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mollymollymollyUID: 2839509

In contemporary world ,the issue of honest has long been in the heated discussion. The perspectives towards it varies from
person to person. some people want to gain favour of others ,they choose to cheat by nice words, while others like to be sincere, so they
always tell other their true feelings. as far as I am concerned, the assertion that is , one should do their best to be honest to others may overlook some premises ,but the central spirit of it is still valid. Ample practical empirics and researches are given
to support my point of view.
The first argument can be presented to support my conclusion is that those who always cater for others fail to gain respect of others .common sense tell us people always tend to value people who are open-minded to others. Recently , an
authorized
conducted a survey, they randomly chose their readers and asked those readers to fill a questionnaire. In the survey ,the people
are asked to tell their feeling about those who like to gain favor of other by flattening words by choices between
like no sense or dislike, the majority about 80% chose “dislike”. This result gave a solid example to support my point that straight-forward words is much more valued by others that artificial speaking.
Another overwhelming reason can be presented to support my view is that telling truth to others is the best way to help others. The reason is simple. Only presented by others’ authentic feelings can those who faced with dilemma learn deeply about the fact. If
some one are always told the nice word, they may hardly learn the flaws behind the appearance. A historical event can be lent to establish an example. In tang dynasty, the president lishiming strengthen his authority by adopting advice pro vided by his subordinates wei zhen
who
frequently
presented his admonition in straight forward way.
While his grandson failed to dominant the dynasity
without such valuable but unpleasant advice. Clearly another point can be made that even those words maybe to some extant

unpleasant, but they are actually useful to others
Admittedly,
sincere words
intended to advice others or present true feelings sometimes results in reverse consequence. This is because
not everyone
is willing to accept those honest but well-listening words. Take me for example, once I was upset about my exam scores, my deskmate pointed out my shortcomings in study without considering my bad-mood.
I felt more hopeless. In this case ,if my destmate transform his direct way to a more sweet style ,I think I will be more pleasant to adopt to his suggestion. This case told me sometimes if we are making recommendation or unpleasant assessment, we should think for a few seconds that
if we can make the propose more acceptable. by this way, our intended goal will be better achieved.
All in all, due to that reasons mentioned above, some
correlates with each other to generate a more comprehensive understanding, I am comfortable to say that one should try their best to tell their true feelings .

                                    

ilnlhUID: 2641884

不好意思，能否先格式化一下，这个回车太多了吧。。。  = =|

mollymollymollyUID: 2839509

In contemporary world ,the issue of honest has long been in the heated discussion. The perspectives towards it varies from  person to person. some people want to gain favour of others ,they choose to cheat by nice words, while others like to be sincere, so they  always tell other their true feelings. as far as I am concerned, the assertion that is , one should do their best to be honest to others may overlook some premises ,but the central spirit of it is still valid. Ample practical empirics and researches are given  to support my point of view.
To start up, those people  always say nice words often fail to gain respect of others .common sense tell us people always tend to value people who are open-minded to others. People are more likely to make friends without those who always telling the truth ,even the true words may sometimes may be offensive or unpleasant to listen.  But to those people who always tell soft words, people may give a smile but not  respect.   In a company,the managers value more  their straight- forward employees instead of staff that always cater the high class while make no constructive advice.in our dairly life,nice words may bring a hounmoris climate temporary,but make one untrustworthy .
Another overwhelming reason can be presented to support my view is that sometimes saying something straight forward is more helpful that pleasant words telling truth to others is the best way to help others. The reason is simple. Only presented by others’ authentic feelings can those who faced with dilemma learn deeply about the fact.  If  some one are always told the nice word, they may hardly learn the flaws behind the appearance. A historical event can be lent to establish an example. In tang dynasty, the president lishiming strengthen his authority by adopting advice provided by his subordinates wei zhen .weizhen made his suggestion a way that is hard to  be accpeted  .conversly, li shiming’s grandson failed to dominant the dynasity  because people surround him always told him his mertis. Clearly another point can be made that even those words maybe to some extant   unpleasant, but they are actually meaningful to others
Admittedly,  sincere words  intended to advice others or present true feelings sometimes results in reverse consequence. This is because   not everyone  is willing to accept those honest but well-listening words at anytime. Take me for example, once I was upset about my exam scores, my deskmate pointed out my shortcomings in study without considering my bad-mood.  I felt more hopeless. In this case ,if my destmate transform his direct way to a more sweet style ,I think I will be more pleasant to adopt to his suggestion. This case told me sometimes if we are making recommendation or unpleasant assessment, we should think for a few seconds that  if we can make the propose more acceptable by others. by this way, our intended goal will be better achieved.
All in all, though  nice words  could  avoid qurrals or unhappiness, but it could not make others value you also could not help others. I propose we should tell truth  instead of nice words to others ,further we could choose a more smooth way to express us.

mollymollymollyUID: 2839509

2# ilnlh 好了

ilnlhUID: 2641884

思路、句子都比较清楚，有ISSUE的影子，感觉完全当GRE的ISSUE来写了吧，这字数 半小时真的写得完吗？
不过或许你确实有这个实力，希望能稍微注意下细节（主要是空格、大小写），因为这个丢分就不划算了，当然我也并不确定评分时这些是否会考虑

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mollymollymollyUID: 2839509

5# ilnlh 我挑不出你写的毛病  就是一点 细节不够多 不够翔实   大概 ETS 很看重 这个  我的论点 会不会偏题啊