【Big Fish】03月17日Issue212--By Bruce

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212: "If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it is justifiable."

There is no doubt that people all have their goal and they should try their best to achieve their objectives. However, their methods to attain their goal are all controversial. Some people interpret that all methods can be used to attain peoples' goal. On the contrary, opposed to their ideas is my viewpoint that people should not use every method to achieve their goals because they are restricted by their responsibility to other people, by the moral and ethic of our society and the law of our nature.

Admittedly, in order to succeed in achieving our goal, we should try our best to overcome any problems. With the sophistication of our society, our desire increase at the same time, thereby forcing us to be more and more painstaking. Therefore, when facing with some dilemmas, only through utilizing many possible approaches that we can obviate our problems.

However, our attitude and craving to succeed do not mean we can apply every method regardless of other people benefit. Since we are living in an even-handed society, where our profit are equally important to others even our status are higher than others. President and farmer are required to comply with the law, to revere each other and to responsible to our society. Hence, aspirant though we are, we cannot jeopardize other peoples' right to achieve their objectives. Such as a merchant, a people with his main purpose to maximize his merit during his transaction, should not sell those expired product to the public simply by reason of earning money. History has informed us that those profiteers were predestined to be penalized by the law and also failed to achieve their objectives in the end.

Besides our accountability to other peoples' right, we are still constrained by the moral and ethic of our society. Obviously, moral and ethic are the common concepts accepted by all the people in our society and have be test for untold time for their applicability. As an individual living in such an environment, only through strictly conform to those regulations that we can eventually achieve our goal and obtain respect from others. The competition in sport is one typical example. Athletes who use incitans to increase their sport ability to win the games, or to achieve their objectives, are detrimental to the moral and ethic of society and even harmful to themselves once being detected.

Third, in the process of achieving our goal, following the law of the nature is also necessary. Since our ability are not infinite, we could not object our goals with any method. For a governments, especially those of developing countries which strongly keen to develop as fast as possible, should understand their current circumstance and design their plan of development referring to the law of economic and society. The lesson of Soviet Russia provides us an instance. Imbalance development of its heavy and light industries finally brought about itself to its tomb.

To recapitulate, notwithstanding we should try our best to attain our goals, we still have to conform to our responsibility to other people, to the moral and ethic of our nation and to the law of our nature. Pursuing our objectives blindly without considering those restrictions would finally result in our failure of our goal and the damage of our society.

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There is no doubt that people all have their goal(s) and they should try their best to achieve their objectives. However, their methods to attain their goal(s) are all controversial.(有那么绝对吗？) Some people interpret that all methods can be used to attain peoples' goal. On the contrary, opposed to their ideas is my viewpoint that people should not use every method to achieve their goals（感觉应该是“随意的采用任何一种方式”更妥当） because they are restricted by their responsibility to other people, by the moral and ethic of our society and the law of our nature.

Admittedly, in order to succeed in achieving our goal, we should try our best to overcome any problems. With the sophistication of our society, our desire increase（increasing） at the same time, thereby forcing us to be more and more painstaking. Therefore, when facing with some dilemmas, only through utilizing many possible approaches that we can obviate our problems. （最后一句话感觉跟前边不太衔接）

However, our attitude and craving to succeed do not mean we can apply every method regardless of other people benefit. Since we are living in an even-handed society, where our profit are equally important to others even our status are higher than others. President and farmer are required to comply with the law, to revere each other and to （be） responsible to（改成for） our society. Hence, aspirant though we are, we cannot jeopardize other peoples' right to achieve their objectives. Such as a merchant, a people with his main purpose to maximize his merit(用profit) during his transaction, should not sell those expired product(s) to the public simply by reason of earning money. History has informed us that those profiteers were predestined to be penalized by the law and also failed to achieve their objectives in the end.

Besides our accountability to other peoples' right, we are still constrained by the moral and ethic of our society. Obviously, moral and ethic are the common concepts accepted by all the people in our society and have be(been) test(attested) for untold time for their applicability. As an individual living in such an environment, only through strictly conform to those regulations that we can eventually achieve our goal and obtain respect from others. The competition in sport is one typical example. Athletes who use incitans(incitants) to increase their sport ability to win the games, or to achieve their (other)objectives, are detrimental to the moral and ethic of society and even harmful to themselves once being detected.

Third, in the process of achieving our goal, following the law of the nature（跟下面的例证有冲突） is also necessary. Since our ability are not infinite, we could not object our goals with any method.（这句话感觉怪怪的） For a(those) governments, especially those of developing countries which strongly keen to develop as fast as possible, should understand their current circumstance and design their plan of development referring to the law of economic and society. The lesson of Soviet Russia provides us an instance. Imbalance development of its heavy and light industries finally brought about itself to its tomb.

To recapitulate, notwithstanding we should try our best to attain our goals, we still have to conform to our responsibility to other people, to the moral and ethic of our nation and to the law of our nature. Pursuing our objectives blindly without considering those restrictions would finally result in our failure of our goal and the damage of our society.
写的不少啊
观点很清楚，下面支撑的也不错，要是找一些强一点的例证就好了
加油啊

rokre2ttUID: 2714355

There is no doubt that people all have their goal(s) and they should try their best to achieve their objectives. However, their methods to attain their goal(s) are all controversial.(有那么绝对吗？) Some people interpret that all methods can be used to attain peoples' goal. On the contrary, opposed to their ideas is my viewpoint that people should not use every method to achieve their goals（感觉应该是“随意的采用任何一种方式”更妥当） because they are restricted by their responsibility to other people, by the moral and ethic of our society and the law of our nature.

Admittedly, in order to succeed in achieving our goal, we should try our best to overcome any problems. With the sophistication of our society, our desire increase（increasing） at the same time, thereby forcing us to be more and more painstaking. Therefore, when facing with some dilemmas, only through utilizing many possible approaches that we can obviate our problems. （最后一句话感觉跟前边不太衔接）

However, our attitude and craving to succeed do not mean we can apply every method regardless of other people benefit. Since we are living in an even-handed society, where our profit are equally important to others even our status are higher than others. President and farmer are required to comply with the law, to revere each other and to （be） responsible to（改成for） our society. Hence, aspirant though we are, we cannot jeopardize other peoples' right to achieve their objectives. Such as a merchant, a people with his main purpose to maximize his merit(用profit) during his transaction, should not sell those expired product(s) to the public simply by reason of earning money. History has informed us that those profiteers were predestined to be penalized by the law and also failed to achieve their objectives in the end.

Besides our accountability to other peoples' right, we are still constrained by the moral and ethic of our society. Obviously, moral and ethic are the common concepts accepted by all the people in our society and have be(been) test(attested) for untold time for their applicability. As an individual living in such an environment, only through strictly conform to those regulations that we can eventually achieve our goal and obtain respect from others. The competition in sport is one typical example. Athletes who use incitans(incitants) to increase their sport ability to win the games, or to achieve their (other)objectives, are detrimental to the moral and ethic of society and even harmful to themselves once being detected.

Third, in the process of achieving our goal, following the law of the nature（跟下面的例证有冲突） is also necessary. Since our ability are not infinite, we could not object our goals with any method.（这句话感觉怪怪的） For a(those) governments, especially those of developing countries which strongly keen to develop as fast as possible, should understand their current circumstance and design their plan of development referring to the law of economic and society. The lesson of Soviet Russia provides us an instance. Imbalance development of its heavy and light industries finally brought about itself to its tomb.

To recapitulate, notwithstanding we should try our best to attain our goals, we still have to conform to our responsibility to other people, to the moral and ethic of our nation and to the law of our nature. Pursuing our objectives blindly without considering those restrictions would finally result in our failure of our goal and the damage of our society.
写的不少啊
观点很清楚，下面支撑的也不错，要是找一些强一点的例证就好了
加油啊