issue147 熊熊小组作业

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Are tradition and modernization incompatible, just as the speaker claims? While, to some extent, I admit that tradition and modernization are really different in several aspects, but these differences can not be the reason for their exclusive 词性. However in my opinion, tradition and modernization are supplemented to each other.

To begin with, I will say 这个表达不好吧that the two parts really have something in 去掉different, which can     restrain their development. As every one known knows tradition has a great relationship with the history, the old style of life, while the modernization is relevant with the new idea, 连词the contemporary society. One is new and the other is old, these two parts are really different. When a new idea comes into being, those people who are extremely interested in the tradition will reject the new thoughts, because in their minds, tradition is the best, nothing can be compared with it let alone replacing it with other notions, then the new thoughts might be rejected. Just as Bruno who presented the new idea about the celestial bodies which was different from the old pattern, at last he cost his life for the new theory. 这个例子再说2句吧....

Even though the tradition and modernization are different from each other, they are the two significant parts in our daily life, without each of them, our life will be confused.

In my opinion, tradition has relationship with our spirit, while, the modernization is something relevant with material. 和我的观点差不多...有共同语言拉...HOHOAs every body known, our life is composed of those two important parts, every part is vital for us. In the first place, as a common nature in the society, we must have the basic need for material, 连接词?what we eat, what we drink, what we wear and so on, all these are the outcome of material. With the development of the society, the need for material is increasing day after day, people want to have a more comfortable life, they want to eat, drink,wear in high quality, the high quality is something relation with the modernization. , 太罗嗦了吧Besides that, modern people are searching for a new life which is convenient in every aspect, then the automation and high technology become our friends. No matter the cell phone, the computer, etc., all these are important to us. Secondly, without the material we can not live, but without the spirit we can not live happily either. 对比用的不错Every one has his or her own belief,连词!!!!!最后一次说了.. this belief is relevant with the tradition, because it was passed down from one generation to another, now it stand in front of us. When it comes to the belief, I must refer to the festival, which has strong relationship with the tradition. Such as the Christmas, the Thanksgiving Day, etc. all these festivals originate from the old tradition. In our modern life, every nation has its own method to celebrate those old festivals, just a way to memorize our forefather. The old thoughts are prevalent in our modern life.（感觉自己说的很潜，怎么就深入不下去呢！？）这一段太罗嗦,而且你自己也看出来了,太superficial了,不如举上几个例子,不过最好是有说服力强的,更能说明问题本质的论证.

To sum up, every common nature in the world has the relationship with the material and spirit-modernization and tradition, both two parts are important to us, if they can supplement to each other, our life will become more and more pleasant.
这里的2者的结合最好放到主体部分加以说明为好,虽然这么写也可以，不过需要在主体部分有强烈的暗示才可以.


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Tradition and modernization are incompatible. One must choose between them.
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提纲：
1提出观点，二者互补；
2承认二者存在不同；
3二者是生活的两个方面，缺一不可；
4展开论述，tradition是精神方面modernization是物质方面；
5总结，二者相互结合使生活更美好；

Are tradition and modernization incompatible, just as the speaker claims? While,这个连词用得不对 to some extent, I admit that tradition and modernization are really different in several aspects, but these differences can not be the reason for their exclusive. However in my opinion, tradition and modernization are supplemented to each other. 这个结论感觉本来两方面,这么说就成了一方面了

To begin with, I will say that the two parts really have something in different, which can restrain their development. As everyone known tradition has a great感觉这是汉语说法,close好一些 relationship with the history, the old style of life, while the modernization is relevant with the new idea, the contemporary society. One is new and the other is old, these two parts are really different.说得没有依据,太极端化了 When a new idea comes into being, those people who are extremely太绝对 interested ???in the tradition will reject the new thoughts, because in their minds, tradition is the best, nothing can be compared with it let alone replacing it with other notions, then the new thoughts might be rejected. Just as Bruno who presented the new idea about the celestial bodies which was different from the old pattern, at last he cost his life for the new theory.这段写的不是很好,很多观点说的太绝对化了,而且例子举得也不是很合适.其实在从很多方面,无论历史,宗教,科学这些方面,新的观点的出现无不伴随着与旧思维的碰撞.历史上美国独立,法国大革命都可以从现代与传统的角度去理解.科学上,伽利略,哥白尼,布鲁诺的观点都受到了教会的压迫.宗教上象Jeus的例子,还有很多宗教运动,比如英国新教也都是现代与传统的冲突.

Even though the tradition and modernization are different from each other, they are the two significant parts in our daily life, without each of them, our life will be confused.

In my opinion, tradition has relationship with our spirit, while, the modernization is something relevant with material.绝对化 As every body known, our life is composed of those two important parts, every part is vital for us. In the first place, as a common nature in the society, we must have the basic need for material, what we eat, what we drink, what we wear and so on, all these are the outcome of material. With the development of the society, the need for material is increasing day after day, people want to have a more comfortable life, they want to eat, drink, wear in high quality, the high quality is something relation with the modernization. Besides that, modern people are searching for a new life which is convenient in every aspect, then the automation and high technology become our friends. No matter the cell phone, the computer, etc., all these are important to us. Secondly, without the material we can not live, but without the spirit we can not live happily either. Every one has his or her own belief, this belief is relevant with the tradition, because it was passed down from one generation to another, now it stand in front of us. When it comes to the belief, I must refer to the festival, which has strong relationship with the tradition. Such as the Christmas, the Thanksgiving Day, etc. all these festivals originate from the old tradition. In our modern life, every nation has its own method to celebrate those old festivals, just a way to memorize our forefather. The old thoughts are prevalent in our modern life.有些初始假设我觉的不是很有道理,象我个人就不觉传统和现代化分别代表着精神和物质层面,考虑从别的角度能不能说理

深入的话,可以说一下,在传统与现代化冲突时,人们应该如何抉择

To sum up, every common nature in the world has the relationship with the material and spirit-modernization and tradition, both two parts are important to us, if they can supplement to each other, our life will become more and more pleasant.