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Admittedly, movies as well as televisions are part of our lives. The producers always make movies including the part that good people are being rewarded and bad people are being punished for the sake of attracting audience's attention. For my perspective, I disagree with this standpoint according to the following reasons.
Invariably has the same pattern that good are being rewarded and bad people are being punished will exactly leads to audience's disgust. For example, I always get bored when I watch movies with the same story pattern. An abundance of movies or televisions always show us similarities especially the heroes save the world deserving everybody’s applause and bad people go to the prison. We have watch enough this kind episodes. Actually, spectators more likely to choose to enjoy movies or televisions with diversities even includes the episodes that bad people beat good people. Think about Shakespeare, among his masterpieces can be found both the stories with happy ending and tragic endings which enhances more values.
Furthermore, Differs from the reality in the present world, this kind of movies or television will mislead audiences. People are inclined to think that every good man should be rewarded and bad man deserves punishment both in the movie and in the real world. Nevertheless, the real society is not what we think it to be. People get strayed when they find that what their experience fail to coincide with what they watch. For instance, my little sister fell crestfallen when her role model ,a police officer, died in an accident. It is unacceptable that such a distinguished man obtained his death without rewards.
To sum up, only watching the movies or televisions have the pattern illustrated in the topic provides little benefit. It not only constricts us in a certain sort of pattern but also misleads us.

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9.18日作业
Michael Jordan once said that it was basketball that taught him how to be a man. Undoubtedly, we do learn ample lessons during our lives while playing sports. We do sport for plentiful reasons including getting exercises, competing with each other and so on. But actually we learn something unconsciously even we don not notice when we do sports. I have the following reasons to substantiate my standpoint.
Firstly, sports teach us to be honest. As I mention above, someone do sports just for the sake of competing with others, thus they can enjoy the moment beating others. However, there is someone who performs dishonestly in order to win. When this happens, sports will teach them that consistently to be honest do benefits to them, or else they will lose their reputation. Take the former track and field athlete Marion Jones as a typical example. Jones used to be the role model of American people, but later criticized by all people just because she cheated in the match by using performance enhancing drugs.
Secondly, doing sports is an excellent thoroughfare to improve relationship. We always talk about rank the friendship the first place while competing. Actually, competing in a sports math has profound connotations. First prize is not the single optimal destination in participants’ minds, sports have impressed them that friendship is more significant. For instance, in one Marathon match, in order to help an injured rival the famous athlete Russell gave up his opportunity to win the medal by walking with him together.
Another thing sports teach us is teamwork. Typical examples are football and basketball. Something can be finished by a single person but a tremendously large number of things cannot. Michael Jordon may not successfully pursue the MVPs without the assistance of his teammates.
To sum up, sports do teach us lessons about lives in many aspects, including credulity, friendship and teamwork which informed us never try to ignore the lessons we learn from sports.

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不好意思有点晚了，前两天出去玩了。一点意见，供参考。

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感谢指点 5# teenteen

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9.25
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Advertising is the most important cause of unhealthy eating habits.

Currently, a tremendously large of people develop unhealthy eating habits which cause tragic devastation to their bodies. As a matter of fact, people are inclined to attribute this phenomenon to advertising. Nevertheless, from my perspective, I don not agree we should rank ads as the most important cause. Following reasons will substantiate my standpoint.

To begin with, ads can be divided into healthy ones and unhealthy ones.  Although there are some advertisements that really mislead us to eat in an unhealthy way. For example, various ice-cream ads never stop to encourage you to eat more their products, hamburgers ads never hesitate to stimulate you to buy more their junk food. However, we can not neglect meanwhile that a large number of public ads also existed in this world help us develop a precise eating habits. I can always watch the advertisements such as how to keep fit and how to get more nutrition.

Another point I want to state is that a healthy eating habit is developed by ourselves, attribute these drawbacks to advertising is useless. One of the traits human being need to have is self-discipline. No matter how influential the ads are, we need to be sure that it is our own responsibilities to develop  healthy eating habits.

Finally, I would like to say that there are something more than ads can affect a people's un healthy eating habits- parents. Take my friend as a typical example, he as well as his parents are fairly fat. I easily find out the reason why he is so fat is that he invariably follows his parents' instruction while his parents actually develop bad eating habits.

To sum up, it is unwise to say that advertising is the most important cause of unhealthy eating habits, we need to account on other factors as I stated above.