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发表于 2010-11-17 19:42:07 |显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 jefferysy 于 2010-11-18 11:33 编辑

43 To be an effective leader, a public offical must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards
第一段:基本赞成整个观点,开头就表示肯定,
二:公仆在很大程度上代表一个地区的形象,因此,他们要有良好道德修养

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比如州长,市长都得代表整个州或县有外面交流


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:一些特大的活动也得他们出面,很有可能被媒体记录

三:公仆就是服务于群众的,起着榜样的作用,

1:
公仆是大家通过投票选得,能成为公仆就有自己的长处,能得到我们的信任


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:他的行为是受大家监督的,言行对他们很重要


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:群众是基础,道德素质好有利于他们工作。

:如果公仆道德素质好,能影响周边地区或国家的精神风貌

比如华盛顿总统的主动让贤,



      As we talk about ethical and moral standards, most of us would hope everyone around you can present the positive facet in their heart. that because moral correctness can bring about a wholesome spirit appearence surround one’s life. When we talk about this kind of thing in officers, there is no doubt we don not think by the above way to judge them. Moral is really essential to their work and occurrence.

A public officer represent the region governed in a deep degree, so morality is vital for them. To be officers is not a relax thing, document, occurrence, visiting and meeting are all their daily work. Many people live with each other, so staffs happened and every time and everywhere, and the future and promising development are also their dealings. We can not totally depend on ourself. no matter from politic to economy, communicating with outside is indispensible. meeting or visiting become the come thing to them. If which contain important affairs, these would appeal the medium and show on the TV, at this time, officers are not just themselves, they represent their public or areas, obviously, we can not make any mistaken in our morals. If so like Watergate ScandalNixon have affairs with his assistant, bring a huge effect in American politics, Nixon himself also lose a lot in this and have to leave his president position even though he really make a great contribution to country.

To be a officer is to contribute themselves to public, what they do and what do act can be example to us. When the electing period, we through the voting way to choose the best to be the officers, why we choose him and give up others, for he has positive way that we appreciate, we believe he can make succeed in something, we hold they definitely have the ability to let us living in a better circumference. See a person, first we should see his or her personality, we can not see deeply on everyone, so when you feel some one appeal you before a long contacting, his exterior act will not have the flaw, moral people have advantage at this time. We can not stay in the exterior, intrinsic spirit is more important. But the intrinsic is based on the daily good morals. While officers act is also supervise by public, no one want lose face in public, and if you really do something for us , we would grateful to obey the rules that officers say and may help their work.


Moral correctness can purify a person spirit, which can affect many people. At the beginning of American independence, the first president
George Washington at the ending of his position career. Most people hope he can still be the president, but he give up, he don not want invoke a negative effect at this thing. What a really great president, devoting his most time to this country and quietly leave. Because of this, so there is a legal about this, and his legend also be respected and affect the next generation all the time. Assuming that all of us can obtain this high moral spirit so our daily life will be more peaceful .


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发表于 2010-11-17 21:44:22 |显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 意韵甜心 于 2010-11-17 21:47 编辑

Nixon have affairs with his assistant, bring a huge effect in American politics,
这个应该是克林顿(Clinton)吧~毕竟他的性丑闻闹得很大,尼克松应该是水门事件比较突出。
呵呵~个人观点,仅供参考。

附上克林顿任期内关于Affair的丑闻
葆拉·琼斯事件:前饭店女雇员葆拉·琼斯指控克林顿在担任州长的时候把她叫到僻室并对她暴露下体。琼斯指控所引发的调查导致了后来的莫尼卡莱温斯基事件。
  
·珍尼佛·弗劳尔斯事件:珍尼佛公布和克林顿有长达十一年的恋情;克林顿则坚称他们两人「没有十一年的恋情」。数年后,克林顿承认他和佛劳尔斯有十年(而非十一年)的恋情。此事为克林顿油嘴滑舌的代表作之一。  
·凯萨林·威莉事件:竞选志工凯萨林·威莉指控克林顿对她性骚扰。

·莱文斯基事件:  
   由于事件的煽情本质,莱温斯基事件或许将成为克林顿政府的历史上最不光彩、然而却最有生命力的一页。   
    1996年大选结束后,克林顿的白宫处于选后的放松状态,碰巧当时共和党的国会为了预算问题而与白宫抗争,冻结了联邦开支,许多政府雇员都被指示暂时不要来上班,造成了包括白宫在内的许多政府机关空空荡荡的没有几个人。就是在这样的一个大环境下,克林顿和白宫实习生莫尼卡·莱温斯基邂逅、调情、并发展为情人关系。   
    克林顿和莱温斯基的亲密关系维持了五个月。虽然外界并不知情,但是在总统周遭的执勤人员之间却是公开的秘密。97年四月,莱温斯基的上司担心她与总统过从太密,于是把她调职到国防部。   莱温斯基在国防部认识了琳达·崔普,两人成为闺中密友。莱温斯基开始向崔普透露与总统交往的内容。她不知道,关于这个滔天秘密的电话谈话被崔普秘密录音。
  1998年一月,葆拉·琼斯性骚扰案的原告律师开始搜集总统拈花惹草的证据,试图藉以证明总统的好色性格。莱温斯基呈交了书面证词宣称自己没有和总统往来,又试图说服崔普帮她圆谎,但是崔普不愿冒伪证罪的危险,于是将她的录音带拿给了白水案特别检察官肯尼斯·史达。于是,史达介入了这宗桃色事件的调查。     克林顿一开始否认根莱温斯基有染。在公开的场合以及宣誓作证的情况下他都斩钉截铁的宣称自己和莱温斯基没有性关系。克林顿所赖以理直气壮的撒谎的逻辑是,由于「自己只是接受服务的一方,因此不算有性关系」。
  但是录音带以及莱温斯基的详细日记迫使她把事实和盘托出,而莱温斯基所提供的证据又证明总统说了谎。最关键的证据是一件沾有总统精液的蓝色洋装,莱温斯基原想把它留作纪念,没想到却留下了总统的DNA证据。当化验结果出炉,总统不得不对全国发表讲话,向人民道歉,承认自己和莱温斯基有不正当的交往。   共和党人抓住了克林顿的小辫子,把克林顿扣上刑事伪证罪的大帽子,对他提出了弹劾。很明显,共和党人由于对克林顿的憎恶而采取了偏激的立场,把小事化大;他们的行为没有被选民认同;1998年期中,选举原应有所崭获的共和党遭受小败。但是克林顿也承认是咎由自取,按照他自己的说法,是他「给了政敌们一把刀子,而他们把刀子刺进了他的心脏」。
  克林顿成为美国历史上第三位被弹劾的总统(前两位分别是安德鲁·约翰逊和理查德·尼克松)。按照美国宪法规定,对总统的控罪在参议院进行审判,最高法院首席大法官威廉·伦奎斯特担任法官,全部参议员作为陪审团,众议院则派出十五名众议员担任检察官。必须有三分之二参议员投赞成票,控罪才能成立。结果是,投赞成票的参议员甚至没有过半数;总统的控罪不成立。整个事件才终于落幕。 

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发表于 2010-11-17 23:03:21 |显示全部楼层
不好意思 事情太多了 弄混了 谢谢提醒

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发表于 2010-11-19 23:57:53 |显示全部楼层
As we talk about ethical and moral standards, most of us would hope everyone around you can present the positive facet in their heart,that because moral correctness can bring about 删去a wholesome spirit appearance surround one’s life. When we talk about this kind of thing in officers, there is no doubt we do not think by the above way to judge them. Moral is really essential to their work and occurrence.

A public officer represent the region governed in a deep degree, so morality is vital for them. To be officers is not a relax thing, document, occurrence(感觉这两个词有问题,似乎不能当作工作来讲), visiting and meeting are all their daily work. Many people live with each other, so staffs happened and every time and everywhere, and the future and promising development are also their dealings. We can not totally depend on ourself. no matter from politic to economy, communicating with outside is indispensible. meeting or visiting become the come thing to them. If which contain important affairs, these would appeal the medium and show on the TV, at this time, officers are not just themselves, they represent their public or areas, obviously, we can not make any mistaken in our morals. If so like Watergate Scandal,Nixon have affairs with his assistant, bring a huge effect in American politics, Nixon himself also lose a lot in this and have to leave his president position even though he really make a great contribution to country.

To be a officer is to contribute themselves to public, what they do and what do act can be example to us. When the electing period, we through the voting way to choose the best to be the officers, why we choose him and give up others, for he has positive way that we appreciate, we believe he can make succeed in something, we hold they definitely have the ability to let us living in a better circumference. See a person, first we should see his or her personality, we can not see deeply on everyone, so when you feel some one appeal you before a long contacting, his exterior act will not have the flaw, moral people have advantage at this time. We can not stay in the exterior, intrinsic spirit is more important. But the intrinsic is based on the daily good morals. While officers act is also supervise by public, no one want lose face in public, and if you really do something for us , we would grateful to obey the rules that officers say and may help their work.

Moral correctness can purify a person spirit, which can affect many people. At the beginning of American independence, the first president George Washington at the ending of his position career. Most people hope he can still be the president, but he give up, he don not want invoke a negative effect at this thing. What a really great president, devoting his most time to this country and quietly leave. Because of this, so there is a legal about this, and his legend also be respected and affect the next generation all the time. Assuming that all of us can obtain this high moral spirit so our daily life will be more peaceful .

本篇行文没有太大问题,但是感觉LZ偏题了。
LZ一直在强调公仆需要有道德,但是本文需要论证的是卓越高效的公仆是不应该保持最高的道德标准。与LZ所言有一定差距。所以希望LZ能在立意方面再多考虑考虑。
其次,同意意蕴甜心的观点,sex scandal著名的是 Bill Clinton 非Nixon

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