issue83

guesser198414UID: 2106027

第一次限时写。字数少而且论点不鲜明
    Wilderness areas are precious treasure of a state. As important parts of environment, they should exist together with human society harmoniously.  Although most of them are remote from our cities and ordinary lives, governments should take measure to preserve them.
    These wilderness areas are great biological systems consisted of millions of plants, and animals. Since they are remote to our society, human beings haven't destroyed the wild biological system, many of the species are very rare and can't be found in anywhere else. They have very great biological value for researches. Valuable researches can be carried out in these wilderness areas in order to get the habits of some rare animals, and precious samples of plants will be found here. If they are not preserved by governments, the disturbance of human beings will completely destroy such a precious system.
    Although most of the wilderness areas are remote from our society, they still need preserve as soon as possible. For some people, the profits are more important than anything else. Since the wilderness areas are full of rare animals and plants, there will certainly have some people who are willing to earn a lot of money from these wilderness areas, not to mention the distance. Although these people are only a tiny portion, they are extremely harmful to the areas. Because these people only care how much they can earn, they don't care about the biological environments and how harmful their destroys will be, these publicly owned wilderness areas will be completely destroyed without governments' protection.
    The effects of human beings are great to the whole world than ever before because of the rapid increase of human beings and the industrialization. No matter how promote these wilderness areas are away from us, if only they are on the earth, they can not get rid of the effects of our society. One of the most significant effects work through the environments we share with these wilderness areas, even if these effects are indirect, they can be fatal to these areas. The great changes of environments have already greatly influenced the biological systems in wilderness areas, thousands of species have been extinct or are going to die out in a short term. Governments should be aware of these indirect fatal influence we press upon the wilderness areas, and take measures to preserve these areas to assure the harmoniously coexistence between us and wild species.
    As mentioned above, since wilderness areas have precious value and they are as important parts as our society is in the earth, human beings should coexist harmoniously with the wilderness areas and the species living in them. However, since we are putting direct and indirect influence towards the wilderness areas and their biological systems, governments should take measures to preserve them to diminish human being's fatal influence.

guesser198414UID: 2106027

欢迎大家踊跃来拍
这篇的思路不是很顺
还希望多给些建议，开拓以下思路