jiroushiren 9月25日的 作文作业

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jiroushiren 9月25日的 作文作业

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Whether the advertisement of fast food is the main cause of unhealthy eating habits.doc (15.5 KB, 下载次数: 1)

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Currently, adiposis was became one of the most commonplace diseases affecting modern people’s life. Unhealthy eating habits were the main course of adiposis. And a huge advertising around us everyday, everywhere. It affects(尽量避免重复使用) people’s eating habits. So I agree with the point that advertising is the most important cause of unhealthy eating habits.
Firstly, with the developing of information technology, so many food advertisings around us in newspaper, television, internet, radio, magazines and so on. Varieties of ads come into our eyes, from high quality rice to low calorie
chocolate . And food as an important element of our lives. When we saw the ads, our abilities of judgement can not resist the attractiveness of fine food. So we would purchase the food in the advertising （意思有问题）and then got more calorie .
Secondly, the advertising of food would express a psychological hint to the audiences. Majority of people have a common attitude that have a taste with some new food at launch. It might have something differences with the traditional food. In one hand the advertising food satisfy people’s curiousity, and in the other the food bring more calorie to us and influence our eating habits.
What is more, some other factors such as too much hard works we have to face, our work time table is conflict with our lunch time . Then we can not eat lunch at time. So it will influence our eating habits. The fast food is the best choice for the working people. And then advertising would contribute to what kind of fast food will we to eat.

In a word, advertising as the most powerful tool influence modern people’s diet choice. So I agree it was the most important cause of unhealthy eating habits

总体看上去这篇文章不错，有辩证，理由比较合理，但是建议举些具体的例子
改的有点迟了，见谅