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发表于 2010-9-5 23:02:36 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
以后,我要开始写作文了,加嘞个油
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发表于 2010-9-5 23:37:56 |只看该作者
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发表于 2010-9-7 20:54:37 |只看该作者
大家都努力学习啊:lol

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发表于 2010-9-7 23:24:19 |只看该作者
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Whether parents should help determined the future of their children or to allow their child making own choice is a complex and controversial issue which merits a closer look. While some parents think that child is too little to live in the modern society,thus they need parents to determined their future. Other parents would embrace such a chance to let their child more independent. From my point of view, it is very important for children to make their own choice on their own future.
  The main reason for my propensity for children should make choice is that children have the right to choice what their like or what they want to do. Parents should not make decisions on behalf of them. They allowing him/her to gain confidence and learn smaller errors so that he/she will be able to make mature decisions of his own in the future. Another reason why i agree with the above statement is that I believe that mistake can make a boy to a man.
  The point I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage about children has less experance about the society. ,sometimes it is helpful to allow him or her to face the difficult and lose. May be in this way, they can clearly know what they should do or what they can do. This will give them a lot of lessons,which is good for their way of future.
  All in all, parents should not make decisions even   determined the future for their children. Nevertheless, they can be a role who take a part on decision-making process of their offspring. This process will not only let your children more cofident , bus also will give him/her a bright future.

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发表于 2010-9-8 01:42:20 |只看该作者
为了赶时间,写的有点仓促:dizzy:
再大的困难算个屁,我要决战美利坚!

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发表于 2010-9-8 22:03:35 |只看该作者
修改好啦。。。加油咯

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发表于 2010-9-9 22:25:36 |只看该作者
2009.9.19 NA  Government should more support art museum and music performance than recreational facilities, such as swimming pool or play ground.

Whether government should more support art museum and music performance than recreational facilities is a complex and controversial issue which merits a closer look. While some people believe that art and music can make us more genteel and cultivated. Others would embrace such a chance to make themselves more healthy by useing the recreational facilities, for the healthier the better. From my point of view, healthy is absolutely indispensable so that we need recreational facilities as well as the art and the music.
  The main reason for my propensity for recreational facilities is also important is that only a healthy man can do whatever they like, includig the music and art. Without the recreational facilities, however, we may be illness, then we can enjoy any of them. For instance, my little brother is very heavy who like listening music and playing piano. When he stay at home,he just exercise the piano and eating. Ultimately, he is too fat to breath. The most unfortunate thing is that he lost a chance to perform in the school musical soiree because he is in the hospital! As you can see from my brother that   health is indispensable to everyone.
  Another reason i support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage because art museum and music performance is not suit for every who is poor. This activities need a lot of money,at least not everyone can afford it. The recreational facilities, however, can be used for everyone and make us healthy. For example, my classmate John is really poor who cannot afford a performance of music or art. However, he like play basketball and you can see him at playground every afternoon. He is very happy when he shoot the ball and get the score. Most of us, you know, is the middle class who consider the music and art is luxurious. Therefore, why not to make mass of people happy?
  In brief, mass of people, by using the recreational facilities to become healthy and happy. Although the art museum and music performance are also important, the government still should support more recreational facilities, at least make both of them coordinative. And health is the most important in the world, without it we can not do any thing. Therefore, I would definitely choose to government should support the recreational facilities.
再大的困难算个屁,我要决战美利坚!

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