such as a bussiness man,a cival servants.After a series of looses on business and failure to become a government employer,he finally acknowledged that he lacked these all kind of ability.It is evident that an individual who not purse some kind of work he can not find out an ideal job.
In addition,a job should be not always qualified by a kind of ability rather many kinds.For instant,for an professonal manager ,it is not enough that you just have a bility of leadship,also need a bility of flexbility,creative.When your employer had some quarrel among them,if a manager who short of quality of flexibility might copy with the problems,the business might be seriously affected,even destroyed.As well as a manager who lack of quality of creative,the business might not obtain new blood into company,if things go on like this,and the compay might loose the competitive force,even bankcruptcy.It just so happens that being different job provide opportunities for us to learn skill.In one word,it is necessary that prusing different job benefit us to learn different skills.
Even though,different job can bring us more advantages,but it donot mean that we should chooise give up when we are facing some problems.Sometimes,diffcuites can motivate our potential ability,also cultivate the sprit of sedulous.For example,Edison finally point out which kind of material adapt to be lamp wick after 2000 failures,and maybe without another persistence of edison,we would live in dark period.
From my statement above,I firmly believe that people try to different job benefit themto find a permant job in their furture.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:  Sports teaches us lessons about life.
     When I was a child, I felt like inticipating in some kinds of sports, such as basketball, football, and so forth. The most of all, besides keeping my body healthy, I gained some qualitys which I cannot learned from other aspects such as stusting people, never give up. Indeed, these qualities I obtained from sports are cructial to my life.
To start with,it is the first quality that I have learned from sports is trusting people as the same meaning of team work. For example, when the NBA star, Jordan, didnot have a better shot feeling that he would passed ball to his team partner to achieve the goal; Also, Jordan’s perform buzzar beater one by one, and these are central expression that his teammates trust Jordan. Moreover, it brings me a great influence on my future, and I prefer to give the opportunity to new applicants who are just graduating from colleges, and I deem that they would create more profits for me. Jack, a new worker in my office, accepted a pretty diffcult project which I gaved him, and he did very well on resigning project that made nearly 200,000 profits more than older aim. In conclusion, it is evident that this thing have a positve influence which makes me trust more on other people.
On the other hand, the quality of never give up is the next one I acknowledged through sports. Take Jordan as another example, Jordan’s buzzar which are all nearly successfully shot into the basket within only seconds far away from the final match wistle completely express the quality of never give up, and he wouldnot lose the only chance until the final point. Like the last time in college, I met the first challenge in my life, IBT and at that time I thought to give up IBT because of my poor speaking and listening, but finally overcame that period of hard time and got 102 (我瞎编的) marks, for there always have a voice in my heart to encourage me is never give up.
In a nutshell, sports teach me the most important quality in my life is trusting people and never give up.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:  Sports teaches us lessons about life.

When I was a child, I felt like inticipating(participating) in some kinds of sports, such as basketball, football, and so forth. The most of all, besides keeping my body healthy(直接用keep healthy), I gained some qualitys, which I cannot learned from other aspects, such as stusting people, never give(giving) up. Indeed, these qualities I obtained from sports are cructial to my life.

To start with, it is the first quality that I have learned from sports is trusting people as the same meaning of team work. For example, when the NBA star, Jordan, did not have a better shot feeling that he would passed ball to his team partner to achieve the goal（这句话主语在哪里？）; Also, Jordan’s perform buzzar beater one by one, and these are central expression that his teammates trust Jordan. Moreover, it brings me a great influence on my future, and I prefer to give the opportunity to new applicants who are just graduating from colleges, and I deem that they would create more profits for me. Jack, a new worker in my office, accepted a pretty diffcult project which I gaved him, and he did very well on resigning project that made nearly 200,000 profits more than older aim. In conclusion, it is evident that this thing have(has) a positve influence which makes me trust more on other people.
这段感觉论述的有点奇怪。第二个分分论点和团队合作有什么关系呢？应该讲几个人协同做项目的时候如何克服困难，最后成功。一个人怎么表达团队呢？

On the other hand, the quality of never give up is the next one I acknowledged through sports. Take Jordan as another example, Jordan’s buzzar which are all nearly successfully shot into the basket within only seconds far away from the final match wistle completely express the quality of never give up, and he would not lose the only chance until the final point. Like the last time in college, I met the first challenge in my life, IBT and at that time I thought to give up IBT because of my poor speaking and listening, but finally overcame that period of hard time and got 102 (我瞎编的) marks, for there always have a voice in my heart to encourage me is never give up.
乔丹的例子很好，要是能表达的更好一些就好了。另外，考试作文最好不要写和考试相关的东西。口语、作文都是这样。最好是不要。

  U# D+ g5 P& ~% \  rIn a nutshell, sports teach me the most important quality in my life is trusting people and never give up.
结尾最好还是能深入一下主题，感觉有点单薄。


总的来说，语法错误比较多，单词拼写也错的不少。单词的话可以用记事本写，完了复制到word里，一下就看出来哪些错了，然后平时多注意。

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Internet and transportation are all independent in people's life nowadays, and everyone in their unique area has huge significance affection. Internet prosper people's leisure time, as well as make people's life more easier. At the same time, transportation bring convinience and comfortable for people who want to move from one place to another place without cost more labor and time like before.I deem that it is diiffcult to choose which one should be invested by government money, and if the choice must be choosed that I will support the choice of spending money on internet.
     To start with,in comparsion with transportation, Internet cannot pollute any pollution into the earth, the only one in the universe. According to a report on the television i saw last night, Oriental Horizon, said that a car can produce at least 1kg carbon dioxide into the air which is the most enfluence factor leading to warm weather, if we can reduce one car on highway, we would breath more fresh air when we get up in the morning.
     On the other hand, investing money on internet can make people's life more enjoyable and comfortable. People can watch the newest movie, chatting on the internet which can make people more closive . For instance, my uncle lived America and he cannot often come back because of his busy work, however, we can talk and see each other through internet. Besides, we can find mateirals immediately from internet, which we donot need to seek for the material in the liabray for a long time, we just click on the button on google engine, take a second of minute, more than 1000 pages of information can be seen on the computer.  
     The last one but not least, internet achievement stand for a country whether it posseses competitive ability country or not. We can look a view on America. Last century, america as the first one invented the internet and broaded it into all over the world, and make it become the most influential country and highly techology country in the world. More money on internet can motivate highly technology to produce in our country, an undevelopment country, we need more high level of internet to operate business and develop our industry, reducing the distance on technology with other countries.
     In a nutshell, more money investing on internet not only benefit our country, but also benefit our citizen.

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Internet and transportation are all independent in people's life nowadays, and everyone in their unique area has huge significance affection. Internet prospers people’s leisure time, as well as makes people's life easier. At the same time, transportation bring convenience and comfortable for people who want to move from one place to another place without cost more labor and time like before .I deem that it is difficult to choose which one should be invested by government (money), and if the choice must be chosen that I will support the choice of spending money on internet. 7 a# n$ K& Z; j. v
     To start with, in comparison with transportation, Internet cannot(哈还说我  自己也连起来了哈) pollute （any pollution into 好像不大对）the earth, the only one in the universe（网络是宇宙中唯一不排放污染的东西？）. According to a report （showing）on the television i saw last night, Oriental Horizon, said that a car can produce at least 1kg carbon dioxide into the air which is the most (principal) effluence factor leading to warm weather(确定能用warm weather吗 green house effort算了), if we can reduce one car on highway, we would breath more fresh air when we get up in the morning.(问下是不是要用虚拟啊 我不是很清楚) ; W7 {& K) v& u, g2 q  g8 Y. q
     On the other hand, investing money on internet can make people's life more enjoyable and comfortable. People can watch the newest movie, chatting on the internet which can make people more closive( intimity 好像没closive) . For instance, my uncle lived (不用过去了吧)America and he cannot often come back because of his busy work, however, we can talk and see each other through internet. Besides, we can find materials immediately from internet, which we donot need to seek for the material in the library for a long time, we just click on the button on google engine, take a second of minute, more than 1000 pages of information can be seen on the computer.  
     The last one but not least, internet achievement stand for a country whether it posseses competitive ability country or not. We can look a view on America. Last century, america as the first one invented the internet and broaded it into all over the world, and make it（这句话主语不对啊  ） become the most influential country and highly techology country in the world.（作为第一的美国发明电脑后还是第一。。。号古怪的例子） More money （investing） on internet can motivate highly technology to (be )produced in our country, an undevelopment (developing 说中国。。)country, we need more high level of internet to operate business and develop our industry, reducing the distance on technology with other countries. - N( F/ l; Z. O; q
     In a nutshell, more money investing on internet not only benefit our country, but also benefit our citizen.


最后结尾有点奇怪  对国家好对城市好   。。  这样不太好  。
还有最后一段  有点奇怪  
反正写的比我好就是了   
现在那么晚了   啊。。明天还要考试。。。还要默写。。。说不定等会我还要做篇阅读。。。
共勉吧。。看你每天也写到好晚的。。。。。
Ps  我花了好久才改完这个的。。。。。。为了不被骂。。。

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呵呵。。谁骂你啊？

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As the ecomomic is booming, there is evidence that more and more places are required to be the place where can contain many factories, housing buildings, and such like these things. Here comes to a question, available places in the world is limited, we want to elevate the capacity of place for usage, and it means that the lands for other purposes will descend. Some peoples precisely deem that the place for manufacturing buildings, factories are more important than using for endagered animals, i strongly stand on the side of perseving these limited places for endangered animals which are their only adaptation to some extent
        To start with, as the passage time, we, human being, still get along well with animals peacufully and harmounious, until recently several hundreds of years, we have already casued many animals extinct, such as chinese sturgeon, a kind of fish which lived in changjiang river in china. Also, those kind of not extinction animals of number is far more denser than before, according a survey by an famous university from the United states, mississippi, said that the numbers of animals vary original approximately 7000 kinds from 3000 kinds. Every country all take every effort to protect our endagered animals, keeping them to return back their prosperous time. If we still compete the place with them, they will loss their ultimately place for living, at last the only feature in the world is human, i believe that every person in the world donot want to look at that condition.  
       Moreover, more places are forced to utilize for constructing factories and building, and the pollution from them are not only effect us, but also have a larger bad influence on endagered animals. It is our common scence that recogizes that animals are more easier and sensitivity than us, human being. For instance, the pollotion of water, the first suffer usually is fish, especially endangerd animals, not us. When we noticed this phenomenon, the river ecosysterm perhaps have already suffered a irredeemable catastrophe, and it maybe lead to a situation that a host of animals are facing extinction problem. Only humourous is the world, we can avoid we are the only survior of this wrong way..  
       In a nutshell, when the negative effects from using places for endangered animals are considered, we cannot do that.