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Advertisements make products seem better than they are

When you asked about whether or not advertisements make products seem better than they are, a vast of people would agree that advertisements exaggerate the advantages of products, but other people would claim advertisements just reflect the real quality of products. As far as I am concerned advertisements definitely make products seem better than they are.

Businessman take advantages of advertisements to conduct propaganda for their products. Their purposes are approval the customers as soon as possible. So they display the best products. Sometimes they even exhibit the products that much better than the real products. I can cite a typically instance that the popular Pizza Hut display the pizza that full of materials and bigger than the real pizza you gain in their restaurants. They want to attract people by their good looking pizza and they exaggerate the truth. They majority of companies use the same policy make advertisements. Hence in my opinion advertisements make products seem better than they are.

Advertisements improve appearance of products for the process of manufacture advertisements absolutely is a process of embellishing products. Because lights, scenes, music all of these factors form a better vision of products. I had ever seem a advertisements of a baker, all the bread and cakes appear in a palace, and bright lights made cakes looks like delicious and luxurious. I totally attracted by the amazing scenes of that advertisements. And yet I bought the real bread from that baker, I found they are normal bread and not as well as products in the advertisement. Directors of advertisements try their best to embellish the product in the advertisements. And I just confused by their brilliant scene. Thus you must see a prefect appearance of products in advertisements.

Only the best products would be emerged in advertisements, because they have to exhibit the products in a short period of time. That means the products in advertisements cannot represent the real level of products. So products would seem better in advertisements.

From all the discussion above we may safely draw the conclusion that advertisements made products better than they are.

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advertisements make products seem better than they are
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When you asked about whether or not advertisements make products seem better than they are, a vast of people would agree that advertisements exaggerate the advantages of products, but other people would claim that advertisements just reflect the real quality of products. As far as I am concerned advertisements definitely make products seem better than they are.; N' v: u+ S# O7 Q2 @# S  t8 j


Businessman(Businessmen) take advantages of advertisements to conduct propaganda for their products. They want to gain customers’ approval as soon as possible.这句话不懂是什么意思(是不是这样的？：Their purposes are gain approval from customers as soon as possible.) So they display the best products. Sometimes they even exhibit the products that much better than the real products. I can cite a typically instance that the popular Pizza Hut display the pizza that full of materials and bigger than the real pizza you gain in their(their 指的是PIZZA？) restaurants. They（they 指的是谁？应该是商家吧？你没有详细说明） want to attract people by their good looking pizza and they exaggerate the truth. They majority of companies use the same policy make advertisements. Hence in my opinion advertisements make products seem better than they are.


Advertisements improve appearance of products for the process of manufacture advertisements absolutely is a process of embellishing products. Because lights, scenes, music all of these factors form a better vision of products. I had ever seem（seen）
an advertisements (advertisement)of a baker, all the breads and cakes appear in a palace, and bright lights made cakes(单数) looks like delicious and luxurious. I totally attracted by the amazing scenes of that advertisements. And yet I bought the real bread from that baker, I found they are normal bread（单复数不一致） and not as well as products in the advertisement. Directors of advertisements try their best to embellish the product in the advertisements. And I just confused by their brilliant scene. Thus you must see a prefect appearance of products in advertisements.


Only the best products would be emerged in advertisements, because they have to exhibit the products in a short period of time. That means the products in advertisements cannot represent the real level of products. So products would seem better in advertisements。（个人觉得这段话有些多余，而且让人看了觉得挺乱的,而且断首那个ONLY的句式好像也不是那么用的）





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From all the discussion above we may safely draw the conclusion that advertisements made products better than they are.（结论模板的痕迹太强了，再改改）

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It better to use own knowledge and experience to solve queation, or ask other people for advice

Everybody have diverse questions all the time. Hence solving questions is a significant thing in our life. When you asked about whether it is better to use own knowledge and experience to solve questions or ask other people for advice, a vast of people believe that listening suggestions from other people is better, but others claim that the best way to solve questions is using own knowledge and experience. As far as I am concerned, it is better to solve question by ask other people advice.

A single person own limited experience and knowledge. These experience and knowledge are too narrow to solve the problem. On contrary, the more people you ask the more experience and knowledge you gain. I can cite a typical example that once I traveled to Beijing. I faced a lot of problems about ordering hotels, arranging place to sightseeing. I spent sevral hours surf on internet to collect materials about how to arrange time to visit Summer Palace, Great Wall and Forbidden City. Unfortunately I still could not found a rational plan. Finally I realized I have a friend who had been in Beijing since he was born. Then I asked his opinion about traveling in Beijing. He solved my questions in few minutes. And I had a really wonderful tripe for his helpful suggestion. Another instance is that I used to confuse on reading English articles. It is difficult for me to comprehend the reading passage even I know every word’s meaning in the passage. I frequently stayed at home read article again and again. But it did not work. The situation improved since I became familiar with a teacher. She had abundant experience in reading. She told me what problems I have in reading process. I obey to her advice and became fluent in reading passage. It is obviously that both teacher and that friend has more experience than me in their familiar field, they help me solve the problems I cannot solve by myself. You can understand how beneficial it is if we asking other people advice.

In the other hand, it is tough for people to find the question. That lead people cannot solve problem. In this scenario we would better ask advice to other people. It offers a good instance of I cannot found my faults in writing English article. Especially in some case my article did not have problem in grammar. But it is odd compare with real English article. They just like Chinese English. My question also solve by a foreign friends. He pointed my problem I cannot find. So for me asking question to other people is better.

Solving question by own experience is also a good way, especially about some private problem. You are the only one person grasp all the details of problem. You can deal with that kind thing better. And yet in most situations asking other people is better.

From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw a conclusion that it is better to solve question by asking other people.

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Everybody have(has) diverse questions all the time. Hence solving questions is a significant thing in our life. When you (people are )asked about whether it is better to use own knowledge and experience to solve questions or ask other people for advice, a vast of people believe that listening suggestions from other people is better, but others claim that the best way to solve questions is using own knowledge and experience. As far as I am concerned, it is better to solve question by ask(asking) other people advice.
A single person own limited experience and knowledge. These experience and knowledge are too narrow to solve the problem. On contrary, the more people you ask the more experience and knowledge you gain. I can cite a typical example that once I traveled to Beijing. I faced a lot of problems about ordering hotels, arranging place to sightseeing. I spent several hours on surfing on internet to collect materials about how to arrange time to visit Summer Palace, Great Wall and Forbidden City. Unfortunately I still could not found a rational plan. Finally I realized I have a friend who had been in Beijing since he was born. Then I asked his opinion about traveling in Beijing. He solved my questions in few minutes. And I had a really wonderful tripe(trip) for(for 改成because of) his helpful suggestion. Another instance is that I used to confuse on reading English articles. It is difficult for me to comprehend the reading passage even I know every word’s meaning in the passage. I frequently stayed at home read article again and again. But it did not work. The situation improved(改成was improved) since I became familiar with a teacher. She had abundant experience in reading. She told me what problems I have in reading process. I obey（obey在这里是及物动词 删除to） to her advice and became fluent in reading passage. It is obviously that both teacher and that friend has more experience than me in their familiar field, they help me solve the problems I cannot solve by myself. You can understand how beneficial it is if we asking other people advice.
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the other hand, it is tough for people to find the question. That lead people cannot solve problem. （这前面两句话看不太明白）In this scenario we would better ask advice to other people. It offers a good instance of I cannot found my faults in writing English article.（这句话何解？） Especially in some case my article did not have problem in grammar. But it is odd compare with real English article. They just like Chinese English. My question also (加上was）solved by a foreign friends(a 还是friends). He pointed my problem I cannot find. So for me asking question to other people is better.( A, D, m& E. y9 n7 `7 m
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Solving question by own experience is also a good way, especially about some private problem. You are the only one person grasp all the details of problem. You can deal with that kind thing better. And yet in most situations asking other people is better.
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From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw a conclusion that it is better to solve question by asking other people

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Playing sports teaches people lessons about life.

Playing sports frequently plays an important role in our society. People spend billions money on sports all around world. The numbers of people anticipate in sports game increase sustainedly.  Because playing sports teaches people lessons about life. These lessons are necessary in our life such as competition, team spirit, solve difficulty.

Playing sports teaches people what is competition. In our civilization people have few opportunities to feel direct competition. Students study all the term and have test at final exam. White collars work for company all the days they can only competition when their colleagues rise to a higher position. Most of these competitions in daily life is not obvious, and people cannot learn what is real competition through these experience. On contrary when people play sports they would feel contest obviously due to sports regularly obtain competition in a short period time. People will be stimulated in sports activity. I can cite a typical instance that my little sister used to a shy girl. She did not what is competition at all. She had never compared with her friends, sacrificed her life and did not aspire do something best. Fortunately this situation changed in last year. She joined the track and field team in her school. She did not own any experience before thus she is weakest member in her team. When she had the races with her teammates she was always the slowest people. This is a direct function remind she is a loser.  She gradually realized that she participate in a competition and she have to pay attention to improve her capacity and catch up with other people in the race. My little sister tried her best to exercise, finally became fastest player in track and field team. She told me that playing sports give her a significant lesson about what is competition, through this lesson she know what is competition and how to overcome others win on competitions.

Playing sports teaching people what is team spirit. Many athletes are brilliant in their individual capacity but they cannot achieve themselves in contest especially in team contests. My favorite basketball player Kobe is sophisticated in playing basketball. He even earned 60 point in a contest. Unfortunately at this competition his team still lost the game. This example proves if you do not have team spirit you cannot successes in sports. So if you play sports especially in team games, you have to face gain team spirit. Otherwise, you cannot play game well. You frequently feel obliged to attain the sports spirit, hence playing sports can help you have spirit team. Undoubtedly team spirit is vital skill in modern society life. Consequently, playing sports teaches people important lesson about life.

It is easily suffer some tough in playing sports. Form little pain to fracture, we cannot avoid these kind of difficulty. At same time we can exercise the ability of overcome difficulties even in hard environments. This ability is considerable about life.

From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that playing sports teaches people about life.

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When you asked about whether or not advertisements make products seem better than they are, a vast of people would agree that advertisements exaggerate the advantages of products, but other people would claim advertisements just reflect the real quality of products. As far as I am concerned, advertisements definitely make products seem better than they really are.0 l9 \2 s( K9 Z6 V+ L6 c
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Businessmen take advantages of advertisements to conduct propaganda for their products. Their purposes are approval the customers as soon as possible. (are approval the customers啥意思？）So they display the best products. Sometimes they even exhibit the products that much better than the real products. I can cite a typically（typical） instance that the popular Pizza Hut display the pizza that（一个句子两个that可以换成which） full of materials and bigger than the real pizza you gain in their restaurants. They want to attract people by their good looking pizza and（so） they exaggerate the truth. They（the） majority of companies use the same policy （to）make advertisements. Hence in my opinion advertisements make products seem better than they really are.

Advertisements improve appearance of products for the process of manufacture advertisements absolutely is a process of embellishing products. （啥意思？）Because （of）lights, scenes, （and） music， all of these factors form a better vision of products. I had ever seem（seen）a advertisements of a baker, all the bread and cakes appeared in a palace, and bright lights made cakes looks（make 后动词用原形look） like delicious and luxurious. I totally attracted by the amazing scenes of that advertisements. And yet I bought the real bread from that baker, I found they are normal bread and not as well as products in the advertisement. Directors of advertisements try their best to embellish the product in the advertisements. And I just confused by their brilliant scene. Thus you must see a prefect appearance of products in advertisements.

Only the best products would be emerged in advertisements, because they have to exhibit the products in a short period of time. That means the products in advertisements cannot represent the real level of products. So products would seem better in advertisements.（这点理由不是很充分）

From all the discussion above we may safely draw the conclusion that advertisements made products better than they are.（结尾太草率了点）

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Playing sports teaches people lessons about life.


Playing sports frequently（这个词看上去有些怪 不妨直接用always） plays an important role in our society. People spend billions money on sports all around world. The numbers of people anticipate in sports game increase sustainably.  Because playing sports teaches people lessons about life. These lessons are necessary in our life such as competition, team spirit, solve（solving） difficulty.
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Playing sports teaches people what is competition. In our civilization people have few opportunities to feel direct competition(换成看上去舒服competition directly). Students study all the term and have test at final exam.(这句表达上应该再改一下 不是很TS有很直接的关系) White collars work for company all the days they can only competition（改成they face competition only） when their colleagues (加上struggle to) rise to a higher position. Most of these competitions in daily life is(改成are) not obvious, and people cannot learn what is real competition through these experience. On contrary when people play sports they would feel contest obviously due to sports regularly obtain competition in a short period time. People will be stimulated in sports activity. I can cite a typical instance that my little sister used to a shy girl. She did not （漏了个动词）what is competition at all. She had never compared with her friends, sacrificed her life（可以换一种表达 这么看上去不大明白是什么意思） and did not aspire do something best. Fortunately this situation changed in last year. She joined the track and field team in her school. She did not own any experience before thus she is weakest member in her team. When she had the races with her teammates she was always the slowest people. This is a direct function remind she is a loser. （时态）  She gradually realized that she participate in a competition and she have to pay attention to improve her capacity and catch up with other people in the race. （时态）
My little sister tried her best to exercise, finally became fastest player in track and field team. She told me that playing sports give her a significant lesson about what is competition, through this lesson she know（时态） what is competition and how to overcome others win on competitions.
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Playing sports teaching people what is team spirit. Many athletes are brilliant in their individual capacity but they cannot achieve themselves in contest especially in team contests. My favorite basketball player Kobe is sophisticated in playing basketball. He even earned 60 point in a contest. Unfortunately at this competition his team still lost the game.(Kobe的例子我理解你的表达意思 但是我觉得最还再换一个表达方式去说光靠自己一个人是不够的 还是要靠小组合作才能取得胜利) This example proves if you do not have team spirit you cannot successes（时态） in sports. So if you play sports especially in team games, you have to face gain team spirit（什么意思）. Otherwise, you cannot play game well. You frequently feel obliged to attain the sports spirit, hence playing sports can help you have spirit team. Undoubtedly team spirit is vital skill in modern society life. Consequently, playing sports teaches people important lesson about life.
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It is easily suffer some tough in playing sports. Form little pain to fracture, we cannot avoid these kind of difficulty. At same time we can exercise the ability of overcome（时态）difficulties even in hard environments. This ability is considerable about life.（这段有点草率）

From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that playing sports teaches people about life.（结尾最好再点下三个TS）

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It's better to watch serious movies to get deeper think or watch movies that amuse or entertain you.
In our modern society, watching movies plays a significant role in people’s life. At same time, movies become more and more brilliant and diverse. Some movies have deep meaning and lead audience consider a lot of things. On the contrary, the other sorts of movies is relaxing and interesting, people can be amused or entertained in movies. When asked people whether it is better to watch serious movies to get deeper think or watch movies that amuse or entertain you, a vary of people believe that it is better to deeper think when they watch movies and the other people claim they prefer movies which merely amuse them during the process of watching. As far as I am concerned, I enjoy movies which have function of amusement and entertainment only.

Our society full of competitions, we face many challenges all the time. These challenges force us keep tension in every second. We really need some way to release ourselves. Watching movies is a best way to get relaxed. I can cite a typical instance that my friend has a busy job, and she lack time to cultivate some interest. In her hard life the only way to entertain herself is watching movies. Hence she frequently opt the movies to amuse and entertain. She told me she do not want to deeper think after work, she just need decrease pressure through watching movies. In my opinion movies is a generally entertainment we do not have to watch some complicated movies because we have too much problems in real life need us think deeper. Watching a serious movie lead me deeper think is kind of redundant.

On the other hand serious movies cannot be accepted by majority of people. It offer a good example of I reunite with my family in festivals. We always choose watching a movie after dinner. My family has a large age span. From my seven years old little sister to my seventy years old grandmother, I ought to select a movie be appreciated by all the people in my big family. The funny and relaxing movies must be best options for their easy scenario. No matter my little sister or my grandmother can make fun when they watching that kind of movies. For this reason I prefer watch movies that amuse and entertain myself to watch serious movies to deeper think.

Undoubtedly serious movies have high vale in appreciation and consider. But in common situation we just need some amusements but not deeply think. And not everyone suit to watch serious movies.

From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that it is better to watch movies to entertain and amuse you.

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It's better to watch serious movies to get deeper think or watch movies that amuse or entertain you.

In our modern society, watching movies plays a significant role in people’s life. At same time, movies become more and more brilliant and diverse. Some movies have deep meaning and lead audience consider a lot of things. On the contrary, the other sorts of movies is (sorts和is) relaxing and interesting, people can be amused or entertained in these movies. When asked people(删除people) whether it is better to watch serious movies to get deeper think or watch movies that amuse or entertain you, a vary of people believe that it is better to deeper think when they watch movies and the other people claim they prefer movies which merely amuse them during the process of watching.(我个人觉得这句话有点多余) As far as I am concerned, I enjoy movies which have function of amusement and entertainment only.

Our society full of competitions,（加上and） we face many challenges all the time. These challenges force us （加上to, force sb to do/into doing st）
keep tension in every second. We really need some way to release ourselves. Watching movies is a best way to get relaxed. I can cite a typical instance that my friend has a busy job, and she lack（s） time to cultivate some interest. In her hard life the only way to entertain herself is watching movies. Hence she frequently opt the movies to amuse and entertain. She told me she do(es) not want to （have） deeper think after work, she just need decrease pressure through watching movies. In my opinion movies is (movies 和 is) a generally entertainment we do not have to watch some complicated movies because we have too much problems in real life need us think deeper. Watching a serious movie lead me deeper think is kind of redundant." x( n. q, F1 F2 B$ a

On the other hand serious movies cannot be accepted by majority of people. It offer a good example of I reunite with my family in festivals. We always choose watching a movie after dinner. My family has a large age span. From my seven years old little sister to my seventy years old grandmother, I ought to select a movie be appreciated by all the people in my big family. The funny and relaxing movies must be best options for their easy scenario. No matter my little sister or my grandmother can make fun when they watching that kind of movies. For this reason I prefer（加上to）watch movies that amuse and entertain myself to（than watching ） watch serious movies to deeper think.
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Undoubtedly serious movies have high vale in appreciation and consider. But in common situation we just need some amusements but not deeply think. And not everyone suit to watch serious movies.（这段有点草率 可以不写 但是要写的话 建议再深入一点）

From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that it is better to watch movies to entertain and amuse you.

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Playing sports frequently（usually貌似更习惯点） plays an important role in our society. People spend billions money on sports all around world. The numbers of people anticipate in sports game increase sustainedly.  Because playing sports teaches people lessons about life. These lessons are necessary in（for可能没错，只是我总是觉得in怪怪的） our life such as competition, team spirit, solving（前面都是名词哦） difficulty. 9 o( T' P/ w) f9 a' [8

Playing sports teaches people what is competition. In our civilization people have few opportunities to feel（experience） direct competition. Students study all the term and have test at final exam（这句话感觉怪怪的）. White collars work for company all the days and they can only competition when their colleagues rise to a higher position（这句话没有谓语哦……）. Most of these competitions in daily life is（are） not obvious, and people cannot learn what is real competition through these experiences. On contrary when people play sports they would feel contest obviously due to（这个to是介词，后面可以接名词或名词性短语，但是貌似不能接从句哦~） sports regularly obtain competition in a short period time. People will be stimulated in sports activity. I can cite a typical instance that my little sister used to be a shy girl. She did not know what is competition at all. She had never compared（competed笔误？还是我理解错了？） with her friends, sacrificed her life and did not（去掉） aspired to do something best. Fortunately this situation changed in（去掉） last year. She joined the track and field team in her school. She did not own any experience before thus she is the weakest member in her team. When she had the races with her teammates she was always the slowest（？） people. This is a direct function reminds she is a loser.  She gradually realized that she participated in a competition and she have（had前面都是过去式哦） to pay attention to improve her capacity and to catch up with other people in the race. My little sister tried her best to exercise, finally became the fastest player in track and field team. She told me that playing sports gave her a significant lesson about what is competition, and through this lesson she know what is competition and how to overcome others win on competitions.  @" m  _! ^% J8 v% Z
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Playing sports teaching（teachs） people what is team spirit. Many athletes are brilliant in their individual capacity but they cannot achieve themselves（？） in contest especially in team contests. My favorite basketball player Kobe is sophisticated in playing basketball. He even earned 60 points in a contest. Unfortunately at this（this在这里指代哪个？） competition his team still lost the game. This example proves（shows，prove感觉是要推理出来的） if you do not have team spirit you cannot successes in sports（这句话我觉得这样写好点：no one can achieve success without team spirit.）. So if you play sports especially in team games, you have to face gain(face和gain两个动词不可以放在一起哦，一个句子不可以有两个谓语哦~) team spirit. Otherwise, you cannot play game well. You（？前面没有第二人称哦~） frequently feel obliged to attain the sports spirit, hence playing sports can help you have（improve是不是会比have好点？） spirit team. Undoubtedly team spirit is a vital skill in modern society life. Consequently, playing sports teaches people important lesson about life.

It is easily suffer some tough in playing sports. Form little pain to fracture, we cannot avoid these kind of difficulty. At the same time we can exercise the ability of overcome（介词后面用动名词哦~） difficulties even in hard environments. This ability is considerable about life.

From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that playing sports teaches people about life.

结构挺好的，例子可以更vivid一点，语言还要继续锤炼哦~一起加油哦~~~~

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Do you agree or disagree that scientists should be responsible for the negative impacts of their discoveries?

In our modern society the numbers of discoveries increase every year. Some of discoveries are beneficial for human being, other discoveries bring a lot negative efforts. When asked about whether scientists should be responsible for the negative impacts of their discoveries, a vast of people claim that they due to the problems thus they must be responsible to their discoveries, but other people believe they do not have to response their discoveries. As far as I am concerned scientists should not be responsible for the negative impacts of their discoveries.

Scientists do not have obligations for the negative discoveries because their aim before the discoveries hurt people is not negative. On the contrary they just want to bring benefits to people. Unfortunately their discoveries always be distorted later. That means scientists had good wish at first but other people utilized their discoveries in bad way and made negative efforts. I can cite a typical instance that Albert Einstein had never realized that his discovery would lead to millions of Japanese died of atom bomb. His original intention is do research on his field and discovery a new way to create energy. The atom bomb brought disaster to people, it is partly responsible for Einstein’s discovery, but how can we blame to Einstein. The other example is scientist invented plastic for finding a new material which more cheap and durable. Now body can predict plastic make huge negative impacts on environment. Plastic listed on the worst discoveries in last centenary, but I do not consider we ought to impute this responsibility to the scientist who discoveried plastic material at first. None of scientists intend to discover something damage world, they cannot control people utilize their discoveries in negative way . Thus I disagree the view that scientists should be responsible to the negative impacts of their discoveries.

Form what has been discussed above, I could safely draw the conclusion that people do not have reason blame scientists whose discovery has negative impacts.

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4.5Students at university or in college should choose the most difficult classes even if they cannot get top grades (marks) in them.

More and more classes occur in university and college in these years. Some classes are easy can students can get good grades in these classes. Other classes are difficult thus students cannot obtain top marks. When asked about that whether students should choose the most difficult classes even if they cannot get top grads in them, a vast of people argue that it is a good way to exercise, but others think it is a bad idea. As far as I am concerned we choose classes for the reason that we have interests in classes but not for they are difficult or easily to get good grades.

We spend majority of time in their life on their time. If we have a job we have favors we would be happy for large of time in our life. And the classes we opted in university and college determine what kind of job we have in future. Hence we would better choose the classes which we interested in. No matter the classes are tough or simple, we get good grades or not in them, we consider whether or not we have fun for them is enough. I can cite a typical example that my friend really interested in physics. All the classes she selected in her university were tough and complicated. But she had never complained her classes are difficult. On contrary she enjoyed every class she chose. She frequently got C or D in her classes for they are really difficult. She did various strenuous researches with her professor. And her professor appreciated her emphasis and interests and he did not mind her low grades at all . Finally she became a assistant professor in her university specialize in the her field that seems demanding for other people. Although she choose difficult classes and did not got any good grades, she achieved herself for she did what she prefer all the time. Another instance is that I choose classes as simple as possible for I just aspired high GPA. I deserved high marks in majority of classes. And yet I felt disappointing gradually, because I ignored whether or not I like my classes. I had changed a lot of jobs since I graduated from my university for I really got bored about my job which related to my classes I choose in university. I had to decide to pursuit the master degree which I really interested in on final. These two different experience remind me we should choose classes we interested in but not most difficult

From all the discussion above I could draw a conclusion that we should not choose difficult even we could not get good grade, and we ought to choose the classes we really interested in.

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加油！:)